智力游戏— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中时态使用不准确，且句子结构较为混乱，建议使用过去时描述童年经历，并简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I played puzzles in my childhood and I really loved them. The most challenging puzzle I completed was a 100-piece cat puzzle illustrated by a famous Taiwanese artist named Caught Jimmy.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用连贯的句子并正确使用时态，同时避免口语化的填充词，使表达更准确。

示例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored. For example, during my childhood, I often did puzzles after my midterm exams or on weekends when I was alone.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复，并清楚表达原因。

示例: I prefer word puzzles because I enjoy figuring out the correct words or letters. Number puzzles are more difficult for me since I'm not very good at math.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议简化句子结构，使用连贯的连接词，并明确表达观点和理由。

示例: Yes, I believe it is good for older people to do puzzles because it helps them think clearly and improve their memory by exercising their brains regularly.

× Yes, I do play puzzle in my childhood and I actually love doing puzzles an the most pieces I've done by myself is an 100 piece of a cat and the illustrator is caught Jimmy which is very famous in Taiwan.

✓ Yes, I did play puzzles in my childhood and I actually love doing puzzles. The most pieces I've done by myself is a 100-piece cat puzzle, and the illustrator is Caut Jimmy, who is very famous in Taiwan.

“puzzle”应为复数“puzzles”，因为指的是多次玩拼图游戏。数字“100”前应使用冠词“a”，且“piece”应与数字连写为复合形容词“100-piece”。“caught Jimmy”应为人名“Caut Jimmy”。此外，时态应与过去时间“childhood”一致，使用过去时“did play”。

× Yes, I do play puzzle in my childhood and I actually love doing puzzles an the most pieces I've done by myself is an 100 piece of a cat and the illustrator is caught Jimmy which is very famous in Taiwan.

✓ Yes, I did play puzzles in my childhood and I actually loved doing puzzles. The most pieces I've done by myself is a 100-piece cat puzzle, and the illustrator is Caut Jimmy, who is very famous in Taiwan.

“in my childhood”表示过去时间，动词应使用过去时态，“do play”应改为“did play”，“love”应改为“loved”。

× Yes, I do play puzzle in my childhood and I actually love doing puzzles an the most pieces I've done by myself is an 100 piece of a cat and the illustrator is caught Jimmy which is very famous in Taiwan.

✓ Yes, I did play puzzles during my childhood and I actually loved doing puzzles. The most pieces I've done by myself is a 100-piece cat puzzle, and the illustrator is Caut Jimmy, who is very famous in Taiwan.

“in my childhood”应改为“during my childhood”，更符合英语习惯表达时间段。

× I do puzzles when I'm feeling bored. From for example when I was in a childhood, I usually do puzzles after midterm. Alright. In the weekends when I have to play with myself alone.

✓ I do puzzles when I'm feeling bored. For example, when I was a child, I usually did puzzles after midterms. Also, on weekends when I have to play by myself alone.

“in a childhood”错误，应为“when I was a child”。“midterm”应复数“midterms”，表示多次考试。

× I do puzzles when I'm feeling bored. From for example when I was in a childhood, I usually do puzzles after midterm. Alright. In the weekends when I have to play with myself alone.

✓ I do puzzles when I'm feeling bored. For example, when I was a child, I usually did puzzles after midterms. Also, on weekends when I have to play by myself alone.

描述过去习惯动作时，动词应使用过去时，“do puzzles”应改为“did puzzles”。

× I do puzzles when I'm feeling bored. From for example when I was in a childhood, I usually do puzzles after midterm. Alright. In the weekends when I have to play with myself alone.

✓ I do puzzles when I'm feeling bored. For example, when I was a child, I usually did puzzles after midterms. Also, on weekends when I have to play by myself alone.

“In the weekends”应改为“on weekends”，表示时间的正确介词。

× In the weekends when I have to play with myself alone.

✓ On weekends when I have to play by myself alone.

“play with myself”不符合英语习惯，应为“play by myself”，表示独自玩耍。

× I like doing word puzzles more. And because I find it very fun figuring out which words or which alphabets you need to put inside an number. Puzzles is more difficult for me because I'm not really good at math to be honest.

✓ I like doing word puzzles more because I find it very fun figuring out which words or which letters you need to put inside a number. Number puzzles are more difficult for me because I'm not really good at math, to be honest.

“alphabets”应为“letters”，因为字母是不可数名词的复数形式。前面“an number”应为“a number”。“Puzzles is”主谓不一致，应为“Number puzzles are”。

× Puzzles is more difficult for me because I'm not really good at math to be honest.

✓ Number puzzles are more difficult for me because I'm not really good at math, to be honest.

主语“puzzles”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而非“is”。

× Yes I do think so and I also think that old people should do puzzles more often because this can make them think and make them recall what he they have learned an it really helps exercising their brain and help memorizing things in their daily lives.

✓ Yes, I do think so, and I also think that old people should do puzzles more often because this can make them think and help them recall what they have learned. It really helps exercise their brain and helps memorize things in their daily lives.

“he they”应为“they”，代词错误。动词“helps exercising”应改为“helps exercise”，动词不定式形式。

× ... and help memorizing things in their daily lives.

✓ ... and helps memorize things in their daily lives.

“help memorizing”应为“help memorize”，动词原形用法。