家乡— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi số nhiều. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: My hometown is a beautiful city in Vietnam. It is quite modern and offers many facilities such as shopping centers, cinemas, and hospitals.

建议: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng, tránh các câu không hoàn chỉnh và sử dụng từ nối để liên kết ý. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hơn về những điểm bạn thích và tránh những câu không rõ nghĩa.

示例: I really like the famous landmark in my city, Ho Chi Minh Square, because it combines modern and classical architecture. Moreover, the people here are friendly and kind, which makes the city welcoming.

建议: Bạn cần sử dụng thì hiện tại hoàn thành cho câu hỏi về khoảng thời gian và chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều. Hãy trả lời đầy đủ và rõ ràng hơn.

示例: I have lived there for 20 years with my family.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh dùng đại từ không phù hợp. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

示例: I think my hometown is a good place for young people because they can find jobs easily and have many opportunities to develop their careers.

× I come from the city which is one of the beautiful city in Vietnam.

✓ I come from the city which is one of the beautiful cities in Vietnam.

The noun 'city' should be plural 'cities' because it refers to one among many cities, so the plural form is required here.

× My city is quite modern and helps many facilities such as shopping, cinema and hospital.

✓ My city is quite modern and has many facilities such as shopping centers, cinemas, and hospitals.

The verb 'helps' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'has' to indicate possession. Also, 'shopping', 'cinema', and 'hospital' should be plural and more specific (e.g., 'shopping centers', 'cinemas', 'hospitals').

× I really like most famous landscape in my city such as Ho Chi Minh Square. Homeless. My city is a boat. Modern and classical. People living here are friendly, kind and.

✓ I really like the most famous landscape in my city, such as Ho Chi Minh Square. My city is a blend of modern and classical styles. People living here are friendly and kind.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. 'Homeless' and 'My city is a boat' are unclear and incorrect. The correction combines ideas into complete sentences and clarifies meaning.

× I lives in there for 20 year.

✓ I have lived there for 20 years.

The subject 'I' requires the base form 'live' or present perfect 'have lived' for duration. Also, 'year' should be plural 'years' to indicate time span.

× I lives in there for 20 year.

✓ I have lived there for 20 years.

The preposition 'in' is correct, but the verb form and plural noun need correction as explained above.

× I live with my family.

✓ I live with my family.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× I think my hometown is a good place for young people because they got a living here either now and they can get more opportunities to improve your jobs.

✓ I think my hometown is a good place for young people because they are living here now and can get more opportunities to improve their jobs.

The verb 'got' should be present continuous 'are living' to indicate current action. Also, 'your jobs' should be 'their jobs' to match the subject 'they'. The word 'either' is unnecessary and removed.