家乡— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e clear and grammatically correct sentence use korun. Apnar hometown er location bistarito vabe bolun, ebong sentence gulo natural hote hobe. Apni 'select city' er jaygay specific city name bolte paren. Example: 'My hometown is Rangpur, which is located in the northern part of Bangladesh. It is a beautiful and busy city that many people visit.'

示例: My hometown is Rangpur, which is located in the northern part of Bangladesh. It is a beautiful and busy city that many people visit.

建议: Apni answer e clear topic sentence den, tarpor specific karon ba memories er kotha bolun. Sentence gulo shothik grammar e hote hobe ebong linking words use korun. Example: 'I like my hometown because it holds many important memories for me. For instance, I spent my childhood there and have many happy moments with my family.'

示例: I like my hometown because it holds many important memories for me. For instance, I spent my childhood there and have many happy moments with my family.

建议: Apni proshner uttor direct den ebong shothik grammar use korun. Apnar thakar somoy spasto vabe bolun. Example: 'I have lived in my hometown for all my life, which is about 16 years. My father has also lived there for the same period.'

示例: I have lived in my hometown for all my life, which is about 16 years. My father has also lived there for the same period.

建议: Apni answer e clear topic sentence den, tarpor specific jayga gulo bolun ebong linking words use korun. Grammar shothik korun. Example: 'Yes, my hometown is a good place for young people because it has many facilities such as theaters, cinemas, shopping centers, and parks. Young people enjoy spending their free time there and can expand their social circle.'

示例: Yes, my hometown is a good place for young people because it has many facilities such as theaters, cinemas, shopping centers, and parks. Young people enjoy spending their free time there and can expand their social circle.

× My hometown is select city in the near of Bangladesh, north side in Bangladesh.

✓ My hometown is a selected city near Bangladesh, on the north side of Bangladesh.

The phrase 'in the near of Bangladesh' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'near Bangladesh'. Also, 'north side in Bangladesh' should be 'on the north side of Bangladesh'. Use 'a' before 'selected city' to indicate one city.

× It is very beautiful city in Bangladesh and very busy or visit my city.

✓ It is a very beautiful city in Bangladesh and very busy with visitors.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'very beautiful city'. The phrase 'very busy or visit my city' is unclear; it should be 'very busy with visitors' to express that many people visit the city.

× I like my hometown because my important best moment are. Related in my city and very important memories and related my city and very important.

✓ I like my hometown because I have important and best moments related to my city, which are very important memories.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured to express the idea that the student has important memories related to the city.

× My bone in my hometown city is select and my father are living in maximum 16 year in city.

✓ I was born in my hometown city, which is selected, and my father has been living there for a maximum of 16 years.

'My bone' should be 'I was born'. 'Are living in maximum 16 year' is incorrect; it should be 'has been living there for a maximum of 16 years'. Prepositions and verb forms are corrected accordingly.

× Yes, many good place in our city such as a theater hall, cinema and many shopping center and park also there and young people I enjoy there are free time and expanding.

✓ Yes, there are many good places in our city such as a theater hall, cinema, many shopping centers, and parks. Young people enjoy their free time there and are expanding their experiences.

'Many good place' should be 'many good places' to match plural form. 'Shopping center and park' should be plural. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.