工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免句子结构不完整和语法错误，例如第二句应改为完整句子。同时，回答应更简洁，避免重复表达。

示例: I am a fourth-year student majoring in Chinese language education. I enjoy teaching because it is both rewarding and enjoyable. My ultimate goal is to become a professional teacher, and I am working hard to achieve it.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“taken”应为“have taken”。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意时态一致。

示例: I am not currently working at a school since I have two years left in my studies. However, I have taken some part-time teaching and tutorial classes during my spare time.

建议: 回答较为冗长且重复，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免重复表达“proud”。

示例: I really enjoy teaching because it allows me to communicate with my students. When they respond to my questions and enjoy the lessons, I feel very proud. Although teaching is challenging, it is also very enjoyable.

建议: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更自然，同时注意“tutorial center”前加冠词。

示例: When I conduct my tutorial classes, I prefer doing them at home rather than at a tutorial center because I have more time to prepare my materials and feel more relaxed working at home.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和句子结构不完整，建议分句表达并注意时态一致，使内容更清晰。

示例: I plan to focus more on my major studies and take the Pu Tong Hua examination in the coming years. After completing the exam and my final year project, I will be ready to become a teacher.

× Because when I am teaching, I found that the process is very enjoyable and rewarding.

✓ Because when I was teaching, I found that the process was very enjoyable and rewarding.

这里描述的是过去的经历，应该使用过去时态。'am teaching' 应改为 'was teaching'，'is' 应改为 'was'，以保持时态一致。

× I still have two more years to study so I'm not working in any school, but I did some part time teaching and taken some tutorial classes in my spare time.

✓ I still have two more years to study so I'm not working in any school, but I did some part time teaching and took some tutorial classes in my spare time.

这里描述的是过去完成的动作，'taken' 是过去分词，应该用过去式 'took' 与 'did' 保持时态一致。

× I can communicate with my student and when I see my student enjoy my teaching and then they will actually answer my question.

✓ I can communicate with my students and when I see my students enjoy my teaching and then they will actually answer my questions.

'student' 和 'question' 应该用复数形式，因为这里指的是多个学生和多个问题。

× So after I completed my examination as well was finished my final year project and I'm ready to be a teacher.

✓ So after I complete my examination as well as finish my final year project, I will be ready to be a teacher.

这里描述的是未来计划，应该使用一般现在时表示将来（时间状语从句），并且句子结构不完整，'was finished' 应改为 'finish'，并且主句时态应为将来时 'will be ready'。