工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为直接，但缺少细节和连贯性。可以增加一些关于专业或学习经历的具体信息，使回答更丰富自然。

示例: I'm currently a student at Zhongshan Medical University in Taiwan, where I am majoring in nursing. I find my studies very engaging and challenging, which motivates me to work hard.

建议: 回答清晰表达了原因，但句子结构稍显简单。可以使用连接词使表达更流畅，并增加具体细节。

示例: I'm not working at the moment because I am still a student; therefore, I prefer to focus all my time and energy on my studies instead of taking a part-time job.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误，缺乏连贯性。应直接回答问题并补充理由，避免简单否定。

示例: I don't have a job currently, so I can't say if it's a good place to work. However, I hope to find a workplace that offers a positive and supportive environment.

建议: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，有语法错误。建议简化句子并使用连接词提高流畅度。

示例: Since I don't have a job right now, I can't say if I would like the place where I work. However, I hope to find a job in a friendly and supportive environment, which I believe I would enjoy.

建议: 回答表达了计划，但有口语填充词“umm”，且句子结构稍显重复。建议去除填充词，使用更连贯的表达。

示例: After completing my master's degree in human resources in the UK, I plan to return to Taiwan and secure a good job in my field.

× I say I don't have a work.

✓ I say I don't have a job.

work 是不可数名词，表示工作这个概念，不用冠词 a。job 是可数名词，表示具体的工作岗位，可以用 a job。这里应使用 job 而不是 a work。

× I think I need to put more effort and time on studying rather than having a part time job.

✓ I think I need to put more effort and time into studying rather than having a part-time job.

动词短语是 put effort/time into，介词应为 into 而不是 on。

× I hope I can come back to Taiwan after masters degree and have a really good job.

✓ I hope I can come back to Taiwan after my master's degree and have a really good job.

master's degree 前需要加所有格 my，表示“我的硕士学位”。

× I hope I have a good job umm after I finish my master's degree in the UK about human resources.

✓ I hope I have a good job after I finish my master's degree in human resources in the UK.

about human resources 用法不当，应该直接用 in human resources 表示专业方向。

× I don't have a job at the moment, so I can say if it is the place where I like it or not.

✓ I don't have a job at the moment, so I can't say if it is a place I like or not.

句子中表达否定含义，应使用 can't say 而不是 can say；同时，it 在此句中多余，应去掉。