工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且有重复和冗余。建议简洁明了地表达职业和工作时间，避免重复。

示例: I work as an English teacher at a training center. My classes usually take place after school and on weekends, so I work when others are resting.

建议: 回答语法错误较多，表达不流畅，且信息不具体。建议直接说明工作地点并简要描述工作内容。

示例: I work at a training center where we help students improve their English speaking skills.

建议: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇描述工作环境，并说明原因。

示例: Yes, it is a good place to work because the atmosphere is positive and the students are always full of energy, which makes me feel motivated.

建议: 回答中存在大量语法和词汇错误，表达混乱。建议简洁明了地表达对工作环境的喜爱，并用具体细节支持观点。

示例: Yes, I really like my workplace because my colleagues are friendly and the students are energetic. This positive environment helps me enjoy my job every day.

建议: 回答语法错误严重，表达不连贯，信息不明确。建议清晰表达未来计划，说明原因和目标。

示例: To be honest, I'm not sure yet, but I might go abroad to study further. I want to improve my teaching skills so I can provide better lessons to my students.

× I work as an English teacher in the training sound Sir and my job always begins at after school or on weekends so.

✓ I work as an English teacher in the training center and my job always begins after school or on weekends.

句中'sound Sir'应为'training center'，且'at after school'中'at'多余，应去掉。'training center'是单数名词，需保持单数形式。

× So yes, I walk when others are resting.

✓ So yes, I work when others are resting.

'walk'应为'work'，这里是动词拼写错误，影响句意。

× I walk in the training center and is the place that they help students are to develop the starting skills.

✓ I work in the training center and it is the place where they help students develop their speaking skills.

'walk'应为'work'，'is the place'前应加主语'it'，'are to develop'结构错误，应为'develop'，'starting skills'应为'speaking skills'。

× Yes, I think so becaused he completes atmosphere is quite goose and the student sees all of the students always have full of energy as they're making me feel young.

✓ Yes, I think so because the complete atmosphere is quite good and all of the students always have full energy which makes me feel young.

'becaused'应为'because'，'he completes atmosphere'应为'the complete atmosphere'，'goose'应为'good'，'student sees'多余，应删去，'have full of energy'应为'have full energy'。

× Yes, definitely yes. I think this is good place to walk as I have searched the most vehicles are quite positive and friendly.

✓ Yes, definitely yes. I think this is a good place to work as I have seen most people are quite positive and friendly.

'good place to walk'应为'good place to work'，'searched'用错，应为'seen'，'vehicles'用错，应为'people'。

× I often see their sins are full of energy which makes me feel motivated in the Yum.

✓ I often see their signs are full of energy which makes me feel motivated in the room.

'sins'应为'signs'，'Yum'应为'room'，词汇错误。

× This lovely environments helps me enjoy my work every day.

✓ This lovely environment helps me enjoy my work every day.

'environments'应为单数'environment'，因为这里指的是整体环境。

× To be honest, I'm not quite sure maybe I will go to go abroad to have afforded to study because I sang in the teaching.

✓ To be honest, I'm not quite sure. Maybe I will go abroad to afford to study because I am interested in teaching.

'have afforded to study'结构错误，应为'afford to study'，'sang in the teaching'应为'am interested in teaching'，表达不正确。

× Math says issues that improves and I for me as a teacher I shoot learn more and give my students are more details and more information.

✓ Math teaching issues that improve, and for me as a teacher, I should learn more and give my students more details and more information.

'Math says issues'应为'Math teaching issues'，'improves'应为'improve'，'shoot'应为'should'，'students are more details'应为'students more details'，语法错误。