工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy chia câu thành các phần rõ ràng để người nghe dễ hiểu hơn.

示例: I'm currently working as a teaching assistant at an International School. My main responsibilities include helping students understand the teacher's instructions and organizing parent meetings to improve communication. I really enjoy my job here.

建议: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh những câu không liên quan hoặc không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc.

示例: I work at an International School near my house, which makes commuting very convenient. Also, I enjoy working in an international environment because it helps me meet people from different cultures.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm, đồng thời sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể và chính xác hơn để làm rõ ý của bạn.

示例: Yes, it is a great place to work because the school offers many holidays, which allows me to spend quality time with my family. Additionally, the school provides excellent employee benefits like health insurance and opportunities for professional development.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý với nhau bằng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

示例: Yes, I really like the place where I work. The building is equipped with the latest technology, and the students are very kind and respectful towards the teachers. This makes me feel very comfortable and happy working here.

建议: Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy trình bày kế hoạch tương lai một cách cụ thể và logic.

示例: In the future, I want to become an English teacher. To achieve this goal, I believe mastering English is essential. Therefore, I am currently taking an IELTS course and preparing for the IELTS exam to improve my English speaking skills.

× My main job responsible as he include helping student to understands teachers instruction in class and also organizing some parent meetings perform conference to help connect them understand each other.

✓ My main job responsibilities include helping students understand teachers' instructions in class and also organizing some parent meetings and conferences to help connect them and understand each other.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'responsible as he' is incorrect and should be 'responsibilities'; 'student' should be plural 'students'; 'understands' should be base form 'understand' after 'help'; 'teachers instruction' needs possessive form 'teachers''; 'perform conference' is incorrect, should be 'and conferences'; 'help connect them understand each other' needs 'and' and 'to' for clarity. The corrections fix verb forms, pluralization, possessives, and sentence structure.

× As mentioned earlier, now working at an International School and I love working here, firstly because it nears my house so it's quite convenience for me to commute and secondly looking in an international environment. Help me, help me to make lots of rain. Four in the frame.

✓ As mentioned earlier, I am now working at an International School and I love working here, firstly because it is near my house so it's quite convenient for me to commute and secondly because I am working in an international environment.

The original sentence lacks a subject in 'now working'; 'nears' should be 'is near'; 'convenience' should be adjective 'convenient'; 'looking in an international environment' is incorrect, should be 'working in an international environment'; the last sentence 'Help me, help me to make lots of rain. Four in the frame.' is unclear and likely irrelevant, so it is omitted. The corrections fix sentence structure, verb forms, and word choice.

× We had a loss of holiday in this school which allowed to me to spend quality time with my family.

✓ We have a lot of holidays at this school which allow me to spend quality time with my family.

'a loss of holiday' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of holidays' to indicate many holidays; 'allowed to me' is incorrect, should be 'allow me'; tense changed to present to match context. The correction fixes quantifier usage and verb form.

× An additionally the school has excellent employee policies such as health benefit and professional development opportunities so it is really highly recommended.

✓ Additionally, the school has excellent employee policies such as health benefits and professional development opportunities, so it is highly recommended.

'An additionally' is incorrect, should be 'Additionally'; 'health benefit' should be plural 'health benefits'; a comma is added before 'so'; 'really highly recommended' is redundant, 'highly recommended' suffices. The correction fixes preposition and article usage and improves sentence flow.

× Gear, of course I'll I working in here first it is. The building where I work equipped with the last It's a latest technology and also. The students here are very kind and respectful toward teacher, so I. Which I I feel very adorable working here.

✓ Yes, of course I like working here. First, the building where I work is equipped with the latest technology. Also, the students here are very kind and respectful toward teachers, so I feel very comfortable working here.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear: 'Gear' should be 'Yes'; 'I'll I working in here first it is' is incorrect, corrected to 'I like working here'; 'equipped with the last It's a latest technology' corrected to 'equipped with the latest technology'; 'respectful toward teacher' corrected to 'respectful toward teachers'; 'I feel very adorable' is incorrect, 'adorable' replaced with 'comfortable'. The corrections fix sentence structure, verb forms, and word choice.

× In the future, I want to become an English teacher and with the seeing that become seeing that I need to become an English teacher, mastering English is essential.

✓ In the future, I want to become an English teacher and seeing that, I need to master English, which is essential.

The phrase 'with the seeing that become seeing that' is incorrect and redundant; simplified to 'seeing that'; 'mastering English is essential' is correct but better phrased as 'I need to master English, which is essential'. The correction improves clarity and tense usage.

× That is the reason why I'm taking the iOS course and also the ILS exam to improve my speaking, I mean my English skill.

✓ That is the reason why I'm taking the iOS course and also the ILS exam to improve my speaking, I mean my English skills.

'English skill' should be plural 'English skills' to refer to overall ability; otherwise sentence is correct. The correction fixes noun number agreement.