Traffic— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and complete your answer. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unfinished sentences and minor grammar errors (e.g., use 'there are' not 'there's' for plural).

Ví dụ: Yes. There are many pedestrian crossings in my neighborhood because several primary schools are nearby, so children can cross the road safely. In addition, the crossings often have traffic lights and crossing guards, which improves safety for students and parents.

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Begin with a clear statement of the problem, then give specific solutions using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'therefore'). Correct noun/verb forms ('narrowness of the streets', 'heavy traffic', 'sometimes causes', 'authorities to'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. The narrowness of many streets and the heavy traffic at peak hours sometimes causes serious problems for residents. Therefore, I would like the authorities to widen key roads and restrict freight container traffic in residential areas. This would reduce congestion and make the streets safer for pedestrians.

× Of course, in my neighborhood it's common to see pedestrian crossings because there are many primary schools.

✓ Of course, in my neighborhood it's common to see pedestrian crossings because there are many primary schools.

No correction needed for this sentence; articles are used correctly. However, keep an eye on spacing errors elsewhere (not a grammar issue listed).

× It will be easier for children to cross the road safely without their parents.

✓ It is easier for children to cross the road safely without their parents.

The original uses future 'will be' which is unnecessary when stating a general truth about safety; this is a sentence structure/tense choice issue. Use simple present 'is' for general facts. Suggestion: use simple present when describing habitual or general situations.

× And there's also.

✓ There are also other safety features.

The original is an incomplete sentence (sentence structure error). Complete the idea by adding a noun phrase after 'also'. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by ensuring subject and verb and a complete idea are present.

× Yes, due to the narrow of the street and the low heavy traffic at peak hours is sometime causes some serious problem.

✓ Yes, due to the narrowness of the street and the heavy traffic at peak hours, it sometimes causes serious problems.

Multiple issues: 'narrow of the street' is incorrect; use the noun 'narrowness' or adjective with article 'the narrow street' (adjective/adverb use). 'low heavy traffic' is contradictory; likely 'heavy traffic' is intended. 'is sometime causes' mixes forms; correct is 'it sometimes causes'. Also use plural 'problems'. Suggestions: use correct noun forms ('narrowness') or rephrase to 'the narrow street', ensure adverbs like 'sometimes' are placed before main verb, and match singular/plural appropriately.

× I would like the government and authority have a plan to expand the street and restrict the freight containers travel on residence areas.

✓ I would like the government and authorities to have a plan to expand the streets and to restrict freight containers from traveling in residential areas.

Problems: 'government and authority' should be 'government and authorities' (plural) or 'the government and the authorities'; this is a noun form/plural issue. Missing 'to' before 'have' after 'would like' (verb pattern requires 'to' + infinitive). 'freight containers travel on residence areas' is incorrect: use gerund/infinitive patterns and correct noun forms: 'restrict freight containers from traveling in residential areas' or 'restrict freight-container traffic in residential areas'. Suggestions: use 'would like someone to do something' structure, pluralize 'authority' to 'authorities' or use 'the authority', and use correct phrases 'residential areas'.