Party— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了不喜欢派对的观点，但语言不够自然，句子结构有些混乱，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: No, I don't like parties because they are usually very noisy. In my daily life, I prefer quiet environments and I don't enjoy chatting with many people. Therefore, I usually avoid attending family or friends' parties.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且内容不够具体。建议改进语法，清晰表达观点，并详细说明原因。

Ví dụ: As I mentioned, I didn't like parties when I was a kid. I only had a birthday party once a year, but I didn't enjoy it because people would put cake on my face. Although I disliked it, they said it was a traditional custom.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和用词错误，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的语法和词汇，清楚描述事件，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I organized my 18th birthday party last year. However, it was not very successful because some friends put birthday cake on my face. This made me feel angry and embarrassed, and I lost my temper for a moment.

× No, I don't like party because I think party is very noisy and in my daily life I don't like to.

✓ No, I don't like parties because I think parties are very noisy and in my daily life I don't like to.

这里的“party”应该用复数形式“parties”，因为说的是一般的派对，不是特指一个派对。英语中表示一般情况时，通常用复数形式。

× I don't like chatting with other people so I will avoid joining the party such as my family party and friend party.

✓ I don't like chatting with other people so I will avoid joining parties such as my family parties and friends' parties.

“party”应使用复数形式“parties”，因为指的是多次不同的派对。此外，“friend party”应改为“friends' parties”，表示朋友们的派对，所有格形式更准确。

× As I mentioned, I don't like party when so when I was a kid, I only have a birthday party every year, but I still don't like the birthday party because when I had a birthday party they always make some cats on my face.

✓ As I mentioned, I didn't like parties when I was a kid, I only had a birthday party every year, but I still didn't like the birthday party because when I had a birthday party they always made some cats on my face.

这里描述过去的情况，动词时态应使用过去式。“don't like”改为“didn't like”，“have”改为“had”，“make”改为“made”。

× As I mentioned, I don't like party when so when I was a kid, I only have a birthday party every year, but I still don't like the birthday party because when I had a birthday party they always make some cats on my face.

✓ As I mentioned, I didn't like parties when I was a kid, I only had a birthday party every year, but I still didn't like the birthday party because when I had a birthday party they always made some cats on my face.

“party”应使用复数形式“parties”，因为指的是一般的派对。

× they always make some cats on my face.

✓ they always put some cats on my face.

这里“make cats on my face”表达不正确，应该用“put cats on my face”表示把东西放在脸上。

× they always say it is traditional things for people to do this.

✓ they always say it is a traditional thing for people to do this.

“things”应改为单数“thing”，因为前面用的是“it is”，表示单数。

× Yes, I organized my 18th birthday party last year. However, I don't think it was a very successful because some of my friends play from Put Birthday cat on my face, which made me feel quite angry and quite embarrassed.

✓ Yes, I organized my 18th birthday party last year. However, I don't think it was very successful because some of my friends played putting birthday cats on my face, which made me feel quite angry and quite embarrassed.

“play from Put Birthday cat on my face”表达不正确，应该用过去式“played putting birthday cats on my face”。“successful”前不需要冠词“a”。

× some of my friends play from Put Birthday cat on my face

✓ some of my friends played putting birthday cats on my face

“cat”应为复数“cats”，因为是多次涂抹。

× As a result, I lost my temper for a moment with spawn.

✓ As a result, I lost my temper for a moment with them.

“spawn”用法错误，应该用代词“them”指代朋友们。