Party— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is good and natural, but try to avoid redundancy and keep your response concise. For example, instead of saying 'I love listening to music and dancing as well as it is a great way to unwind yourself', you can say 'I enjoy music and dancing because they help me relax after a hectic week.' Also, try to use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy parties because they are a great way to socialise and meet people from different backgrounds. Moreover, I enjoy music and dancing as they help me relax after a hectic week.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to complete your thoughts and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas. For example, instead of 'And I think by doing that small collaborations we are strengthening our bond and making the.', you can say 'I think that having small gatherings helps strengthen our bonds and creates a warm atmosphere.'

Ví dụ: When I was a kid, we used to have parties occasionally on major events like birthdays and New Year. Instead of big parties, we had small gatherings with family and friends, which were more comforting. I think that having such small gatherings helps strengthen our bonds and creates a warm atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. For example, instead of repeating 'because', you can say 'I prefer attending parties rather than organizing them since organizing is hectic and time-consuming; however, I have helped my friends with party preparations.'

Ví dụ: I have never organized a party myself because I prefer attending them, as organizing can be hectic and time-consuming. However, I have helped my friends with party preparations before.

× Additionally, I love listening to music and dancing as well as it is a great way to unwind yourself after a hectic week.

✓ Additionally, I love listening to music and dancing as well because it is a great way to unwind yourself after a hectic week.

The phrase 'as well as' is incorrectly used here to mean 'because'. 'As well as' is used to add information, not to indicate reason. The correct conjunction to express reason is 'because'.

× When I was a kid, we used to have party occasionally on major events like birthday and new year.

✓ When I was a kid, we used to have parties occasionally on major events like birthdays and New Year.

The word 'party' should be plural 'parties' because it refers to multiple occasions. Also, 'birthday' and 'new year' should be pluralized as 'birthdays' and capitalized as 'New Year' since they refer to specific events.

× Instead of big parties, we used to have small gathering of families and friends which is more comforting.

✓ Instead of big parties, we used to have small gatherings of families and friends which are more comforting.

'Gathering' should be plural 'gatherings' to match the plural subject 'parties'. Also, the verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'gatherings'.

× And I think by doing that small collaborations we are strengthening our bond and making the.

✓ And I think by doing those small collaborations, we are strengthening our bond and making it stronger.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'That small collaborations' is incorrect; it should be 'those small collaborations' to match plural. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding 'making it stronger' completes the thought.

× Well, I have never organized a party because I like to attend parties more than to organize it because it is a very hectic and time consuming process.

✓ Well, I have never organized a party because I like attending parties more than organizing them because it is a very hectic and time-consuming process.

The verbs after 'like' and 'than' should be in the gerund form ('attending', 'organizing') for parallel structure. Also, 'organize it' should be 'organizing them' to refer to 'parties' plural. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'.