Party— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise, ideally within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a reason or example.

Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy parties very much. I only attend them occasionally, usually for special occasions like birthdays or holidays.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too long and lacks clear structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, be specific and clear about the frequency and reasons. Try to divide your answer into a topic sentence and supporting details.

Ví dụ: When I was a kid, I used to attend my friends' birthday parties about once a month. I also went to wedding ceremonies quite often. However, now I rarely attend parties because I receive fewer invitations and have fewer friends.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Make sure to answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and provide specific details about the party you organized. Avoid unclear phrases like 'border parties' or 'body party'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy organizing parties. Recently, I threw a birthday party for myself and invited my friends. We had a great time celebrating together.

× Will be almost not into parties.

✓ I am almost not into parties.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Will be' as a modal verb to express a present preference, which is incorrect. The correct form is 'I am' to indicate a current state or preference.

× I do an attend party occasionally in my body or any special occasions only.

✓ I attend parties occasionally, only on my birthday or special occasions.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and uses 'an attend' which is grammatically incorrect. The corrected sentence uses proper verb form 'attend' and corrects 'body' to 'birthday' and improves sentence clarity.

× When I was a kid I used to attend my friends birthday party I once a month also and also I used to attend wedding ceremonies at the time but now I rarely attend any party because I got less invitations and also I don't have enough friends.

✓ When I was a kid, I used to attend my friends' birthday parties once a month, and I also used to attend wedding ceremonies. But now, I rarely attend any parties because I get fewer invitations and I don't have enough friends.

The original sentence has tense inconsistencies and pluralization errors. 'Friends birthday party' should be plural possessive 'friends' birthday parties'. 'I got less invitations' should be 'I get fewer invitations' to match present tense and correct quantifier usage. The sentence is also run-on and needs punctuation for clarity.

× For what I love to organize parties, I specially through border parties.

✓ I love to organize parties, especially birthday parties.

The original sentence misuses 'For what' and 'through border parties' which are incorrect. 'Specialy' is misspelled and 'birthday' is misspelled as 'border'. The corrected sentence uses proper expressions and spelling.

× The other day I threw my body party to my friends and we had fun together.

✓ The other day, I threw a birthday party for my friends and we had fun together.

'Body party' is a misspelling of 'birthday party'. Also, 'threw my body party to my friends' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for'. The sentence is corrected for spelling and preposition use.