App— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details. Avoid redundancy (e.g. 'a load of apps' and 'many other app shopping apps') and correct singular/plural and article errors (e.g. 'one of the apps', 'an IELTS speaking app'). Use linking words like 'however' or 'recently' to show time reference.

Ví dụ: Recently I use many apps on my phone, such as Lyricsia and Aloo. However, lately I have mainly been using an IELTS speaking app to practice my speaking skills because it offers timed tests and model answers.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and then specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetitive phrases and correct grammar (e.g. 'I shop at any time of the day', 'I like shopping apps because...'). Limit to up to five sentences and add concrete examples or preferences (e.g. fashion, groceries).

Ví dụ: I'm usually interested in shopping apps because they make buying convenient. For example, I use fashion and grocery apps to compare prices and read reviews, so I can choose the best product quickly.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific methods using linking words like 'for example' or 'also'. Correct repetition and phrasing (e.g. 'I search on Google' and 'I check the App Store' rather than repeating 'always').

Ví dụ: I usually find new apps by searching on Google and browsing the App Store. For example, I read user reviews and top charts to discover popular or useful apps.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opening sentence about future preference, then add concise, specific reasons with linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Avoid repeating 'I love shopping' and reduce run-on sentences. Mention any new features or types of shopping apps you might try in future.

Ví dụ: In the future I would like to continue using shopping apps, especially ones with reliable reviews and price comparison tools. For example, I want to try apps that offer personalized recommendations and secure payment options so I can shop more efficiently.

× I have a load of apps in my phone, for example Lyricsia, Aloo, GAS and many other app shopping apps.

✓ I have a load of apps on my phone, for example Lyricsia, Aloo, GAS and many other shopping apps.

The count noun 'app' should be plural when referring to multiple items; 'app shopping apps' is redundant. Also preposition 'in' with 'phone' is nonstandard; use 'on my phone'. Replace redundant phrase with 'shopping apps'. Suggestions: say 'many other shopping apps' or 'many other apps'.

× But yeah for now recently I only use one of the app that is IELTS speaking app where I practice my speaking.

✓ But recently I only use one of the apps, which is an IELTS speaking app where I practice my speaking.

'One of the app' requires plural 'apps'; relative clause needs 'which is an IELTS speaking app'. Also use 'recently' rather than both 'for now recently'. Use article 'an' before 'IELTS speaking app'. Suggestions: 'But recently I only use one app: an IELTS speaking app.'

× I'm usually interested in shopping apps. I love shopping. I on every time of the day.

✓ I'm usually interested in shopping apps. I love shopping. I shop at any time of the day.

The phrase 'I on every time of the day' is ungrammatical and missing verb; use 'I shop at any time of the day' or 'I shop all the time'. Preposition 'at' is required with 'time of the day' and verb 'shop' must be used. Suggest: 'I shop at any time of the day.'

× I want to do shopping, I want to shop everything.

✓ I want to go shopping; I want to buy everything.

'Do shopping' is less natural in this context; use 'go shopping'. 'Shop everything' is incorrect; use 'buy everything' or 'shop for everything'. Also sentences should be connected with appropriate punctuation. Suggest: 'I want to go shopping; I want to buy everything.'

× I just like shopping apps.

✓ I just like shopping apps.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no quantifier error. No change needed.

× I always search on Google about the new apps and I always go to App Store, search for new different apps.

✓ I always search Google for new apps and I always go to the App Store to look for different apps.

Use 'search Google for' rather than 'search on Google about'. Use definite article 'the App Store' and infinitive 'to look for' or 'to search for'. 'New different apps' is redundant; use 'different apps' or 'new apps'. Suggest: 'I always search Google for new apps and go to the App Store to look for different apps.'

× So yeah, I found out those apps on app stores commonly.

✓ So yeah, I usually find those apps on app stores.

'Found out' suggests past completed action; context requires habitual present 'find'. Also 'app stores' is fine plural but 'commonly' placement is odd; use 'usually'. Suggest: 'I usually find those apps on app stores.'

× I would like to use shopping apps because honestly, I love shopping because I can shop online for several hours, I can compare the products, I can see the reviews, and I can shop comfortably on my couch.

✓ I would like to use shopping apps because honestly I love shopping; I can shop online for several hours, compare products, read reviews, and shop comfortably on my couch.

Sentence is mostly correct; simplify repeated 'I can' and 'because'. Use parallel verbs 'compare', 'read' without 'the' before 'products' and 'reviews'. Also punctuation: use semicolon or shorter clauses. Suggest: 'I can shop online for hours, compare products, read reviews, and shop comfortably on my couch.'