History— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Ví dụ: Yes, I have studied history since junior high school. I enjoy history classes because learning about how people lived in the past is very interesting to me.

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Ví dụ: I learn history mainly from my school classes. Additionally, I watch YouTube videos about the history of other countries, such as American history, which I find very interesting.

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Ví dụ: I believe learning history is very valuable because it helps us learn from past experiences. By understanding the mistakes people made before, we can avoid repeating them in the future. For example, studying historical conflicts teaches us the importance of peace.

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Ví dụ: Yes, I think learning history is very important because it helps us understand past mistakes and learn valuable lessons. Moreover, knowing the history of one's own country helps develop a sense of identity and pride. For example, learning about national heroes inspires patriotism.

× Yes, I studied at the history since I was in the junior high school and I pretty like the history class because I think that to learning how old people living is a really interesting thing.

✓ Yes, I have studied history since I was in junior high school and I pretty much like the history class because I think that learning how old people lived is a really interesting thing.

The sentence mixes past simple 'studied' with 'since' which requires present perfect 'have studied'. 'At the history' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'history'. 'To learning' is incorrect; it should be 'learning'. 'How old people living' should be 'how old people lived' to use past tense correctly.

× Yes, I studied at the history since I was in the junior high school and I pretty like the history class because I think that to learning how old people living is a really interesting thing.

✓ Yes, I have studied history since I was in junior high school and I pretty much like the history class because I think that learning how old people lived is a really interesting thing.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used before 'the history'; it should be omitted or replaced with 'have studied history'. Also, 'in the junior high school' is better as 'in junior high school' without 'the'.

× I think that to learning how old people living is a really interesting thing.

✓ I think that learning how old people lived is a really interesting thing.

'To learning' is incorrect; after 'think that' the verb should be in gerund form 'learning'. Also, 'people living' should be 'people lived' to correctly express past action.

× So I like history class and I think that they're really interesting for me.

✓ So I like history class and I think that it is really interesting for me.

'History class' is singular, so the pronoun should be singular 'it' instead of plural 'they'.

× I will learn the history from the class in the school and also I will look at some videos in YouTube because there are some of the people would make the videos about the special history about other countries like I were really interested in for example America's.

✓ I learn history in class at school and also watch some videos on YouTube because some people make videos about special history of other countries, for example, I am really interested in America's history.

Using 'will' for habitual actions is incorrect; present simple tense should be used. 'Look at some videos in YouTube' should be 'watch some videos on YouTube'. 'There are some of the people would make' is incorrect; it should be 'some people make'. 'I were' is incorrect; it should be 'I am'.

× I will learn the history from the class in the school and also I will look at some videos in YouTube because there are some of the people would make the videos about the special history about other countries like I were really interested in for example America's.

✓ I learn history in class at school and also watch some videos on YouTube because some people make videos about special history of other countries, for example, I am really interested in America's history.

'From the class in the school' is better as 'in class at school'. 'In YouTube' should be 'on YouTube'. 'About the special history about other countries' is redundant; better as 'about special history of other countries'.

× like I were really interested in for example America's.

✓ for example, I am really interested in America's history.

'I were' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I am' for present tense expressing current interest.

× I believe that learning history can is a very valuable because it allows us to learn from the experience from people in the past by understanding the mistakes by they made before we can avoid repeating them in the future.

✓ I believe that learning history is very valuable because it allows us to learn from the experiences of people in the past. By understanding the mistakes they made before, we can avoid repeating them in the future.

'Can is' is incorrect modal verb usage; 'is' alone suffices. 'From the experience from people' should be 'from the experiences of people'. 'By they made' is incorrect; it should be 'they made'.

× I believe that learning history can is a very valuable because it allows us to learn from the experience from people in the past by understanding the mistakes by they made before we can avoid repeating them in the future.

✓ I believe that learning history is very valuable because it allows us to learn from the experiences of people in the past. By understanding the mistakes they made before, we can avoid repeating them in the future.

'From the experience from people' is incorrect; it should be 'from the experiences of people'. Also, 'by understanding' is better separated into a new sentence for clarity.

× For example, studying historical conflicts can teach us the importance.

✓ For example, studying historical conflicts can teach us important lessons.

'Teach us the importance' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify what importance or lessons are taught.

× Yes, I think that it is quite important because it helps people understand the mistakes and lessons from past events, which can prevent us repeating the mistakes again.

✓ Yes, I think that it is quite important because it helps people understand the mistakes and lessons from past events, which can prevent us from repeating the mistakes again.

'Prevent us repeating' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prevent us from repeating'.

× Moreover, knowing the history of 1's own country is essential for developing the sense of identity and pride.

✓ Moreover, knowing the history of one's own country is essential for developing a sense of identity and pride.

'1's' is a typo and should be 'one's'. Also, 'the sense' is better as 'a sense' because it is a general feeling.