History— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，明确表达所学历史类型，并举具体例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have studied history. I majored in humanities, so I took courses in both Chinese and Western history, including American and European history. I find it challenging to remember all the important dates, especially about different dynasties, but I enjoy learning about historical events.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不流畅的问题。建议使用更自然的表达方式，清晰说明学习方法，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually learn history by listening carefully to my teachers during class. After class, I watch videos or read articles about topics I find difficult to understand, which helps me grasp the content better.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但有拼写错误和表达不够准确。建议注意用词准确性，避免拼写错误，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Learning history helps us understand how society has evolved from simple farming communities to modern societies with advanced technology. By studying these changes, we can appreciate our progress and learn important lessons to guide our future actions.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think learning history is very important, especially in China. It is a compulsory subject in junior and high school and plays a big role in exams. Moreover, history helps us understand current society and appreciate its development.

× I majored in humanity, so my courses hopefully both Chinese history and Western history, such as American and European history.

✓ I majored in humanities, so my courses hopefully include both Chinese history and Western history, such as American and European history.

“humanity”应为复数形式“humanities”，表示人文学科。

× I majored in humanity, so my courses hopefully both Chinese history and Western history, such as American and European history.

✓ I majored in humanities, so my courses hopefully include both Chinese history and Western history, such as American and European history.

“hopefully both Chinese history and Western history”缺少动词，应加上“include”使句子完整。

× there is a lot of detail information to the Portland resort.

✓ there is a lot of detailed information about the Portland resort.

“detail information”应为“detailed information”，且介词应为“about”而非“to”。

× there is a lot of detail information to the Portland resort.

✓ there is a lot of detailed information about the Portland resort.

介词“to”用错，应使用“about”表示“关于”。

× I sometimes struggle to date on sending families, which makes studying history quite challenging.

✓ I sometimes struggle to date outstanding families, which makes studying history quite challenging.

“date on sending families”表达不正确，应为“date outstanding families”，意为“确定杰出家族的年代”。

× I mean personally I learned history firstly by listening to what the teachers share about histories like what happened and which aspects and after class I would tend to watch find some videos or papers related to the things that I struggled understanding.

✓ I mean personally I learned history firstly by listening to what the teachers share about history, like what happened and which aspects, and after class I would tend to find some videos or papers related to the things that I struggled to understand.

“watch find”重复且不合适，应去掉“watch”；“struggled understanding”应为“struggled to understand”。

× I would tend to watch find some videos or papers related to the things that I struggled understanding.

✓ I would tend to find some videos or papers related to the things that I struggled to understand.

“struggled understanding”应使用不定式“to understand”，而非动名词形式。

× Learning history helped us understand how society has developed over time, from a simple farming community to mourning societies with advanced technologies.

✓ Learning history helps us understand how society has developed over time, from a simple farming community to modern societies with advanced technologies.

此处描述的是普遍事实，应使用一般现在时“helps”，且“mourning”应为“modern”，意为“现代的”。

× from a simple farming community to mourning societies with advanced technologies.

✓ from a simple farming community to modern societies with advanced technologies.

“mourning”意为“哀悼的”，应为“modern”，表示“现代的”。

× So I think by studying these changes, we can appreciate the process we've made and learn valuable lessons from the past and just know what we should do in the future.

✓ So I think by studying these changes, we can appreciate the progress we've made and learn valuable lessons from the past and know what we should do in the future.

“process”应为“progress”，表示“进步”；“just”在此句中多余，应去掉。

× Yes, I'm definitely running histories important and I'll say especially in China because it is included as one compulsory subjects throughout junior and high school and plays a significant role in our exams and assessments.

✓ Yes, I'm definitely running history is important and I'll say especially in China because it is included as one of the compulsory subjects throughout junior and high school and plays a significant role in our exams and assessments.

“running histories important”表达错误，应为“history is important”；“one compulsory subjects”应为“one of the compulsory subjects”。

× it is included as one compulsory subjects throughout junior and high school

✓ it is included as one of the compulsory subjects throughout junior and high school

“one compulsory subjects”中“subjects”应为复数，但前面有“one”，应改为“one of the compulsory subjects”。

× And additionally saying history allows us to learn about these days and appreciate the development of society.

✓ And additionally, studying history allows us to learn about these days and appreciate the development of society.

“saying history”应为“studying history”，表示“学习历史”。