Colours— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid unclear words (e.g. “perilous”). Provide one or two specific supporting details with linking words (because/so/for example). Keep answers within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: My favorite colour is red because it makes me feel confident. For example, when I wear red to events people often compliment me, so I usually choose red for important occasions.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then give 1–2 specific reasons. Use linking words like because and so. Correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and choose clearer phrases (e.g. “doesn’t suit my style” or “I don’t feel comfortable wearing it”).

Ví dụ: I dislike black more than other colours because it doesn’t suit my personal style. When I wear black I feel uncomfortable, so I prefer lighter colours instead.

Gợi ý: Answer directly: name the colours and then give a concise reason with specifics. Avoid irrelevant details (clothes type unless relevant) and correct plural/singular forms. Use linking words (for example/so) to make sentences coherent.

Ví dụ: Most of my friends prefer white and black. For example, they often wear white shirts and black trousers to the office because these colours look professional and are easy to match.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear statement about your current room colour and how it affects you. Then contrast it briefly with the colour you dislike, using linking words (however, but). Keep sentences grammatical and avoid filler words like “uh.”

Ví dụ: My room is painted white, which makes me feel calm and relaxed. However, a black room would make me uncomfortable because it would feel too dark and gloomy for me.

× When I wear this colour of a perilous then I got compliment from other which I feel proud of myself and I usually wear it.

✓ When I wear this colour I get compliments from others, which makes me feel proud, so I often wear it.

Prepositions and word choice were incorrect ('of a perilous' makes no sense). Tense and agreement also needed adjustment: use present simple for habitual action ('wear' -> 'wear', 'got' -> 'get'), plural nouns for countable items ('compliments', 'others'), and a clearer relative clause ('which makes me feel proud'). Suggestions: remove incorrect phrase, use present simple for habitual actions, use plural forms for countable nouns. 1 -> 11

× Well all colour are my favorite but if I talk about one colour which I dislike the most that is black colour because it is not suit according to my taste and when I wear I feel not comfortable with it.

✓ Well, all colours are my favourite, but if I have to pick one I dislike the most, it is black, because it does not suit my taste and I do not feel comfortable wearing it.

Missing commas and wrong articles/plural forms: 'all colour' -> 'all colours'; unnecessary 'that is' replaced by 'it is'; 'not suit' needs auxiliary and subject-verb agreement ('does not suit'); 'when I wear I feel not comfortable with it' rephrased to 'I do not feel comfortable wearing it'. Suggestions: use plural for general references, include auxiliary verbs for negatives, and keep natural clause order. 2 -> 22

× My friends who are very picky person and they have a unique choices and they often wear T-shirts and trouser when they go to the office and they often wear white and black colour.

✓ My friends are very picky people and have unique choices. They often wear T-shirts and trousers to the office, and they often choose white and black colours.

Subject-verb and number agreement errors: 'friends' requires plural noun 'people' not 'person'; 'a unique choices' mixes singular article with plural noun; 'trouser' -> 'trousers'; 'wear white and black colour' -> 'choose white and black colours'. Suggestions: ensure nouns agree in number with subjects, match articles to noun number, and split long sentence into clearer sentences. 27 -> Subject-verb agreement errors

× Currently my room is a colour white which makes me more comfortable and I feel relaxed there after watching the colour of a room.

✓ Currently my room is white, which makes me feel comfortable and relaxed when I look at the colour of the room.

Unnecessary phrase 'is a colour white' should be 'is white'; 'makes me more comfortable' better as 'makes me feel comfortable'; 'after watching the colour of a room' is awkward — use 'when I look at the colour of the room'. Suggestions: use simple adjective after 'is' for colours, and use natural verbs ('look at') for visual impressions. 17 -> Incorrect use of the definite article

× Uh, if I talk about uncomfortable in my room that is a black colour which is not suitable according my choice.

✓ If I talk about what makes me uncomfortable in my room, it is the colour black, which does not suit my taste.

Awkward phrasing and preposition omission: 'uncomfortable in my room' needs 'what makes me uncomfortable'; 'that is a black colour' -> 'it is the colour black'; 'according my choice' requires 'according to my taste' or 'suit my taste'. Suggestions: use 'according to' with 'taste' and restructure sentence to identify the subject clearly. 11 -> 11