Part 1
Giám khảo
What's your favorite colour?
Thí sinh
My favorite color is green because green simple lies nature and this color let me feel spring.
Giám khảo
What's the colour you dislike? Why?
Thí sinh
I dislike red because this color feel uncomfortable.
Giám khảo
What colours do your friends like most?
Thí sinh
My friends favorite like colours is black because I often see them dressed all in black.
Giám khảo
What colour makes you uncomfortable in your room?
Thí sinh
I may read uncomfortable in my room because I think red make me feel uncomfortable and uneasy.
What's your favorite colour?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中语法和表达不够准确,句子结构不完整,且用词不当。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并且补充具体原因。
Ví dụ: My favorite color is green because it reminds me of nature and makes me feel refreshed, like the arrival of spring.
What's the colour you dislike? Why?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且语法错误,缺少具体细节。建议用完整句子表达原因,并举例说明。
Ví dụ: I dislike the color red because it feels too intense and makes me feel uneasy in certain situations.
What colours do your friends like most?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不够自然,语法错误较多。建议简化句子并使用更准确的表达。
Ví dụ: Most of my friends like black because they often wear black clothes, which look stylish and versatile.
What colour makes you uncomfortable in your room?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误且表达重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并说明原因。
Ví dụ: The color red makes me uncomfortable in my room because it feels too bright and disturbing, which affects my relaxation.
× My favorite color is green because green simple lies nature and this color let me feel spring.
✓ My favorite color is green because green simply represents nature and this color lets me feel spring.
这里'simple'应为副词'simply',修饰动词'represents',且'simple lies'结构错误,应为'simply represents'。此外,'let'应与主语'this color'保持第三人称单数一致,改为'lets'。
× My favorite color is green because green simple lies nature and this color let me feel spring.
✓ My favorite color is green because green simply represents nature and this color lets me feel spring.
动词'let'的主语是单数'this color',动词应使用第三人称单数形式'lets'。
× I dislike red because this color feel uncomfortable.
✓ I dislike red because this color feels uncomfortable.
主语'this color'是第三人称单数,动词'feel'应改为第三人称单数形式'feels'。
× My friends favorite like colours is black because I often see them dressed all in black.
✓ My friends' favorite color is black because I often see them dressed all in black.
'friends'是复数所有格,需加撇号表示所有关系;'favorite like colours'结构不正确,应为'favorite color'。
× My friends favorite like colours is black because I often see them dressed all in black.
✓ My friends' favorite color is black because I often see them dressed all in black.
主语'singular',动词'is'正确,但前面名词短语需调整为单数形式。
× I may read uncomfortable in my room because I think red make me feel uncomfortable and uneasy.
✓ I feel uncomfortable in my room because I think red makes me feel uncomfortable and uneasy.
'may read uncomfortable'结构错误,应为'I feel uncomfortable';'make'应与主语'red'保持第三人称单数一致,改为'makes'。