Stories— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答に文法の誤りとスペルミスがあり、表現が不自然です。例えば、「Boden」は「boring」の誤りであり、過去の感情を表す際は過去形を使うべきです。また、回答が短く、詳細な説明が不足しています。より自然で効果的な回答を目指しましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't enjoy stories when I was a child because I found them boring. Instead, I preferred playing outside with my friends.

Gợi ý: 時制の一致が不十分で、「love」は過去形の「loved」にすべきです。また、「helpful to feel stories」という表現は不自然で、具体的にどのように役立つのか説明すると良いでしょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより論理的になります。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I loved listening to stories, but nowadays I prefer reading them because it helps me imagine the scenes more vividly.

Gợi ý: 文法的に不自然な部分があり、「have never written」より「didn't write」の方が過去の経験を表すのに適切です。また、「a great talent to write essay or sentence」は不自然で、「writing essays or stories」など具体的に表現しましょう。回答が短く、理由の説明も簡潔にしましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't write any original stories when I was a child because I didn't feel confident in my writing skills.

Gợi ý: 「my most my most favorite story」は繰り返しの誤りです。また、「for me to read it」は冗長で不自然です。より簡潔で自然な表現を心がけ、理由も具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I enjoy various kinds of stories, but my favorite genre is mystery because I find it thrilling and exciting to solve puzzles while reading.

× No, I dislike stories when I was a child because I felt it so Boden.

✓ No, I disliked stories when I was a child because I felt they were so boring.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a child'), so the verb 'dislike' should be in the past tense 'disliked'. Also, 'felt it so Boden' is incorrect; 'felt they were so boring' correctly uses plural pronoun and adjective form.

× When I was a child, I love listening to stories, but these days I enjoy reading stories because it is so helpful to feel stories.

✓ When I was a child, I loved listening to stories, but these days I enjoy reading stories because it is so helpful to experience stories.

The first clause refers to the past, so 'love' should be 'loved'. Also, 'feel stories' is awkward; 'experience stories' better conveys the intended meaning.

× No, I have never written my original stories because I don't have a great talent to write essay or sentence.

✓ No, I have never written my original stories because I don't have great talent to write essays or sentences.

The phrase 'a great talent' is better as 'great talent' without 'a' because 'talent' is uncountable here. Also, 'essay or sentence' should be plural 'essays or sentences' to match the context.

× I love a variety of stories, but my most my most favorite story is mystery because it is so thrilling and exciting for me to read it.

✓ I love a variety of stories, but my most favorite story is mystery because it is so thrilling and exciting for me to read.

The phrase 'my most my most favorite' is redundant; only one 'most' is needed. Also, 'to read it' is better as 'to read' to avoid unnecessary pronoun repetition.