Stories— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不自然，如“the white Princess often makes me attracted”应改为“the White Princess often attracted me”。此外，回答应更连贯，避免断句不完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved stories a lot when I was a child, especially those about princesses. For example, the story of the White Princess always fascinated me because of her kindness and bravery.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不完整的问题，如“the feeling of. Fascinating”不连贯。建议使用完整句子并增加连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer reading stories rather than listening to them because reading allows me to imagine the scenes vividly. However, when I listen to stories, I often feel sleepy.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当，应使用过去时态，如“I usually wrote stories when I was a child”。句子应完整且连贯，避免断句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often wrote stories when I was a child because I thought it was a good way to practice my writing skills.

Gợi ý: 回答较完整，但表达略显重复，如“for me to guide me”。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Now, I prefer stories about brave and kind characters because they are educational and inspire me to become the person I want to be.

× I love stories very much, especially the stories about Princess.

✓ I love stories very much, especially the stories about princesses.

这里的“Princess”应该用复数形式“princesses”，因为指的是多位公主的故事，符合复数名词的用法。

× the white Princess often makes me attracted.

✓ the white princess often attracts me.

“makes me attracted”是不正确的表达，应该用动词“attract”直接表达“吸引我”。

× I prefer reading stories rather than listening to stories because only by reading can I have the feeling of. Fascinating, but if I listen to them I will be sleepy.

✓ I prefer reading stories rather than listening to them because only by reading can I have the feeling of fascination, but if I listen to them I will be sleepy.

原句中“the feeling of. Fascinating”结构不完整且断句错误，应改为“the feeling of fascination”，使句子完整通顺。

× I usually write a story when I was a child because I thought it's a good way for me to practice.

✓ I usually wrote stories when I was a child because I thought it was a good way for me to practice.

描述过去习惯动作时，动词应使用过去式“wrote”，且“it's”应改为过去时“it was”，保持时态一致。

× I usually write a story when I was a child because I thought it's a good way for me to practice.

✓ I usually wrote stories when I was a child because I thought it was a good way for me to practice.

“a story”应改为复数“stories”，因为通常写多个故事，符合习惯表达。

× My writing skills.

✓ to practice my writing skills.

“My writing skills.”是一个不完整的句子，应与前句连贯，改为“to practice my writing skills”使句子完整。

× Now I prefer stories about characters who are brave and kind because I think that kind of story will be really educational for me to guide me to be the person I want to be.

✓ Now I prefer stories about characters who are brave and kind because I think that kind of story is really educational and guides me to be the person I want to be.

“will be”改为一般现在时“is”，因为表达的是现在的看法；“to guide me”改为“and guides me”使句子结构更自然。