Stories— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、"their stories about well known entrepreneur or athletes"は"stories about well-known entrepreneurs or athletes"とするべきです。また、"That stories made me understand that"は意味が不明瞭で、具体的に何を理解したのかを明確に述べる必要があります。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、文法の正確さと具体的な内容の追加を意識しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved stories during my childhood. My parents often told me inspiring stories about well-known entrepreneurs and athletes, which helped me understand the importance of hard work and perseverance.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。例えば、"informations"は不可算名詞なので"information"とし、"reading them are much"は意味が不明瞭です。さらに、理由の説明が曖昧で具体性に欠けます。より明確で自然な表現を心がけ、理由を具体的に述べることが重要です。

Ví dụ: Currently, I prefer reading stories rather than listening to them because, as a journalist, I need to gather various types of information and content, and reading allows me to do this more efficiently.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、"that was a novel"や"that explains made me motivated to being writers"は不自然で誤りです。より正確な文法を使い、動詞の形や冠詞の使い方に注意しましょう。また、内容をもう少し具体的に説明すると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was in junior high school, I wrote several stories about space exploration. Writing these novels motivated me to become a writer in the future.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、表現がやや不自然で具体性に欠けます。例えば、"success stories of someone"は"success stories about people"や"success stories of individuals"の方が自然です。また、"the story and the novel of Elon"は具体的にどの話や小説かを明確にすると良いでしょう。より自然で具体的な表現を心がけてください。

Ví dụ: I enjoy success stories about inspiring individuals because they motivate me to become stronger. For instance, I like reading about Elon Musk's journey and the novels inspired by his life.

× That stories made me understand that.

✓ Those stories made me understand that.

'Stories' is plural, so the demonstrative pronoun should be 'those' instead of 'that'. 'That' is used for singular nouns, while 'those' is used for plural nouns.

× gain numerous types of informations and contents, so reading them are much.

✓ gain numerous types of information and content, so reading them is better.

'Information' and 'content' are uncountable nouns and should not be pluralized as 'informations' or 'contents'. Also, the verb should agree with the singular subject 'reading', so 'is' is correct instead of 'are'.

× that was a novel and that explains made me motivated to being writers in the future.

✓ that was a novel and that explanation made me motivated to be a writer in the future.

'Explains' is a verb, but here a noun 'explanation' is needed. Also, 'writers' should be singular 'writer' to match 'a'. 'Being' should be 'be' after 'motivated to'. The phrase 'motivated to be a writer' is correct.

× reading them are much.

✓ reading them is better.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'reading', so 'is' is correct instead of 'are'. Also, 'much' is not appropriate here; 'better' fits the comparative context.

× I prefer success stories of someone because it can motivate me to become a strong person in the future.

✓ I prefer success stories of someone because they can motivate me to become a strong person in the future.

'Success stories' is plural, so the pronoun referring to it should be 'they' instead of 'it'.