Stories— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more concise and better structured. Avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas, and use linking words to connect your thoughts smoothly. Also, watch out for grammatical errors such as 'in also'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved stories during my childhood. My grandma often told me bedtime stories, which I still enjoy listening to today. I hope to continue this tradition in the future because stories are both entertaining and comforting.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide clear reasons with supporting details. Use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' properly to contrast ideas.

Ví dụ: I generally prefer listening to stories because it is a convenient and engaging way to enjoy them. However, I understand that reading can improve vocabulary and comprehension, so I try to balance both methods.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use past tense consistently and avoid fragments like 'I because'. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I wrote many mythological stories when I was a child because my grandmother often told me fairy tales before bedtime. Inspired by her stories, I enjoyed creating my own imaginative tales.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains a vocabulary mistake ('methodological' instead of 'mythological') and could be clearer. Use precise vocabulary and link your ideas logically to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I usually enjoy mythological stories that my grandparents told me during my childhood. Because of these stories, I have become a fan of the fascinating characters featured in mythology.

× I remember my grandma used to tell me a lot of stories before bedtime and in also, I like to hear stories in the present and I think I would like to enjoy hearing bedtime stories in the future.

✓ I remember my grandma used to tell me a lot of stories before bedtime and also, I like to hear stories in the present and I think I would like to enjoy hearing bedtime stories in the future.

The phrase 'and in also' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'and also'. The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and causes confusion. Removing 'in' improves sentence clarity and correctness.

× O on the other hand, reading can improve your.

✓ On the other hand, reading can improve you.

The sentence is incomplete and contains a typo 'O on'. The correct phrase is 'On the other hand'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'your' which is incomplete. It should be 'reading can improve you' or specify what it improves. Completing the sentence corrects the structure.

× I because my grandmother used to tell me fairy tales before bedtime and I tend to create some stories of my own when I was a kid.

✓ Because my grandmother used to tell me fairy tales before bedtime, I tended to create some stories of my own when I was a kid.

The sentence starts incorrectly with 'I because'. The correct structure is to start with 'Because' followed by the reason, then the main clause. Also, 'tend' should be in past tense 'tended' to match 'when I was a kid'. Rearranging and correcting verb tense improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually enjoy mythological stories which my grandparents used to tell me when I was a kid, and for that reason I have become a fan of the methodological characters that they used to tell about in their stories.

✓ I usually enjoy mythological stories which my grandparents used to tell me when I was a kid, and for that reason I have become a fan of the mythological characters that they used to tell about in their stories.

The word 'methodological' is incorrect in this context. The correct adjective is 'mythological' which relates to myths and stories. Using the correct adjective ensures the sentence conveys the intended meaning.