Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love stories in your childhood?
Thí sinh
Is I did it was one of my favorite hobbies are listening stories from the grandparents while we were at the birthday.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer listening to stories or reading them?
Thí sinh
Both are good listening stories from other grandparents is a very interesting activity, but reading is more good because we know today and hands over the cab you Larry skills, but also allow us to create a world world of our imagination.
Giám khảo
Did you ever write a story when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Honestly I didn't, I just have a interest was reading the story but I am thinking I don't have the ability to write this story.
Giám khảo
What kind of stories do you like?
Thí sinh
Different kinds of story. I like Indian historical story and story from all about the world. Help us to explore the world. But mostly I prefer science fiction stories that you can foster our curiosity more.
Do you love stories in your childhood?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Try to form grammatically correct sentences and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, start with 'Yes, I loved listening to stories from my grandparents during family gatherings.'
Ví dụ: Yes, I loved listening to stories from my grandparents during family gatherings. They often shared interesting tales that made those moments special.
Do you prefer listening to stories or reading them?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and coherence by using linking words and correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases and aim for a logical structure: state your preference, then explain why with specific reasons.
Ví dụ: I enjoy both listening to stories and reading them. However, I prefer reading because it improves my vocabulary and allows me to imagine different worlds more vividly.
Did you ever write a story when you were a child?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your feelings or reasons with supporting details. For example, 'No, I never wrote stories as a child because I lacked confidence in my writing skills.'
Ví dụ: No, I never wrote stories as a child because I lacked confidence in my writing skills. Instead, I preferred reading stories to enjoy different adventures.
What kind of stories do you like?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about the types of stories and explain why you like them. For example, 'I enjoy various stories, especially Indian historical tales and science fiction, because they help me explore different cultures and stimulate my curiosity.'
Ví dụ: I enjoy various stories, especially Indian historical tales and science fiction. These stories help me explore different cultures and stimulate my curiosity about the future.
× Is I did it was one of my favorite hobbies are listening stories from the grandparents while we were at the birthday.
✓ It was one of my favorite hobbies to listen to stories from my grandparents while we were at the birthday.
The original sentence has incorrect word order and structure, making it confusing. The subject and verb are misplaced, and 'listening stories' should be 'to listen to stories'. The corrected sentence follows proper English sentence structure and verb usage.
× Both are good listening stories from other grandparents is a very interesting activity, but reading is more good because we know today and hands over the cab you Larry skills, but also allow us to create a world world of our imagination.
✓ Both are good. Listening to stories from grandparents is a very interesting activity, but reading is better because it helps us learn today and improves our vocabulary skills; it also allows us to create a world of our imagination.
The original sentence misuses prepositions like 'listening stories' instead of 'listening to stories'. Also, 'more good' is incorrect; 'better' should be used. The sentence is also fragmented and unclear, so it was split and clarified for better understanding.
× Honestly I didn't, I just have a interest was reading the story but I am thinking I don't have the ability to write this story.
✓ Honestly, I didn't. I just had an interest in reading stories, but I thought I didn't have the ability to write them.
The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'Have' should be 'had' to match past tense. 'Was reading the story' is awkward; 'interest in reading stories' is better. 'I am thinking' should be 'I thought' to maintain past tense consistency.
× Different kinds of story. I like Indian historical story and story from all about the world. Help us to explore the world. But mostly I prefer science fiction stories that you can foster our curiosity more.
✓ Different kinds of stories. I like Indian historical stories and stories from all around the world. They help us explore the world. But mostly, I prefer science fiction stories because they can foster our curiosity more.
The original sentences have singular/plural mismatches: 'story' should be 'stories' when referring to multiple. Also, 'story from all about the world' is incorrect; 'stories from all around the world' is correct. 'Help us' needs a subject 'They' to be a complete sentence.