Part 1
Giám khảo
What kinds of websites do you often visit?
Thí sinh
Uh, for me I definitely choose game related website because I'm really like to play different games.
Giám khảo
What is your favourite website?
Thí sinh
My favorite site is called Billy Billy. This is Chinese website and it's a large scale website. It crawled in not only games but also many little videos.
Giám khảo
Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?
Thí sinh
Yeah, sure, and this website often changes the interface color every week and umm, every time I enter this site I can feel refreshed.
Giám khảo
What kinds of websites are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
That must be entertainment website. Umm. When I go out I often see people. Bronzer some website related to entertainment and my also like to wear this website but my favorite website is Billy.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer getting information from websites or books?
Thí sinh
I prefer found information online because Internet are more convenient than books and you just open your computer, you can check the information. But if you want to find something on books you need to go to library or some bookstore. I think it's difficult.
Giám khảo
Would you like to have your own website?
Thí sinh
Hmm to be honest no I want because I think it's not for me and I just want to answer other website. I don't want to have my own website, it's useless for me.
Giám khảo
What have you learned from websites that help with your life or studies?
Thí sinh
Umm, I use the website and use the AI to help me work out some problems. For example, when I study, I meet a trouble question and I can ask AI to get a quick leak answer.
What kinds of websites do you often visit?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: 内容要更直接并且语法更准确。注意主谓一致、词性和简洁表达。可以开门见山说明网站类型,然后给出一两个具体细节支持(例如你常玩的游戏类型或访问频率)。同时句子控制在最多5句内,避免冗余填充词如“uh”或“umm”。
Ví dụ: I often visit gaming websites because I enjoy playing a variety of online games. I usually check them several times a week to see new releases and read player reviews. For example, I follow sites that focus on mobile strategy games and multiplayer shooters.
What is your favourite website?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要结构清晰:先给出网站名称和类型,然后用1–2句具体说明为什么喜欢,注意时态和词汇选择。避免不准确或生硬的表达(如“large scale”用"large"或"well-known"更自然;"crawled in"不合适,改用"covers"或"offers")。
Ví dụ: My favourite website is Bilibili, a well-known Chinese video platform. It offers not only gaming content but also short videos, tutorials and live streams, which keeps me entertained and informed.
Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答方向正确但需更自然简练。先直接回答是否有变化,然后用一两句说明具体变化的例子和感受,避免口头语如"umm"。可以使用连接词让逻辑更顺。
Ví dụ: Yes, the site frequently updates its interface — for example, it changes the color theme weekly. As a result, the homepage always feels fresh and keeps me interested.
What kinds of websites are popular in your country?
Điểm: 44.0Gợi ý: 回答不清楚且有许多语法与词汇错误。先给出直接答案(例如"entertainment websites"),然后举具体例子说明为何流行(如短视频、social media、news sites)并说明观察到的现象。注意单词拼写和搭配(如"browse"而不是"bronzer","people also like to browse")。
Ví dụ: Entertainment websites are the most popular, especially short-video and social platforms. On the streets I notice many people watching short clips on their phones, which explains why these sites attract so many users.
Do you prefer getting information from websites or books?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 要用正确的语法和更简洁的结构:先表明偏好,然后用1–2句解释原因并举例。注意动词形式和单复数("prefer finding"或"prefer to find","the Internet")。避免重复信息。
Ví dụ: I prefer to find information online because the Internet is more convenient than books. For example, I can quickly search topics on my laptop instead of going to a library or bookstore.
Would you like to have your own website?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 表达不清且逻辑混乱。应直接回答是或否,随后简洁说明原因并提供一例或替代方案. 注意用词(如"I don't want one"而不是"no I want";"answer other website"应改为"use other websites"或"contribute to other sites")。避免负面绝对词如"useless",改为更具体理由。
Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to have my own website. I prefer using existing platforms because managing a website requires time and technical skills that I don't have.
What have you learned from websites that help with your life or studies?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更具体并使用准确表达。先说明从网站学到的具体技能或知识,然后举具体例子说明如何帮助学习或生活。避免口语填充词和不恰当表达(如"quick leak answer"应为"quick answer"或"quick solution")。
Ví dụ: I often use websites and AI tools to solve study problems. For example, when I encounter a difficult question, I ask an AI tutoring tool for a clear explanation and step-by-step guidance.
× Uh, for me I definitely choose game related website because I'm really like to play different games.
✓ Uh, for me I definitely choose game-related websites because I really like to play different games.
错误类型:形容词或副词使用不当(复合形容词和修饰名词的形式)。说明:1)“game related”作为复合形容词应加连字符,写成“game-related”。2)“website”在此指一般类群,应使用复数“websites”。3)“I'm really like”是不正确的动词形式,正确为“I really like”。建议:将复合形容词用连字符连接,名词用于泛指时用复数,并使用正确的动词短语“I really like”。
× My favorite site is called Billy Billy. This is Chinese website and it's a large scale website.
✓ My favorite site is called Bilibili. It is a Chinese website and it's a large-scale website.
错误类型:冠词及拼写错误。说明:1)网站名称常写作“Bilibili”(修正拼写)。2)在英语中表达“一个中国的网站”时要加不定冠词“a”,应为“a Chinese website”。3)“large scale”作为形容词短语修饰网站时应连字符“large-scale”。建议:注意专有名词拼写,单数可数名词前加适当冠词,复合形容词用连字符。
× It crawled in not only games but also many little videos.
✓ It contains not only games but also many short videos.
错误类型:冠词/动词用法错误与词汇搭配不当。说明:1)“crawled in”用法不当,网站“包含”应使用“contains”或“hosts”。2)“little videos”常用“short videos”表示短视频。建议:使用“contains/hosts”表示网站包含内容,使用常见搭配“short videos”。
× Yeah, sure, and this website often changes the interface color every week and umm, every time I enter this site I can feel refreshed.
✓ Yeah, sure. This website often changes its interface color every week, and every time I enter the site I feel refreshed.
错误类型:现在时用法与代词省略。说明:1)将句子分为两部分更自然。2)“changes the interface color”建议加物主代词“its”。3)“I can feel refreshed”更常用“I feel refreshed”。建议:使用物主代词使表达更明确,简化表达为更自然的现在时短语。
× That must be entertainment website. Umm. When I go out I often see people. Bronzer some website related to entertainment and my also like to wear this website but my favorite website is Billy.
✓ Those must be entertainment websites. When I go out, I often see people browsing some entertainment-related websites. My friends also like these sites, but my favorite website is Bilibili.
错误类型:代词使用不当及词汇错误。说明:1)原句“That must be entertainment website”应改为复数“Those must be entertainment websites”或“The entertainment websites are popular”。2)“Bronzer”应为“browse”。3)“my also like to wear this website” 是多个错误:应为“My friends also like these websites”。4)保留最爱网站时用正确专有名词“Bilibili”。建议:注意代词单复数一致,拼写“browse”,用“friends”或“people”指代他人,使用“entertainment-related websites”。
× I prefer found information online because Internet are more convenient than books and you just open your computer, you can check the information.
✓ I prefer finding information online because the Internet is more convenient than books; you just open your computer and can check the information.
错误类型:量词/动名词及冠词使用不当。说明:1)“prefer found”搭配错误,动词prefer后需接动名词或不定式,常用“prefer finding”。2)“Internet”作为特指需要定冠词“the Internet”,且动词需与单数主语一致“is”。3)句子连接应更自然,使用并列结构。建议:使用“prefer finding”或“prefer to find”,使用“the Internet is”。
× But if you want to find something on books you need to go to library or some bookstore. I think it's difficult.
✓ But if you want to find something in books, you need to go to a library or some bookstore. I think that's difficult.
错误类型:情态/介词与冠词使用。说明:1)表示在书中查找用介词“in books”。2)“go to library”缺少不定冠词,应为“a library”。3)含义完整时用“That’s difficult”更自然。建议:使用介词“in”搭配“books”,名词前加冠词。
× Hmm to be honest no I want because I think it's not for me and I just want to answer other website.
✓ Hmm, to be honest, no I don't want to because I think it's not for me and I just want to visit other websites.
错误类型:情态/助动词使用与动词选择不当。说明:1)否定表达应使用助动词“don't want to”。2)“answer other website”搭配错误,应为“visit other websites”。3)句子需加逗号分隔插入语“to be honest”。建议:使用正确的否定助动词结构,选择合适动词“visit”。
× I don't want to have my own website, it's useless for me.
✓ I don't want to have my own website; it's useless to me.
错误类型:代词/介词使用。说明:“useless for me”常用搭配为“useless to me”。建议:用习惯搭配“useless to me”。
× Umm, I use the website and use the AI to help me work out some problems. For example, when I study, I meet a trouble question and I can ask AI to get a quick leak answer.
✓ Umm, I use websites and AI to help me work out some problems. For example, when I study and encounter a difficult question, I can ask AI to get a quick, clear answer.
错误类型:动词+ing形式和词汇搭配不当。说明:1)“use the website and use the AI”可合并为“use websites and AI”。2)“meet a trouble question”不地道,改为“encounter a difficult question”。3)“quick leak answer”拼写/词义错误,可能想说“quick, clear answer”。建议:使用“encounter”表达遇到问题,用合适形容词“difficult”,并用正确词汇“clear answer”。