Websites— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence naming the main types, then give one specific example and a brief reason. Use correct countable/uncountable forms and correct platform names. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: I often visit video-sharing sites and social media. For example, I watch tutorials and entertainment on YouTube and Bilibili, and I use Instagram to see friends' updates and photos.

Gợi ý: Give one clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons with correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and unfinished thoughts. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: My favourite website is YouTube because it offers both entertaining videos and practical tutorials. For example, I learn cooking techniques and study tips there, so I can improve my skills easily.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly: state whether there have been changes, then give a specific example of a change (e.g., personalized recommendations). Use correct tense and avoid vague phrasing. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like however or however, now, recently.

Ví dụ: Not many websites I visit have changed, but their recommendations have. For example, YouTube now suggests videos based on my watch history, so I see more content I like.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence naming popular types and give a specific example with a reason. Correct platform names and grammar, and avoid hesitation. Use linking words like because or for example. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Video-sharing and short-video apps are very popular in my country. For example, Bilibili is widely used because it offers cooking tutorials, life hacks, and entertainment that attract many users.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference, then explain with a specific reason and an example. Avoid fillers like 'you know' and use correct grammar (singular/plural). Use linking words like because and whereas. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer getting information from websites because videos and articles are quicker to access. For instance, I watch a five-minute tutorial online when I need a quick recipe instead of reading a long chapter in a cookbook.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly: say yes or no, then give one specific reason or example about purpose and experience. Use past and present tenses correctly and avoid repetition. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences) and coherent with linking words like however or because.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to have my own website to share my work and interests. I once created a personal website for a school history project, but I would make a more practical and updated site now to showcase my projects.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence summarizing the useful things you've learned, then give two specific and concrete examples with brief details. Use linking words such as for example or also, and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'traditional dish' and 'exam preparation'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Websites have taught me practical skills and study techniques that help in daily life and exams. For example, I learned how to cook a simple traditional dish like tomatoes and eggs, and I used online tutorials to prepare for language exams.

× I often visit some websites like videos, a diagram for example Bilibili or YouTube and also some kinds of website like social medias that it's Instagram or some chatting websites and also some.

✓ I often visit websites for videos or diagrams, for example Bilibili or YouTube, and also social media sites like Instagram or some chat websites.

The student used inconsistent noun forms and incorrect plural forms (e.g. 'videos, a diagram', 'some kinds of website', 'social medias'). Use plural 'websites' and 'social media sites' and match determiners and nouns (e.g. 'a diagram' is singular but the context needs plural or a phrase like 'diagrams'). Also remove unnecessary fillers like 'and also some'. Improve fluency by grouping examples logically. ID:1

× My favorite websites is totally can be the YouTube, because there are always have some funny videos or something really useful tutorial videos that I can really learn so much things from the websites and also let me feel really.

✓ My favorite website would definitely be YouTube, because it always has funny videos and really useful tutorial videos that I can learn a lot from, and it also makes me feel good.

Errors include subject-verb disagreement ('websites is'), incorrect modal phrasing ('is totally can be'), incorrect auxiliary usage ('there are always have'), and awkward noun phrases ('so much things', 'from the websites'). Use singular 'website' for a single site and match the verb 'has'. Replace 'can be' with 'would be' for preference and simplify 'learn a lot from' and 'makes me feel good' for natural expression. IDs:2,27

× I think is not have any big changes on my often visit website because something like video diagram cannot changes. But oh I think there is one thing is that there are more knowing me about my favorite.

✓ I think there have not been any big changes in the websites I often visit because things like video platforms do not change much. But I think one change is that the sites now know more about my preferences.

Problems: incorrect 'there be' construction ('I think is not have'), incorrect pluralization and verb forms ('website' vs 'websites', 'cannot changes'), and awkward phrasing about personalization ('more knowing me about my favorite'). Use present perfect 'have not been' for changes up to now, correct noun plurality, and express personalization as 'sites know more about my preferences.' IDs:3,1,6

× Uh, I think it's something like video apps websites is really popular in my country, such as Billy Billy, because there are amount of useful tutorial to teach people how to cook or some little tips they really want to know. And this is really.

✓ I think video apps and websites are really popular in my country, such as Bilibili, because there are a large number of useful tutorials to teach people how to cook or some small tips they want to know. And this is true.

Errors: incorrect article and plural agreement ('video apps websites is'), misspelling of 'Bilibili', incorrect quantifier 'amount' used with countable 'tutorials', missing article 'a' and incorrect adjective 'little tips' (use 'small' or 'simple tips'). Finish the sentence with a complete clause ('And this is true'). IDs:1,22,14,13

× I tend to prefer getting information from website because you know, uh, scanning a video just need a short time. But reading a book can spend a lot of time in the daily life and I don't have that enough time to read a book.

✓ I tend to prefer getting information from websites because watching a video only takes a short time. But reading a book can take a lot of time in daily life and I don't have enough time to read one.

Problems: article and countability ('from website' should be 'from websites'), incorrect verb form 'scanning a video' (use 'watching a video'), tense/aspect and modal issues ('just need a short time' -> 'only takes a short time'), and awkward phrasing 'don't have that enough time' -> 'don't have enough time'. Use 'one' to avoid repeating 'book'. IDs:22,6,13

× Yes, I really want to have my personal website, but to tell the truth, I often I had create my personal website for a while, but it's not to something practical use because it's just only my assignment in the school to exhibitions on history.

✓ Yes, I really want to have a personal website, but to tell the truth, I once created a personal website for a while, though it was not very practical because it was only a school assignment for a history exhibition.

Errors: repeated word 'I often I', wrong tense/form 'had create' should be 'once created' or 'created', article use ('my personal website' -> 'a personal website' when speaking generally), awkward phrase 'not to something practical use' corrected to 'not very practical', and 'to exhibitions on history' -> 'for a history exhibition'. IDs:5,26,22

× I learned something from website like how to cook something normal like tomatoes and eggs that is a traditional dishes in my country and also learn something like how to pass some expressional exam.

✓ I learned things from websites, such as how to cook ordinary dishes like tomatoes and eggs, which are traditional in my country, and also how to pass certain language exams.

Errors: missing article 'from website' -> 'from websites', awkward 'something normal' -> 'ordinary dishes', subject-verb agreement and number ('that is a traditional dishes' -> 'which are traditional dishes'), and vocabulary misuse 'expressional exam' which likely means 'language exam' or 'expressive exam'; changed to 'language exams'. Improve sentence flow by using parallel structure ('such as... and also how...'). IDs:22,13,1