Websites— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and streamline your response. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler (e.g., “uh”), correct unclear phrases (e.g., “house dance, event”), and use one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I often visit my own website, NextHouseLab.com. I built it using Java to showcase my web-development projects and to publish event information such as venue details and cast schedules. Because I manage the site myself, it also serves as a practical place to test new features and improve my coding skills.

Gợi ý: Be grammatically correct and give a brief reason with a specific example. Fix awkward phrasing (e.g., “home page of on advertise company”) and expand one reason using a linking word like “because” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: My favorite website is the homepage of the advertising company Dentsu because it has creative design and dynamic animations. For example, their interactive logo and animated banners make the site visually engaging and inspire my own design ideas.

Gợi ý: Good content and relevance. Improve cohesion by splitting into a clear topic sentence and a supporting sentence with a linking phrase such as “recently” or “for example.” Be slightly more specific about the features you found helpful.

Ví dụ: Yes. As a management consultant I regularly visit corporate sites to gather financial data and strategy information. Recently, many of these sites adopted dashboard-style layouts with interactive charts and filters, which makes it much faster to locate key figures and compare trends.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary errors and improve accuracy. Replace incorrect words (e.g., “creatures abroad new content”) and add a linking phrase. Provide one concrete example of how people use the site.

Ví dụ: YouTube is one of the most popular websites in my country because people use it for music, news, and tutorials. For example, students often watch lecture videos and DIY tutorials, while creators upload new videos every day to reach a wide audience.

× I often visit the websites I built called Next House lab.com.

✓ I often visit the website I built called NextHouseLab.com.

Use the singular article 'the' with a specific single website and 'website' in singular (Article errors). Also combine the name without spaces and capitalize appropriately; ensure correct article use before a specific noun.

× I built it with Java and it displays house dance, event, uh details including venue, cast schedules and related information which helped me practice website development, showcase my projects.

✓ I built it with Java, and it displays house dance and event details, including venue and cast schedules and related information, which helps me practice website development and showcase my projects.

Mixed tenses caused inconsistency: 'built' (past) refers to a completed action while description of the site's functions should use present tense 'displays' and the result clause should use present 'helps' to express ongoing benefits (Present tense issue). Also add conjunctions and commas for clarity and parallel structure.

× My favorite website is the home page of on advertise company called Dentsu.

✓ My favorite website is the home page of an advertising company called Dentsu.

Incorrect or missing article and wrong noun form: use 'an' before a vowel sound and the correct noun 'advertising company' instead of 'advertise company' (Article errors and word form). Also remove the extra preposition 'on'.

× They have very creative pages including fancy logos and moving objects.

✓ They have very creative pages, including fancy logos and animated elements.

'Moving objects' is an awkward description; use 'animated elements' or 'moving graphics' for clarity (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Add a comma before the nonrestrictive phrase.

× Yes, as a management consultant I visit many websites to collect financial details and corporate strategy information, and recently several of them switched to dashboard style, layered with interactive charts that made it much easier to find the key figures.

✓ Yes, as a management consultant I visit many websites to collect financial details and corporate strategy information, and recently several of them have switched to a dashboard style, layered with interactive charts that make it much easier to find the key figures.

Tense inconsistency: 'recently' requires present perfect 'have switched' to connect past change to present results, and the relative clause should use present 'make' to describe current effect (Present tense issue). Also add article 'a' before 'dashboard style'.

× One of the most popular websites in the country is YouTube because people use it to watch a wide range of videos, from music and news to tutorials.

✓ One of the most popular websites in the country is YouTube because people use it to watch a wide range of videos, from music and news to tutorials.

No change needed: Subject and verb agree. This sentence is correct; included for completeness. (Subject-verb agreement errors)

× It's widely used both for entertainment and learning, and many creatures abroad new content every day.

✓ It's widely used both for entertainment and learning, and many creators abroad upload new content every day.

Multiple errors: 'creatures' is incorrect word choice—should be 'creators'—and the clause 'abroad new content' lacks a verb; add 'upload' to form a complete verb phrase. This is a sentence structure and word choice problem (Sentence structure errors).