Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you enjoy traveling by car when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
When I was a kid, I don't know what's wrong with me. I get in the car and feel sick immediately, so I don't really enjoy the moment when I sitting in the car.
Giám khảo
What types of cars do you like?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I don't really know much about cars, but if I have to choose, I would like Ferrari because the shape of Ferrari are very beautiful.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to be a driver or a passenger?
Thí sinh
I think it is fun to operate a car even though I don't know much about driving a car when I was a kid. I have a car sick so I think driving a car can make the sick better.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do when there is a traffic jam?
Thí sinh
My parents always recommend me to learn something at this time but I just feel really worry and constantly look at my timetable and my phone.
Giám khảo
Do you think car colours are important?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. The color of a car cannot change like your phone case, so it is important to choose a beautiful color when you buy it.
Did you enjoy traveling by car when you were a kid?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、語法正確並直接回應問題。可先給出主句(Yes/No 或 I didn’t enjoy it),然後用一到兩句具體原因和細節支持,使用連接詞使語意流暢。注意時態一致和代詞位置(e.g. "when I was sitting").
Ví dụ: I didn’t enjoy traveling by car as a child because I often felt car sick. For example, as soon as the car started moving I would feel dizzy and nauseous, so I preferred staying at home or taking short walks instead.
What types of cars do you like?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答應先直接說出喜好,然後給出具體理由並用連接詞連接。注意主謂一致("the shape of Ferrari is"或"Ferraris are"). 可加入對比或個人經驗增強內容。
Ví dụ: I like sports cars, especially Ferraris, because of their sleek design and sporty image. For instance, I admire how aerodynamic they look and how they stand out in traffic, even though I don't know much about car mechanics.
Do you prefer to be a driver or a passenger?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更簡潔並邏輯清楚。先明確表態(driver或passenger),然後解釋原因。注意時態和語法("I had car sickness"或"I get car sick"); 解釋為何開車能改善暈車時可提及具體細節。
Ví dụ: I prefer being the driver because being in control helps me feel less car sick. For example, when I drive I can look at the road ahead and control the speed, which usually reduces my dizziness.
What do you usually do when there is a traffic jam?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答應先直接說出習慣,接著用一到兩句具體舉例說明。可用連接詞表對比(however, but)。注意拼寫與語法("I feel really worried")。
Ví dụ: When there is a traffic jam, I usually try to study or read on my phone as my parents suggested. However, I often feel worried about being late and end up checking my timetable and messages repeatedly.
Do you think car colours are important?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且合理,但可加入更多理由和具體例子使內容豐富。使用連接詞說明原因和結果,避免絕對化陳述。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think car colours are important because you usually keep a car for years and its colour affects its resale value and appearance. For example, I would choose a neutral colour like silver or navy because it looks elegant and is easier to sell later.
× When I was a kid, I don't know what's wrong with me.
✓ When I was a kid, I didn't know what was wrong with me.
句子讲的是过去的情况,应使用过去式。原句用了现在时的 don't know,时态不一致。建议将 don't know 改为过去式 didn’t know,同时将 what's wrong 改为 what was wrong。
× I get in the car and feel sick immediately, so I don't really enjoy the moment when I sitting in the car.
✓ I got in the car and felt sick immediately, so I didn't really enjoy the moments when I was sitting in the car.
句子描述过去的反复经历,应使用过去时。动词 get/feel 应改为过去式 got/felt;此外 'when I sitting' 缺少助动词和时态,应为 'when I was sitting'。'the moment' 改为复数 moments 更贴合反复经历。
× To be honest, I don't really know much about cars, but if I have to choose, I would like Ferrari because the shape of Ferrari are very beautiful.
✓ To be honest, I don't really know much about cars, but if I have to choose, I would like a Ferrari because the shape of a Ferrari is very beautiful.
谈到具体一辆法拉利时需要不定冠词 a Ferrari。主语 'the shape of Ferrari' 中 Ferrari 前应有定冠词或不定冠词;此外动词 agree 与主语不匹配,原句应为 'shape ... is',因此将 are 改为 is。建议使用 'a Ferrari' 并把 'are' 改为 'is'。
× I think it is fun to operate a car even though I don't know much about driving a car when I was a kid.
✓ I think it is fun to operate a car even though I didn't know much about driving when I was a kid.
句中 'when I was a kid' 指过去,前面的从句应使用过去时 'didn't know'。另外 'driving a car' 可简化为 'driving'。
× I have a car sick so I think driving a car can make the sick better.
✓ I used to get car sick, so I think driving a car can make the sickness better.
原句 'I have a car sick' 表达不当,应使用 'get car sick' 或 'have car sickness'。同时 'make the sick better' 中的 'the sick' 用法错误,需改为 'the sickness' 或 'me feel better'。根据语境可改为 'used to get car sick' 来表示过去常有的情况。
× My parents always recommend me to learn something at this time but I just feel really worry and constantly look at my timetable and my phone.
✓ My parents always recommend that I learn something at that time, but I just feel really worried and constantly look at my timetable and my phone.
动词 recommend 后接人时常用结构 'recommend that I do' 或 recommend someone to do. 原句 'recommend me to learn' 不太地道。'feel really worry' 中 worry 是形容词 worried。时间点 'at this time' 应与过去经历匹配可用 'at that time'。
× The color of a car cannot change like your phone case, so it is important to choose a beautiful color when you buy it.
✓ The color of a car cannot be changed like your phone case, so it is important to choose a beautiful color when you buy one.
原句 'cannot change' 主动语态不太合适,应该用被动 'cannot be changed' 表示颜色不能被改变。'when you buy it' 中 'it' 指代不明确,改为 'buy one' 更自然。