Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you enjoy traveling by car when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
When I was a kid, I don't like traveling by car because it's make me feel drunk and classic. I like to stay at home, right?
Giám khảo
What types of cars do you like?
Thí sinh
I like sport car because I enjoy to driving fast and the driving is make me recharge my energy and when I when I.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to be a driver or a passenger?
Thí sinh
I prefer to be a driver rather than passenger because I enjoy to driving fast and I can control my limit and I know the direction to destination better than.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do when there is a traffic jam?
Thí sinh
I usually doing uh scrolling the phone when traffic jam and scrolling to to feed new uh information or urgent news uh, to make me learn new something.
Did you enjoy traveling by car when you were a kid?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น การใช้ tense ที่ถูกต้องและคำที่สื่อความหมายชัดเจน นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'classic' ที่ใช้ผิดบริบท และควรขยายคำตอบให้สมบูรณ์และเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น
Ví dụ: When I was a kid, I didn't enjoy traveling by car because it often made me feel carsick. Therefore, I preferred to stay at home where I felt comfortable.
What types of cars do you like?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำกริยาที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'I enjoy driving fast' แทน 'I enjoy to driving fast' และควรหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำหรือประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์ นอกจากนี้ควรเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่อทำให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และน่าสนใจ
Ví dụ: I like sports cars because I enjoy driving fast, which helps me feel energized and excited.
Do you prefer to be a driver or a passenger?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I enjoy driving fast' แทน 'I enjoy to driving fast' และควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อทำให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์ นอกจากนี้ควรอธิบายเหตุผลให้ชัดเจนและครบถ้วน
Ví dụ: I prefer to be the driver rather than the passenger because I enjoy driving fast, I can control my speed, and I know the directions to the destination better.
What do you usually do when there is a traffic jam?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I usually scroll through my phone during traffic jams' และหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็นหรือเสียง 'uh' นอกจากนี้ควรอธิบายเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับสิ่งที่คุณทำเพื่อให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และน่าสนใจ
Ví dụ: I usually scroll through my phone during traffic jams to catch up on the latest news or learn something new.
× When I was a kid, I don't like traveling by car because it's make me feel drunk and classic.
✓ When I was a kid, I didn't like traveling by car because it made me feel sick and dizzy.
The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a kid'), so the verb tense should be past ('didn't like' instead of 'don't like'). Also, 'it's make' is incorrect; it should be 'it made' to match past tense and subject-verb agreement. Additionally, 'drunk and classic' is incorrect usage; likely intended to express feeling unwell or dizzy, so 'sick and dizzy' is more appropriate.
× I usually doing uh scrolling the phone when traffic jam and scrolling to to feed new uh information or urgent news uh, to make me learn new something.
✓ I usually scroll through my phone during traffic jams to get new information or urgent news, which helps me learn new things.
The phrase 'I usually doing uh scrolling' is incorrect; 'usually' should be followed by the base verb form, so 'I usually scroll' is correct. Also, 'when traffic jam' should be 'during traffic jams' for correct preposition and plural form. The phrase 'to feed new uh information' is awkward; 'to get new information' is better. 'To make me learn new something' is ungrammatical; 'which helps me learn new things' is clearer and grammatically correct.
× I prefer to be a driver rather than passenger because I enjoy to driving fast and I can control my limit and I know the direction to destination better than.
✓ I prefer to be a driver rather than a passenger because I enjoy driving fast, I can control my limits, and I know the directions to the destination better.
The phrase 'enjoy to driving' is incorrect; 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form 'driving'. 'Control my limit' should be plural 'limits' to sound natural. 'Direction to destination' needs the definite article 'the' before 'destination'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'better than' without a comparison object; it should end properly without 'than' or include the object for comparison.
× I like sport car because I enjoy to driving fast and the driving is make me recharge my energy and when I when I.
✓ I like sports cars because I enjoy driving fast, and driving helps me recharge my energy.
'I enjoy to driving' is incorrect; 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund 'driving'. 'Sport car' should be plural 'sports cars' to be natural. 'The driving is make me recharge' is ungrammatical; it should be 'driving helps me recharge' or 'driving makes me recharge'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and when I when I', which is incomplete and should be removed or completed.