Friends— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammatical errors and some unclear points, such as 'I can't rely on her' which contradicts the context. Try to use correct verb forms and clarify your ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a close friend whom I've known since childhood because we grew up in the same neighbourhood. We still keep in touch regularly. Additionally, I have a colleague named Elham who has become a good friend since we started working together. I really value these friendships because they provide support and companionship.

Gợi ý: Your answer covers various activities but lacks coherence and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to connect ideas. Make sure verb tenses are consistent and sentences are complete. Be specific about activities and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood and free time. For example, we often go to cafes or cinemas, and we enjoy attending concerts together. Also, during festivals and ceremonies in our country, we like to hang out and celebrate. When I have more free time, we sometimes play charades, which is really fun.

Gợi ý: Your answer provides good content but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Also, use linking words like 'sometimes' and 'also' appropriately to improve coherence. Be concise and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I often meet my close friends at work since they are my colleagues. Sometimes, I invite them to my home where I cook homemade food, which creates a joyful atmosphere. We also occasionally go shopping, dine out, or have picnics together.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid phrases like 'No idea' in formal speaking. Use full sentences and complete your thoughts. Provide clear reasons and examples. Also, avoid abrupt sentence endings and ensure coherence.

Ví dụ: I don't often go out with my friends because I have a busy life. However, I used to spend more time with them, going on picnics and traveling to other cities. Those experiences were joyful and helped strengthen our friendship.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'friends are really trespasses' and incomplete ideas. Focus on expressing your thoughts clearly with correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I believe friends are very important to me. Whenever I face difficulties or personal problems, I ask for their help because I can rely on them. They provide support and advice, which makes challenges easier to overcome. As the saying goes, 'two heads are better than one.'

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contradictory, with unclear statements like 'I can't rely on him' and 'I don't love.' Avoid negative or conflicting remarks about friends. Express your preference clearly and politely, and use correct grammar and vocabulary.

Ví dụ: I am quite an introverted and shy person, so I prefer spending time with one or two close friends rather than large groups. I find smaller gatherings more comfortable and enjoyable because I can have deeper conversations and feel more relaxed.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use correct verb forms and complete your ideas. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'make a lot of noise' without context. Describe the atmosphere clearly and positively with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often invite my friends to my home because it creates a joyful atmosphere. We hang out together, play games, and share jokes. We enjoy teasing each other in a friendly way, which makes our time together very fun and memorable.

× Yes, I have one close friends.

✓ Yes, I have one close friend.

The noun 'friends' is plural, but it is preceded by 'one', which requires a singular noun. Therefore, 'friends' should be corrected to 'friend' to agree in number with 'one'.

× We was raised and born in the same time and same neighborhood.

✓ We were raised and born at the same time and in the same neighborhood.

The verb 'was' is incorrect for the plural subject 'we'; it should be 'were'. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'time'; 'at' is the correct preposition. Additionally, 'same time' and 'same neighborhood' should be preceded by 'the' to specify particular time and place.

× I can't rely on her.

✓ I can rely on her.

The sentence contradicts the intended meaning of trust and support. The student likely meant to say they can rely on her, not can't. This is a semantic correction rather than a strict grammar error, but it affects clarity.

× And the other of my close friend is my colleagues is not only my colleagues but also my friends whose name is Elham.

✓ And another of my close friends is my colleague; she is not only my colleague but also my friend whose name is Elham.

The sentence has multiple number agreement errors: 'other' should be 'another' for singular, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' if referring to multiple, 'colleagues' should be singular 'colleague' to match 'my', and 'friends' should be singular 'friend' to match 'whose name is Elham'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs to be split for clarity.

× We've been friends with each other since the beginning of our work. So I like to.

✓ We've been friends with each other since the beginning of our work. So I like that.

The phrase 'So I like to' is incomplete and unclear. It should be completed or rephrased for clarity. Possibly, the student intended to say 'So I like it' or 'So I like that'.

× We usually hang out with each other and go to Cafe Cinema and we attend lots of concerts.

✓ We usually hang out together, go to cafes and cinemas, and attend lots of concerts.

The phrase 'hang out with each other' is acceptable but 'hang out together' is more natural. 'Go to Cafe Cinema' is unclear; it should be plural or separated as 'cafes and cinemas'. Also, the sentence is better connected with commas and conjunctions.

× We have lots of festivals and ceremonies in our country, so we I hang out with my friends and we go there and enjoy our time.

✓ We have lots of festivals and ceremonies in our country, so I hang out with my friends, we go there, and enjoy our time.

The phrase 'so we I hang out' is incorrect; it should be 'so I hang out'. Also, the sentence needs commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× When I having lots of free time, we play charade and we played.

✓ When I have lots of free time, we play charades and we have played.

The phrase 'When I having' is incorrect; it should be 'When I have'. 'Charade' should be plural 'charades' as it is a game. 'We played' should be 'we have played' to maintain tense consistency.

× Since my close friends are my colleagues, we meet each other in our workplace and we sometimes I sometimes invited them to my home and make homemade for homemade food for them and it produces joyful atmosphere.

✓ Since my close friends are my colleagues, we meet each other at our workplace. Sometimes, I invite them to my home and make homemade food for them, which produces a joyful atmosphere.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'sometimes I sometimes invited' is redundant and tense inconsistent; 'invited' should be 'invite' to match present tense. 'Make homemade for homemade food' is incorrect; it should be 'make homemade food'. Also, 'joyful atmosphere' needs an article 'a' before it.

× We sometimes go shopping, we sometimes go out and dine out, we sometimes go to a picnic.

✓ We sometimes go shopping, go out to dine, and go on picnics.

The phrase 'go to a picnic' is better expressed as 'go on picnics'. Also, 'go out and dine out' is redundant; 'go out to dine' is clearer.

× No idea. Since I have a busy life, I don't have much time to hang out with them.

✓ I have no idea. Since I have a busy life, I don't have much time to hang out with them.

The phrase 'No idea' is incomplete as a sentence. It should be 'I have no idea' to be grammatically correct.

× I recall that I used to hang out with them and we went to picnic and go out.

✓ I recall that I used to hang out with them; we went on picnics and went out.

'Went to picnic' should be 'went on picnics'. Also, 'go out' should be in past tense 'went out' to maintain tense consistency.

× We sometimes traveled in other cities.

✓ We sometimes travelled to other cities.

The verb 'traveled' is correct in American English, but in British English, it is spelled 'travelled'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'to' when referring to traveling to cities.

× It produced a joyful and vibrant atmosphere, and I could build a strong.

✓ It produced a joyful and vibrant atmosphere, and I could build a strong bond.

The sentence is incomplete; 'build a strong' needs an object, likely 'bond' or 'relationship' to complete the meaning.

× Actually, I believe that is really important.

✓ Actually, I believe that friends are really important.

The pronoun 'that' is vague and unclear. It should be replaced with the specific subject 'friends' to clarify the meaning.

× When I have something important to do, I ask for the helps.

✓ When I have something important to do, I ask for help.

The noun 'help' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'helps'.

× They are really confident and I can rely on them.

✓ They are really trustworthy and I can rely on them.

The adjective 'confident' is incorrect in this context; 'trustworthy' better expresses the intended meaning of reliability.

× My friends are really trespasses so I have lots of.

✓ My friends are really trustworthy, so I have lots of them.

The word 'trespasses' is incorrect; likely the student meant 'trustworthy'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs 'them' to complete the thought.

× So I believe that 2 heads are better than one so we can can see.

✓ So I believe that two heads are better than one, so we can see more clearly.

The phrase 'we can can see' has a repeated modal verb 'can'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs clarification.

× See some intervarded person and I'm a shy person.

✓ I am an introverted person and I'm shy.

The phrase 'See some intervarded person' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'I am an introverted person' to express the intended meaning.

× I prefer to hang out with my close friends because I can't rely on him, I can't trust her and I don't love.

✓ I prefer to hang out with my close friends because I can rely on them, I trust them, and I love them.

The pronouns 'him' and 'her' are inconsistent with 'friends' which is plural. Also, the negative 'can't' contradicts the intended positive meaning. The sentence should use plural pronouns and positive verbs.

× I don't like to hang out with lots of people and it's disturbs me and they sometimes get on my nerves because each person is unique in their personality traits.

✓ I don't like to hang out with lots of people because it disturbs me, and they sometimes get on my nerves since each person is unique in their personality traits.

The phrase 'it's disturbs me' is incorrect; it should be 'it disturbs me'. Also, the sentence is better connected with conjunctions for clarity.

× Yes, I would invite her my friends to my home is producer joyful atmosphere and we hang out with each other, play trade.

✓ Yes, I would invite my friends to my home; it produces a joyful atmosphere and we hang out together, playing charades.

The phrase 'invite her my friends' is incorrect; 'her' should be removed. 'Producer' should be 'produces'. 'Play trade' is likely a mishearing or misspelling of 'play charades'.

× We make a lot of noise and also we crack, we crack jokes and we tease each other when we are playing, we make fun of each other.

✓ We make a lot of noise; we crack jokes and tease each other when we are playing; we make fun of each other.

The repetition 'we crack, we crack jokes' is redundant. The sentence is better connected with semicolons or commas for clarity.