Friends— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「very near place」は不自然で、「very near my house」や「very close to my house」が適切です。また、文を簡潔にし、接続詞を使って流れを良くしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a best friend named Mr. Wakatsuki who lives in Tokyo. I meet him at least once a week because he lives very close to my house, only a five-minute train ride away.

Gợi ý: 内容が少し分かりにくく、文法や表現の誤りがあります。「since 15 years ago」は「for 15 years」が正しいです。また、「this time is very difficult for me to rejoice for the next day」の意味が不明瞭なので、明確にしましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually go to a cafe or restaurant with my friends to catch up and talk about our memories because we have known each other for 15 years. These moments are very important to me, especially during difficult times.

Gợi ý: 「in a cousin」は誤りで、おそらく「cozy」が言いたいと思われます。また、「like eat special dishes」は「like to eat special dishes」が正しいです。文を自然にし、具体的な説明を加えましょう。

Ví dụ: I often meet my friends in a cozy and comfortable restaurant because I enjoy eating special dishes and drinking perfect beverages. It's a great place to relax and chat.

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、「makes me enjoyable and happy」は不自然です。「makes me happy」が適切です。また、文のつながりを良くし、詳細を具体的にしましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually go out with my friends because I got married three months ago. Now, I often go out with my wife, which makes me very happy. We usually visit shopping malls and look at sports items together.

Gợi ý: 「most important factors for me to reliably」は不自然な表現です。「most important to me」や「very reliable to me」が適切です。また、文を簡潔にし、理由を明確に述べましょう。

Ví dụ: Friends are very important to me because I have always enjoyed talking with many friends since I was a child. I feel I couldn't live without them.

Gợi ý: 「introverted person」は「an introverted person」が正しいです。また、「throw a party in three or four members」は不自然で、「have a small gathering with three or four people」が適切です。文を自然にし、理由を明確にしましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer spending time with one or two friends because I am an introverted person and not good at speaking in front of many people. So, I usually go to a restaurant or cafe and have a small gathering with three or four people.

Gợi ý: 「rubbishes」は不可算名詞で複数形は使いません。「trash」や「garbage」が適切です。また、「get the permission of my wife」は「ask my wife's permission」が自然です。文を簡潔にし、理由を明確にしましょう。

Ví dụ: No, it's hard for me to invite friends to my home because it is messy and there is trash scattered on the floor. Also, I need to ask my wife's permission before inviting them.

× I meet him at least once a week because he lives very near place.

✓ I meet him at least once a week because he lives very near my place.

'near' is a preposition and should be followed by a noun or pronoun. 'very near place' is incorrect because 'place' needs a determiner like 'my' to specify which place is meant.

× For my house it takes 5 minutes by train.

✓ From my house it takes 5 minutes by train.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'from' is used to indicate the starting point of a journey or time duration.

× I always go to a cafe or a restaurant and catch up, talk about all the memories, because we have known each other since 15 years ago and this time is very difficult for me to rejoice for the next day.

✓ I always go to a cafe or a restaurant and catch up, talk about all the memories, because we have known each other for 15 years and this time is very difficult for me to rejoice in the next day.

The phrase 'since 15 years ago' is incorrect; 'for 15 years' is the correct expression to indicate duration. Also, 'rejoice for the next day' should be 'rejoice in the next day' to use the correct preposition with 'rejoice'.

× I always meet my friends in a cousin and a comfortable restaurant because I like eat special dishes and drink perfect beverage.

✓ I always meet my friends in a cozy and comfortable restaurant because I like to eat special dishes and drink perfect beverages.

'in a cousin' is incorrect; likely intended 'cozy'. Also, 'like eat' should be 'like to eat' to use the correct verb form. 'perfect beverage' should be plural 'perfect beverages' to match general meaning.

× So I always go out with my wife, which makes me enjoyable and happy.

✓ So I always go out with my wife, which makes me feel enjoyable and happy.

'makes me enjoyable' is incorrect because 'enjoyable' describes things, not feelings. The correct expression is 'makes me feel enjoyable' or better 'makes me happy'.

× I always go to shopping malls and see sports items.

✓ I always go to shopping malls and look at sports items.

'see sports items' is unnatural; 'look at' is the correct verb phrase to express observing items.

× Friends are the most important factors for me to reliably because when I was a child I liked to talk with many friends and I couldn't live without them.

✓ Friends are the most important factor for me to rely on because when I was a child I liked to talk with many friends and I couldn't live without them.

'factors' should be singular 'factor' because 'friends' collectively are one important factor. 'to reliably' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to rely on'.

× I prefer spending the time with one or two friends because I'm introverted person and not good at speaking in front of many people.

✓ I prefer spending time with one or two friends because I'm an introverted person and not good at speaking in front of many people.

'the time' is incorrect; 'spending time' is the correct phrase. Also, 'introverted person' needs the article 'an' before it.

× So I always go to a restaurant or cafe and throw a party in three or four members.

✓ So I always go to a restaurant or cafe and throw a party with three or four members.

'throw a party in three or four members' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with' to indicate the number of people involved.

× No, it's quite hard for me to invite my friends to my home because it is messy and many rubbishes are scattered on the floor.

✓ No, it's quite hard for me to invite my friends to my home because it is messy and a lot of rubbish is scattered on the floor.

'many rubbishes' is incorrect; 'rubbish' is uncountable and should be used with 'a lot of' or 'much'. Also, 'rubbish' is singular in form and takes singular verb 'is'.