Friends— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意时态和冠词的使用，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a friend whom I've known since childhood. We attended the same primary, junior high, and senior high schools. Our parents are also acquainted because we sometimes celebrate holidays together.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯，存在语法和表达错误，部分内容难以理解。建议使用简单句表达常做的活动，并用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually go out with my friends or travel to other cities. Sometimes we play billiards together. We also like to find a cafe or bar to relax and chat.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议直接回答地点，并用连接词说明原因或活动内容。

Ví dụ: We often meet at school since we are graduate students. Sometimes, we go to popular coffee bars or restaurants to eat and take photos together.

Gợi ý: 句子结构不够自然，表达有些混乱。建议简化句子，注意连贯性和语法准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go out with my friends because I am an outgoing person. I don't like going out alone, so I usually invite them to join me.

Gợi ý: 表达有创意，但语法和用词错误影响理解。建议使用更准确的表达，避免模糊词汇。

Ví dụ: Friends are like family I choose. They are very important to me because I can share my personal matters with them, and they support me during difficult times.

Gợi ý: 句子过长且结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议分句表达观点，并使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

Ví dụ: I prefer spending time with one friend because my energy is limited. It is hard for me to pay attention to everyone in a group. Spending time with one friend allows for deeper conversations.

Gợi ý: 表达有一定逻辑，但语法和用词错误较多。建议简化表达，注意词汇搭配和句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually don't invite friends to my home because I value my privacy. Even though they are my friends, I prefer to meet them outside. Also, my home is a bit messy.

× Yes, I have friend whom I've known since childhood.

✓ Yes, I have a friend whom I've known since childhood.

这里缺少冠词'a'，因为friend是单数名词，前面需要加不定冠词。

× We have some common memories we have we attended the same schools, primary schools, Senior High schools, junior high schools and for our parents also acquainted because with sometimes celebrate holiday.

✓ We have some common memories; we attended the same schools: primary schools, junior high schools, and senior high schools. Our parents are also acquainted because they sometimes celebrate holidays together.

句子结构混乱，代词使用不当，且时态和连接词错误。需要分句并调整代词和时态，使句子通顺。

× Are you really? Go outside saying with my friend or travel to other cities.

✓ Yes, I usually go outside with my friends or travel to other cities.

原句结构不完整且含糊，缺少主语和谓语，且短语'saying with my friend'不合适，应改为'go outside with my friends'。

× All find a cafe bar to shoot the sleeve.

✓ We often find a cafe or bar to hang out together.

短语'shoot the sleeve'不合适，应该用'hang out'表示闲逛，且'All find'语法错误，应改为'We often find'。

× Sometimes I made with my friends in schools because both of us are graduate students now, so sometimes maybe we will find some pop coffee bars or some pop restaurants to eat together and take photos for each other.

✓ Sometimes I meet with my friends at school because both of us are graduate students now, so sometimes we find some popular coffee bars or restaurants to eat together and take photos of each other.

'made'用错，应为现在时'meet'，因为后文说明现在的情况。'pop'应为'popular'。

× Friend is a family without blood which or whom I choose, so I think they are very important for me.

✓ A friend is a family without blood whom I choose, so I think they are very important to me.

'Friend'前缺冠词'a'，'which'用错，应为'whom'指人，'important for me'应为'important to me'。

× Like I can share my own personal stuff to them or even Ms. something trouble they can weather the storm with me.

✓ I can share my personal stuff with them, or even if I have some trouble, they can weather the storm with me.

'share ... to them'错误，应为'share ... with them'；'Ms. something trouble'表达不清，应改为'if I have some trouble'。

× I prefer to spend time with one friend because my energy is limited and it's also difficult for me to care about at each of my friend in one group and spending time with one friend can help me to deeper conversations and so that I don't need to.

✓ I prefer to spend time with one friend because my energy is limited, and it's difficult for me to care about each of my friends in a group. Spending time with one friend helps me have deeper conversations, so I don't need to do that with many people.

'each of my friend'应为'each of my friends'，'to deeper conversations'应为'to have deeper conversations'，句子结构不完整，需调整。

× I wouldn't invite my friends to my home because home for me is a little bit privacy occasions.

✓ I wouldn't invite my friends to my home because home is a private place for me.

'privacy occasions'表达错误，应为'private place'，且句子更通顺。

× So even they are my friends but I prefer to meet them outside an art.

✓ So even though they are my friends, I prefer to meet them outside.

'So even they are my friends but'连接词使用错误，应为'So even though they are my friends'，且'an art'无意义，应去掉。

× The reason is because my home is a little bit mess.

✓ The reason is that my home is a little bit messy.

'mess'是名词，形容词应为'messy'，'The reason is because'冗余，应改为'The reason is that'。