Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the ad, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (what product, why it impressed you) using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix basic grammar (e.g., 'When I was a child', 'the boy band called Big Bang', 'their advertisements').

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I was impressed by advertisements featuring the boy band Big Bang. For example, they promoted mobile phones and clothing, and seeing the band using those products made me want to buy them because I admired their style and image.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then support with clear, specific examples. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example.' Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'on buses', 'they promote', 'nearby facilities'). Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertising on public transport, especially on buses. For example, bus announcements and posters usually promote nearby facilities like hospitals and schools, so I notice many local adverts when I travel.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly whether you like adverts, then explain with 1–2 reasons. Use linking words ('however', 'because') and correct phrasing ('I don't like advertisements about food' or 'I prefer fashion ads'). Avoid contradictory phrasing.

Ví dụ: It depends on the type of advertisement; I generally like fashion or cosmetic adverts because they are stylish. However, I don't like food advertisements much because they often seem repetitive and over-the-top.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the type you prefer (e.g., video ads). Then give specific reasons and examples, using linking words ('because', 'for example'). Correct unclear phrases ('famous stars', not 'famous salad'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer video advertisements because they are more engaging and can tell a short story. For example, ads featuring famous stars and catchy music often grab my attention and make the product memorable.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and then a concise reason with a specific example. Use correct grammar ('I often see advertisements on both my phone and computer') and linking words ('because', 'for example'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements on both my phone and computer because I watch many videos on YouTube. For example, most videos have pre-roll ads or mid-roll ads, so I encounter them frequently while watching content.

× When I was child, I really liked the boy band name is Big Bang.

✓ When I was a child, I really liked a boy band called Big Bang.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and awkward noun phrase 'the boy band name is Big Bang'. Use 'a child' for correct singular form and 'a boy band called Big Bang' to introduce the band's name naturally.

× They usually own the advertisement like kind of the mobile phone or clothes that those things impress on me.

✓ They usually appear in advertisements for things like mobile phones or clothes, which impressed me.

Incorrect verb 'own' and ungrammatical clause 'that those things impress on me'. 'Appear in advertisements for' is appropriate; 'which impressed me' correctly links the clause and uses past tense to match 'When I was a child'.

× So I really want to buy that product.

✓ So I really wanted to buy those products.

Tense mismatch: the context is past ('When I was a child'), so use past 'wanted'. Also 'product' should be plural 'products' to match 'mobile phones or clothes'.

× I see a lot of the advertising on the bus usually because when they announce it about the bus stop between the announces, they usually prom advertising about near facility, for example hospital or Academy.

✓ I usually see a lot of advertising on buses, because when the driver announces the stops, they often promote nearby facilities, for example hospitals or academies.

Multiple issues: 'the advertising' should be uncountable 'advertising' or 'ads'; use plural 'buses' for general statement; 'when they announce it about the bus stop between the announces' is ungrammatical—use 'when the driver announces the stops'; 'prom' should be 'promote'; 'near facility' should be 'nearby facilities'; use plural nouns 'hospitals or academies'.

× So yeah, I heard a lot of the advertising on bus.

✓ So yeah, I heard a lot of advertising on buses.

Replace 'the advertising' with 'advertising' and use plural 'buses' for general reference. Article 'the' is unnecessary before uncountable 'advertising'.

× It depends on the advertisement.

✓ It depends on the advertisement.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. (Included for completeness.)

× Unlike advertisement related to clothes or cosmetic but it's for food.

✓ Unlike advertisements related to clothes or cosmetics, I do not like those for food.

Original mixes conjunctions and fragments. Use 'unlike' to contrast, pluralize 'advertisements' and 'cosmetics', and provide a complete main clause 'I do not like those for food' to express the meaning clearly.

× For advertisement I really don't like it.

✓ For advertisements, I really don't like them.

Pronoun reference and article problems: 'For advertisement' should be 'For advertisements' and 'it' should match plural 'them'. Alternatively rephrase as 'I really don't like advertisements.'

× I like the kind of video advertising meant because sometimes they are more attractive people for me as well.

✓ I like video advertisements because sometimes they are more attractive to me.

Awkward phrasing 'kind of video advertising meant' and 'attractive people for me'. Simplify to 'video advertisements' and use 'attractive to me'.

× And yeah, and also quite interesting because they use the famous salad and interesting music, yeah.

✓ Also, they are quite interesting because they use famous celebrities and catchy music.

'Famous salad' is likely a mispronunciation of 'famous celebrity' or 'salad' is wrong noun; replace with 'famous celebrities'. Use 'catchy music' instead of repetitive 'interesting music'. Remove filler 'yeah'.

× I often see advertisement when I are on my phone and computer both way, because usually I use my phone watching YouTube, but there's a lot of the advertisement during what I watching the video, so yeah.

✓ I often see advertisements when I am on my phone or computer, because usually I use my phone to watch YouTube, and there are a lot of advertisements during the videos.

Multiple errors: 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'; 'I are' should be 'I am'; 'both way' should be 'either' or 'both' phrased correctly—use 'or' for alternatives; 'use my phone watching YouTube' needs infinitive 'to watch'; 'there's a lot of the advertisement' should be 'there are a lot of advertisements' and 'during what I watching the video' should be 'during the videos'.