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Gợi ý: 答えは直接的で内容は分かりやすいですが、文法と語順の誤り、冗長な表現、接続の自然さが欠けています。改善点：1) 最初の一文で質問に対する明確なトピック文をもう少し自然に表現する（例: "Yes — one ad stuck with me when I was a child.")。2) 支持情報は順序立てて短くまとめる（原因と結果を結ぶ接続語を使う："because", "so"）。3) 文法（時制・冠詞）と語彙の選択を修正する。4) 文は最大5文に収め、冗長な語を削除する。

Ví dụ: Yes — one TV ad really stuck with me when I was a child. It featured a comedian who sang a catchy, funny song, so it was easy to remember. Because the tune was so memorable, I used to sing it all the time.

Gợi ý: 答えは具体例を含んでいますが、冗長で不自然な語順・不適切な前置詞、語の重複があります。改善点：1) 主語と場所の表現を正しくする（"on buses" や "in buses"）。2) 不必要な情報や口語のフィラー（"uh", "and so on"）を削除する。3) 例を明確に列挙する際に接続語（"for example"）を使う。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertising on buses. I usually take a bus to the nearest station, and there are many posters and video ads inside. For example, I often notice product promotions and job recruitment posters.

Gợi ý: 内容は答えていますが、理由の説明が曖昧で語彙の選択や文法に改善が必要です。改善点：1) "basically"は曖昧なので避け、はっきりした意見を示す（"Yes, I do."）。2) "make me more energetic" は文脈に合わない可能性があるため具体的に説明する（"catch my attention"）。3) 具体例を自然につなげ、結論を明確にする。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Advertisements often catch my attention and influence my shopping choices. For example, I sometimes see promoted items on Instagram and end up buying them because the posts show the product clearly and include reviews.

Gợi ý: 回答は意図は伝わりますが、不正確な表現と文法ミス（"by movie", "continuing watching"）があります。また例が不完全で締めくくりが不足しています。改善点：1) 好みの広告タイプを明確に（"video ads" や "cinematic ads"）。2) 理由を具体的に述べる（"they tell a story"、"are more engaging"）。3) 例を完結にし、接続詞を使って流れを整える。

Ví dụ: I prefer video advertisements because they tell a story and are more engaging. For example, YouTube often shows short ads between videos that explain the product visually, which makes them easier to understand and watch.

Gợi ý: 答えは肯定していますが、冗長な語やフィラーが多く、前置詞の誤りと単数/複数形の混乱があります。改善点：1) 前置詞は正しく使う（"on the Internet" または "on my phone"）。2) フィラーを取り除き、構造を簡潔にする。3) 広告の出現理由を簡潔に説明する（"to monetise content"）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see ads on the Internet and on my phone. I frequently use social media like Instagram and TikTok, where creators place sponsored posts and video ads to monetise their content.

× Yes, When I was a kid, I liked an advertisement on TV. In that advertisement, a comedian sang a funny song and it's easy to memorize. Therefore, I sang this song very frequently.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I liked an advertisement on TV. In that advertisement, a comedian sang a funny song and it was easy to memorize. Therefore, I sang this song very frequently.

'It's' (it is) is present tense and does not match the past context introduced by 'when I was a kid' and 'sang'. Use past tense 'it was easy to memorize' to maintain consistent past narration. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent in a narration by using past tense verbs (e.g., 'was easy to memorize'). Note: This correction targets verb tense sequence and the present participle misalignment with past narrative.

× Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on bus because when I go out, I always take a bus to go to uh, nearest station and there are many advertisements inside the bus, such as advertising the product and recruiting advertisement and so on.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on buses because when I go out, I always take a bus to go to the nearest station and there are many advertisements inside the bus, such as product advertisements and recruitment advertisements.

Use the plural noun 'buses' after 'on' to refer generally to that mode of transport. Add the definite article 'the' before 'nearest station.' Use correct noun forms: 'product advertisements' and 'recruitment advertisements' instead of 'advertising the product' and 'recruiting advertisement.' Suggestion: check preposition+noun collocations and use articles correctly (e.g., 'on buses', 'the nearest station').

× Basically, I like advertisements because they make me more energetic and they can help me to buy something, for example when I find some advertisements on Instagram. I decide to buy things even.

✓ Basically, I like advertisements because they make me more energetic and they can help me buy something. For example, when I find some advertisements on Instagram, I sometimes decide to buy things.

Pronoun and reference clarity: 'I decide to buy things even' is unclear and ungrammatical. Use adverb 'sometimes' to indicate frequency and restructure the sentence: 'when I find some advertisements on Instagram, I sometimes decide to buy things.' Also remove unnecessary 'to' after 'help me' (help me buy). Suggestion: keep pronoun references clear and place adverbs where they modify the verb correctly.

× I like advertisements by movie because it's more understandable and it's easy to continuing watching. For example, when I see the YouTube, there is some advertisement between the videos and it.

✓ I like movie advertisements because they are easier to understand and easy to continue watching. For example, when I watch YouTube, there are some advertisements between the videos.

Preposition and noun phrase corrections: use 'movie advertisements' or 'advertisements in movies' instead of 'advertisements by movie.' Use plural agreement 'they are' to match 'advertisements.' 'It's easy to continuing watching' is incorrect: use infinitive 'easy to continue watching' or 'easy to keep watching.' 'See the YouTube' should be 'watch YouTube' and 'there is some advertisement' should be 'there are some advertisements.' Suggestion: choose correct verb collocations (watch YouTube) and use correct verb forms (continue, plural agreement).

× Yes, I often see advertisements on in the Internet because uh whenever I see my phones, I watch social media uh in social medias like Instagram or Tiktoks. There are many advertisements to earn some money from the advertising company.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements on the Internet because whenever I use my phone, I check social media like Instagram or TikTok. There are many advertisements to make money for advertising companies.

Use correct preposition 'on the Internet' not 'on in the Internet.' 'When I see my phones' is incorrect; use 'when I use my phone.' 'Social medias' should be 'social media' (uncountable) and 'Tiktoks' should be 'TikTok' or 'TikTok videos.' 'To earn some money from the advertising company' is awkward; use 'to make money for advertising companies.' Suggestion: pay attention to standard prepositional phrases (on the Internet), countability of 'social media', and correct verb choices ('use my phone', 'check social media').