Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “No, I wasn’t impressed by adverts as a child.”), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., “because” or “so”). Avoid repetition and grammar errors: use past tense consistently and correct word forms (e.g., “I wasn’t interested,” “I watched cartoons”). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I wasn’t impressed by advertisements when I was a child because I didn’t understand them. I focused on cartoons instead, so adverts rarely caught my attention.

Gợi ý: Give a clear main sentence answering the question, then add one specific example and a brief comparison using linking words (e.g., “however,” “while”). Fix grammar (plural/singular, articles) and make sentences coherent. Avoid vague phrases like “the other side are very rare.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on other transport, especially on cars and electric scooters, because many brands compete in my country. However, ads on trains are rare where I live.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and provide one or two clear reasons with concrete examples. Use correct verbs and articles (e.g., “ads enhance my knowledge,” “I often buy things after seeing an ad”). Avoid repetition and unclear final sentence. Keep it within 3 sentences and use linking words like “because” and “for example.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I like advertisements because they inform me about new and trending products. For example, I often buy a gadget or skincare item after seeing a convincing ad online.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence stating the type of ads you prefer and one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid inappropriate phrases like “self obsessed” — say “I care about my appearance.” Correct grammar and coherence (e.g., “I try different products to find what suits me,” “I prefer authentic brands”). Use linking words like “because” and “for example.”

Ví dụ: I prefer skincare advertisements because I care about my appearance and want to keep my skin healthy. For example, I watch ads to learn about ingredients and often try a sample before buying a full product.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly and give a specific frequency and context. Use correct expressions (e.g., “I use my computer daily” and “I often see ads while scrolling social media”). Replace unclear words like “real SIM” with “reels” or “videos.” Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences and use linking words like “so” or “therefore.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I see ads often because I use my computer daily and scroll social media on my phone. For example, I watch Instagram Reels and usually encounter several short ads each time.

× Honestly speaking, I had not interested in any advertisement when I was child because I have I had not known about what is advertisement.

✓ Honestly speaking, I was not interested in any advertisements when I was a child because I did not know what an advertisement was.

The sentence used incorrect tense and auxiliary forms: 'had not interested' is wrong — the correct past simple passive/active is 'was not interested'. 'When I was child' needs the article 'a'. 'I have I had not known about what is advertisement' mixes present perfect and past perfect and uses incorrect word order; use past simple 'did not know' and correct noun phrase 'what an advertisement was'. Use plural 'advertisements' for general reference or 'an advertisement'. Suggestions: use past simple for past states, add 'a' before 'child', use 'interested in' with 'was', and use 'what an advertisement was'.

× So I just keep focus on my interest like when I was watched my cartoon.

✓ So I just focused on my interests, like when I watched my cartoons.

The phrase 'keep focus on' is awkward and mixes tenses. 'Keep' should be past ('kept') if continuing past, but simpler is 'focused'. 'When I was watched' incorrectly uses past continuous with past participle; correct is simple past 'when I watched'. 'My cartoon' should be plural 'my cartoons' or 'cartoons'. Suggestions: use simple past 'focused' and 'watched', pluralize 'interests' and 'cartoons'.

× So I just keep focused on them.

✓ So I just focused on them.

Mixes present 'keep' with past context; use past simple 'focused' to match prior sentence. 'Keep focused' is present habitual, but since talking about childhood, use past tense. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense: 'focused'.

× Mostly I see advertising on other transport like Eve electric scooter and cars because they are huge number of brands are present in my country.

✓ Mostly I see advertisements on other transport, like e-scooters and cars, because there are a huge number of brands in my country.

Use plural 'advertisements'. 'Eve electric scooter' seems intended as 'e-scooters' or 'electric scooters'. 'They are huge number of brands are present' is ungrammatical; correct is 'there are a huge number of brands' using 'there are' for existence and adding article 'a'. Suggestion: use 'there are' + 'a huge number of' and plural nouns.

× So every brand will launch their new product and they show on advertising.

✓ So every brand launches new products and advertises them.

Mixes future 'will' unnecessarily; habitual action better in present simple 'launches'. 'Their' with 'every brand' is singular; better to rewrite 'every brand launches new products' and 'they show on advertising' is awkward — use 'advertises them'. Suggestion: use present simple for regular actions and match singular/plural consistently.

× So on the other side are very rare in my country and there are no.

✓ On the other hand, they are very rare in my country, and sometimes nonexistent.

'On the other side' wrong collocation; use 'on the other hand'. The original lacks subject for 'are very rare' — specify 'they' (referring to advertisements on other media). 'There are no' is incomplete; clarify what is nonexistent. Suggestion: use clear subjects and idiomatic expressions like 'on the other hand' and complete the idea.

× Yes, I really like advertisement because it enhance my knowledge and give me the more information about the different products and the trending products.

✓ Yes, I really like advertisements because they enhance my knowledge and give me more information about different and trending products.

Use plural 'advertisements' for general preference. 'It enhance' has subject-verb agreement error; 'they enhance'. 'Give me the more information' should be 'give me more information'. 'The different products' is awkward; use 'different products'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and match subject-verb agreement.

× So mostly I purchase things when I see any advertisement and I always see advertisement.

✓ So I mostly purchase things when I see an advertisement, and I often see advertisements.

Word order and article misuse: 'mostly I purchase' better 'I mostly purchase'. Use 'an advertisement' for single instance. 'I always see advertisement' needs plural or article: 'see advertisements' or 'see an advertisement'. Suggestion: place adverbs correctly and use appropriate articles/plurals.

× Advertisement before start to end to enhance.

✓ Advertisements are designed to persuade people from start to finish.

Original fragment is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Advertisement before start to end to enhance' doesn't form a sentence. Clarify purpose: 'designed to persuade' or 'aim to inform' and use proper sentence structure. Suggestion: express full idea with subject and verb and clear purpose phrase.

× Mostly I like skin care advertising because I am self obsessed person.

✓ Mostly I like skincare advertisements because I am a self-obsessed person.

'Skin care' commonly written 'skincare' as compound; 'advertising' better as plural 'advertisements'. Missing article before 'self-obsessed person': 'a self-obsessed person'. Hyphenation may be used: 'self-obsessed'. Suggestion: use correct compound nouns, articles, and hyphenation.

× I want to keep my skin more refreshed and young so I try different kind of products for striking the parents so it can enhance my knowledge about the different brands.

✓ I want to keep my skin more refreshed and youthful, so I try different kinds of products to find the best ones, which also helps me learn about different brands.

Many issues: 'young' as adjective for skin better 'youthful'. 'Different kind of products' should be 'different kinds of products'. 'For striking the parents' is nonsensical; likely intended 'to find the proper products'. Use clearer clause: 'which also helps me learn about different brands.' Suggestion: break into clearer clauses, correct pluralization, and use appropriate vocabulary.

× So I always use authentic.

✓ So I always use authentic products.

'Use authentic' is incomplete; need a noun 'products'. 'Authentic' should modify 'products'. Suggestion: include the noun being modified.

× I really use computer on the daily basis and I often use my cell phone for the daily task like scrolling social media and watching real SIM in Instagram.

✓ I use the computer daily and I often use my cell phone for daily tasks like scrolling social media and watching Reels on Instagram.

'I really use computer on the daily basis' has article and adverb issues: use 'the computer' or 'a computer' and 'daily' instead of 'on the daily basis'. 'Daily task' should be plural 'daily tasks'. 'Watching real SIM in Instagram' seems to mean 'watching Reels on Instagram' (capitalization/correct term). Suggestion: use 'daily' adverb, plural 'tasks', correct platform features like 'Reels'.

× So then I watch advertisement in my phone.

✓ So then I watch advertisements on my phone.

Use plural 'advertisements'. Preposition 'in' with 'phone' is incorrect; use 'on my phone'. Match tense and plurality. Suggestion: use 'on my phone' and pluralize 'advertisements' when general.