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Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、结构更清晰，并用连词把细节连贯起来。注意时态和主谓一致，减少冗余。可以先给出主题句，然后用一两句具体描述广告内容以及为何印象深刻（原因、感受或影响）。例如说明广告画面、情感基调以及你为什么记得它。

Ví dụ: One advertisement that impressed me as a child was for Wang Wang milk. It showed a mother giving milk to her son at school, and the boy looked very happy. The cheerful music and warm colors made the scene memorable, and it stayed with me because it emphasized family care and nutrition.

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并保持句子简洁。用连接词（such as, however）使论点更连贯，并具体说明为什么你认为它有用以及带来哪些不便（例如噪音、视觉干扰）。注意冠词和复数形式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on buses, subways and taxis. They are effective for reaching many people, however they can be distracting and make public spaces feel cluttered.

Gợi ý: 表达要准确并避免错误单词（如Edison无关）。先直接回答喜欢与否，然后给出具体原因和例子。用简洁句子并注意时态和语序。可以提到广告打断观看体验或重复性强。

Ví dụ: No, I don't like most advertisements because when I was a child they interrupted TV programmes and I had to wait a long time. The repetition made them annoying rather than helpful.

Gợi ý: 回答要更具体并把观点拓展成一至两点支持理由。使用连接词（for example, because）并修正语法与用词（missing child, spend time）。避免重复。

Ví dụ: I prefer advertisements that are meaningful or visually appealing because they catch my attention. For example, a poster helping to find a missing child is meaningful and I would spend time looking at it to help spread the information.

Gợi ý: 回答需要更简洁并用连词衔接观点（however, because）。具体举例说明哪类广告令人厌烦（弹窗、自动播放视频等），并说明为何感到浪费时间。注意语法（it wastes our time）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see many advertisements on my phone and computer because online ads are an effective way to reach people. However, I find pop-ups and autoplay videos boring and they waste my time.

× Yes, of course it's called Wang Wang milk.

✓ Yes, of course — it's called Wang Wang Milk.

句子是陈述完整句，主要问题是专有名词大小写与标点。尽管不是严格的语法错误，但要符合英语书写习惯，品牌名（专有名词）首字母大写；在口语中插入破折号或逗号能更自然。建议：专有名词首字母大写，适当使用停顿符号。

× It's make me improve very deeply.

✓ It made a deep impression on me.

原句时态和动词使用错误。根据上下文描述童年经历，应使用过去时；‘make me improve very deeply’语义不通，英语中表达“给我很深的印象”应使用短语 'make a deep impression on someone' 或过去时 'made a deep impression on me'。建议：学习固定搭配 'make/made a (strong/deep) impression on someone'，并根据时间使用正确时态。

× It show us a mother give a milk to the child in his school and he feel very happiness and the boy is look is also.

✓ It showed a mother giving milk to a child at his school; he looked very happy.

原句存在句子结构混乱、时态错误和词形错误。叙述过去的广告场景应使用过去时；‘show us a mother give a milk’应改为过去式并使用动名词短语 'showed ... giving milk' 或被动结构；'give a milk' 中 'a' 不需要且 'milk' 不可数；'he feel very happiness' 中动词时态和词类错误，正确为 'he looked very happy'。建议：注意时态一致性（过去时），使用正确的名词、形容词以及动词形式（giving, happy）。

× Of course, in our country there are many advertising in many places, such as bus, subway and taxi and so on.

✓ Of course, in our country there is a lot of advertising in many places, such as on buses, subways and taxis.

错误包含可数/不可数和介词使用。'advertising' 作不可数名词时应用 'a lot of' 或 'many ads'；若用复数 'ads' 则用 'many ads'。交通工具前需加介词 'on' 表示位于交通工具上；'bus, subway and taxi' 应为复数或并列形式。建议：区分 'advertising'（不可数）和 'ads'（可数复数），并正确使用介词（on buses/on the bus depending context）。

× I think it's a good way to let people know the ground, but is also noisy in.

✓ I think it's a good way to let people know about things, but it can also be noisy.

句子结构和词汇使用不当。'know the ground' 用词错误，可能想说 'let people know about them' 或 'let people know about things'；句尾 'but is also noisy in' 缺少主语且介词位置错误，应为 'it can also be noisy'。建议：确保主语明确，使用正确固定搭配 'let people know about ...'，以及把形容词 'noisy' 放在谓语之后并配合情态动词或 'be'。

× I don't like Edison due to the fact that when I was child I always watch TV or movies.

✓ I don't like advertisements because when I was a child I always watched TV or movies.

原句存在代词/名词错误和时态不一致。'Edison' 显然应为 'advertisements'（或 'ads'）；'when I was child' 缺少限定词 'a'；描述过去习惯使用过去时 'watched' 而不是现在时 'watch'。建议：确认词汇意图（ads），在表示过去习惯时使用过去时，并在可数名词前加冠词。

× I need spend a lot of time to wait the advertisement and therefore I don't like it.

✓ I had to spend a lot of time waiting for the advertisements, so I didn't like them.

动词时态和非谓语形式错误。叙述过去的习惯或经历应使用过去时；'need spend' 用法错误，应为 'had to spend' 或 'needed to spend'；'to wait the advertisement' 不符合搭配，应为 'waiting for the advertisements'。此外，代词要与复数 'advertisements' 一致用 'them'。建议：过去叙述用过去时，动词后接适当的非谓语形式（spend time doing），并用 'wait for' 表示等待某物。

× I think it's very common.

✓ I think ads are very common.

句子模糊，原句 'it's very common' 中 'it' 指代不明。应明确主语为 'ads' 或 'advertisements'，并注意主谓一致（ads are）。建议：明确指代，保持主谓一致性。

× In my opinion, if the advertising is colorful or meaningful, I will focus on it.

✓ In my opinion, if an advertisement is colorful or meaningful, I will pay attention to it.

词类和动词搭配需要调整。'advertising' 作不可数名词泛指广告整体，而此处应指单个广告用 'an advertisement' 或 'a commercial'；'focus on it' 可以，但更自然的表达是 'pay attention to it'。时态（一般现在/将来）可保留。建议：区分 'advertising' 与 'an advertisement'，并使用更自然的动词短语 'pay attention to'。

× For example, help the missed child find his family.

✓ For example, showing ads that help a missing child find his family.

量词与形容词使用不当导致短语不完整。'missed child' 用法错误，应为 'missing child' 或 'missing/abducted child'；句子片段缺少主语和谓语，需完整表达为 'showing ads that help...'。建议：使用正确形容词 'missing' 并将句子补全为完整的从句或短语。

× I think is meaningful advertising.

✓ I think that's a meaningful advertisement.

形容词和句子结构错误。原句缺少主语 'it' 或 'that'，并且 'meaningful advertising' 虽可接受，但指单个广告时更自然用 'a meaningful advertisement'。建议：补全主语并用冠词和名词形式匹配。

× I will spend many times to look at this advertising.

✓ I will spend a lot of time looking at this advertisement.

时态与量词、非谓语形式使用错误。'many times' 用法不当，应为 'a lot of time'（表示花费时间）或 'many times'（表示多次）；'to look at this advertising' 更自然为 'looking at this advertisement'。建议：区分 'time' 与 'times'，使用动名词短语 'spend time doing something'。

× Yes, of course a lot of advertising in our phone or computer due to the fact that advertising in Internet is a good way.

✓ Yes, of course there are a lot of advertisements on our phones or computers because advertising on the Internet is a good way.

单复数和结构错误。原句缺少 'there are'，'a lot of advertising'（不可数）可改为 'a lot of advertisements'（可数复数）与 'phones or computers' 一致；介词应为 'on our phones' 和 'on the Internet'。建议：注意存在句型 'there is/are'，并根据名词可数性选择 'advertising' 或 'advertisements'，正确使用介词 'on'。

× However, I also think many advertising is boring.

✓ However, I also think many advertisements are boring.

形容词与名词形式及主谓一致错误。'many advertising is' 错误，'advertising' 若用 'many' 则需改为复数 'advertisements'，并与复数谓语 'are' 一致。建议：使用 'many advertisements are' 或 'a lot of advertising is'。

× It's not socially meaningful, it's always waste our time.

✓ They're not socially meaningful — they always waste our time.

副词位置与主谓一致错误。原句 'it's always waste our time' 结构错误，缺少动词形式和主语复数一致，应为 'they always waste our time'；'not socially meaningful' 指复数时也要用复数主语。建议：保持代词指代一致（they/them），并正确使用动词形式。