Part 1
Giám khảo
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I wasn't impressed by any advertisements because I didn't have access to a smart smartphone or computer to see them.
Giám khảo
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Thí sinh
Yes, I saw a lot of advertisements on the back of the seat in trains or planes.
Giám khảo
Do you like advertisements?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I don't like advertisements because some of them are misleading.
Giám khảo
What kind of advertising do you like?
Thí sinh
I prefer advertisements that are relevant to my daily needs. For example, a dentist advertisement is very helpful.
Giám khảo
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
Thí sinh
I rarely see advertisements on my phone or computer because I use ad blocker extensions and privacy settings.
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,缺乏细节和连贯性。可以补充具体回忆(如在电视、报纸或街上是否见过广告)、说明原因(为什么没有机会接触)并用衔接词连接句子,使答案更自然流畅。注意控制句子数量不超过五句。
Ví dụ: I don't remember any specific ads from my childhood because we didn't have a smartphone or computer back then. Instead, I occasionally saw ads on TV or posters in the street, but they never caught my attention. Because of limited exposure, I never formed a lasting impression of any commercial.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Điểm: 76.0Gợi ý: 回答简明且相关,但时态和细节可以更准确。建议说明频率(often/usually)并补充一个例子或感受,用连词使句子更连贯。保持不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often see many advertisements on the backs of seats in trains and planes. For example, there are usually ads for local tourist attractions or mobile apps, which are easy to notice during a journey.
Do you like advertisements?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 表达清晰但过于简单。建议先给出直接回答,再解释原因并举具体例子(例如虚假宣传或夸大效果),用because或for instance等连词增强逻辑性。
Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't like many advertisements because some of them are misleading. For instance, a beauty product ad once promised instant results that I never experienced, so I find such claims untrustworthy.
What kind of advertising do you like?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答明确且有例子,但可更具体并扩展原因。建议说明为何相关性重要(节省时间、实用性)并举一两个更常见的例子,用连接词自然衔接。
Ví dụ: I prefer ads that are relevant to my daily needs because they offer useful information quickly. For example, a local dentist ad helps me find services nearby, and grocery or public transport ads help me plan my shopping or commute.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答具体且有原因,结构良好。可以稍微扩展说明使用广告拦截的影响(比如更好浏览体验)或偶尔仍会看到的情况,使用连词使表达更完整。
Ví dụ: I rarely see ads on my phone or computer because I use ad-blocker extensions and strict privacy settings. As a result, my browsing is less interrupted, although I sometimes encounter sponsored posts on social media.
× I wasn't impressed by any advertisements because I didn't have access to a smart smartphone or computer to see them.
✓ I wasn't impressed by any advertisements because I didn't have access to a smartphone or a computer to see them.
句子中的时态使用正确(均为过去时),主要问题是词语搭配与冗余。英文中通常说 'a smartphone' 而不是 'a smart smartphone',因为 'smartphone' 本身已包含 'smart' 意义;另外 'smartphone or computer' 前加不定冠词使结构不平行,建议改为 'a smartphone or a computer' 或省略重复冠词。建议:使用常见搭配 'smartphone',并保持并列名词的冠词一致性。
× Yes, I saw a lot of advertisements on the back of the seat in trains or planes.
✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on the backs of seats in trains and on planes.
问句是在一般现在时询问习惯性行为,回答应使用一般现在时('see')而不是过去时('saw')。此外,名词复数与所有格表达需一致:座位的后面应为 'the backs of seats' 或更自然地 'the back of the seat' 配合单数/复数语境;用 'in trains or planes' 表达不够准确,常用介词是 'on trains' 和 'on planes'。建议使用一般现在时,并调整介词与复数形式以表达习惯性情况。
× To be honest, I don't like advertisements because some of them are misleading.
✓ To be honest, I don't like advertisements because some of them are misleading.
此句语法正确,时态(一般现在时)与语境一致,含义清晰,无需修改。解释:表示一般态度应使用一般现在时。
× I prefer advertisements that are relevant to my daily needs. For example, a dentist advertisement is very helpful.
✓ I prefer advertisements that are relevant to my daily needs. For example, a dentist's advertisement is very helpful.
问题出在名词所有格或冠词用法上。英语中表示某职业或服务相关的广告时,更自然的表达是使用所有格 'a dentist's advertisement' 或者改为 'a dental advertisement' / 'an advertisement for a dentist'。原句 'a dentist advertisement' 不符合常用搭配。建议使用所有格或改为更自然的名词短语。
× I rarely see advertisements on my phone or computer because I use ad blocker extensions and privacy settings.
✓ I rarely see advertisements on my phone or computer because I use ad-blocker extensions and privacy settings.
句子整体时态正确(一般现在时),主要是拼写与复合词问题。'ad blocker' 常写为复合词 'ad-blocker' 或 'ad blocker' 两者都可,但在习惯用法中连字符更常见;此外其余结构正确。建议:保留一般现在时,采用常见拼写 'ad-blocker extensions' 或 'ad blocker extensions'。