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Gợi ý: 回答不连贯，语法错误较多，信息量少。应先用一句主题句直接回答问题，然后用一到两句具体细节（比如广告内容、为什么印象深刻、记忆点）扩展，注意时态和名词使用，避免重复并使用连接词使表述更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes. One advertisement that stuck with me from childhood was for a toy car. It had a catchy jingle and bright, animated eyes on the car, which made it easy to remember and fun to watch.

Gợi ý: 表达混乱，句子结构和词汇使用不当，信息不明确。应先直接回答，然后用具体例子说明在什么交通工具上看到广告、广告位置或形式，并用连接词（for example, because）组织句子。注意单复数和时态。

Ví dụ: Yes, I see many advertisements on public transport, especially on trains and buses. For example, there are large posters and TV screens near the doors that show colourful ads, often featuring humorous characters or animations.

Gợi ý: 回答总体可以理解但用词错误（’eyes’应为‘ads’或‘ads with eyes’），句子重复且语法不准确。建议先简短回答喜好，然后解释原因并举例，注意词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

Ví dụ: It depends on the advertisement. I like humorous ads because they are catchy and memorable; for instance, a funny commercial once made me remember the brand and want to try the product.

Gợi ý: 表达重复且不够准确，词汇使用错误。建议先给出明确的类别（e.g. humorous ads），然后用一到两句说明原因并给出具体例子或效果，使用连接词避免重复。

Ví dụ: I prefer humorous advertisements because they make the product memorable and enjoyable. For example, a clever comedy ad once made me laugh and remember the brand long after I saw it.

Gợi ý: 有时态和主谓不一致错误，表述不够自然且用词混乱（重复使用‘eyes’）。建议先肯定/否定，然后描述看到广告的频率和形式（apps, websites, pop-ups），并说明你的感受和条件（why you watch some ads），用连接词组织句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see ads on my phone and computer, especially in apps and on websites. They can be annoying, but if an ad is creative or funny, I will stop to watch it.

× It has a toy car eyes in my brain.

✓ It has a toy car stuck in my brain.

原句中“toy car eyes”不符合英语习惯，且语义不明确。把“stuck”作为过去分词用来表示“留在脑海中/难以忘记”的状态。建议用固定表达“stuck in my brain”来表达“在我脑海里”。

× It has a fun song.

✓ It has a fun song.

句子语法正确，仅为补充说明：若想更自然可改为“it had a catchy song”根据上下文（过去时）决定时态。

× Yes, I see a lot of eyes on trains.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of ads on trains.

原句用“eyes”显然是误用，应为“ads”（advertisements）。保持一般现在时描述经常发生的事实是正确的。建议注意词汇选择，避免将相似发音词替换错误。

× When I take trains, I will see it before have a Sport TV.

✓ When I take trains, I used to see them before there was a sports TV channel.

原句时态和结构混乱。“before have a Sport TV”不符合英语语法，需补全主语与动词并调整时态。若想表达过去经常看到广告、在体育频道出现之前，建议使用“used to”或过去时并加入“there was”。同时“it/them”要与“ads”一致使用复数。

× It have many eyes like humorous borrowings.

✓ They have many ads with humorous slogans.

原句主谓不一致，“It have”错误；并且“eyes”与“borrowings”用法不当。应使用复数主语“they”对应动词“have”，并用更自然的短语“humorous slogans/ads”。

× It depends on what eyes.

✓ It depends on what ads they are.

原句“what eyes”是错误的名词选择且缺少完整结构。更自然的表达是“depends on what ads they are”或“depends on what kind of ads”。注意代词和名词的一致性。

× I really like Humorous Eyes because it's catchy, I can remember the product and I want to buy it.

✓ I really like humorous ads because they're catchy; I can remember the product and want to buy it.

原句中“Humorous Eyes”应为“humorous ads”，另外时态与代词需一致（they're 对应复数）。用分号或句号分开两个独立分句更清晰。

× I like humorous eyes because I can quickly remember what product they want to sell and catch.

✓ I like humorous ads because I can quickly remember which product they're selling and they are catchy.

原句“humorous eyes”“want to sell and catch”语义混乱。改为“which product they're selling”为正确的宾语从句，补上“they are catchy”来表达“吸引人”。

× I could remember.

✓ I can remember.

句子位于描述一般情况，使用一般现在时更合适；原句“could”表示过去或能力，改变为“can”以表达现在的能力或习惯。

× Yes, I often see advertisements when I are on my phone and computer.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements when I am on my phone or computer.

原句中主语与动词不一致（I are 错误），应为“I am”。另外“and”改为“or”更符合“在手机或电脑上时”的语境，但“and”也可接受，取决于意图。

× Some eyes are in the application.

✓ Some ads appear in apps.

原句“Some eyes”词汇错误，应为“Some ads”；“in the application”不自然，常用“in apps”或“in the application”。建议使用“appear”或“are shown”。

× I know it's annoying.

✓ I know they're annoying.

原句“it’s annoying”指代不明。应使用复数代词“they're”来指代“ads”。保持代词与先行词一致。

× If the eyes very interesting, I will see.

✓ If the ads are very interesting, I will watch them.

原句缺少系动词“are”，且“see”不恰当（通常用“watch”或“look at”来表示观看广告）。同时“the eyes”误用，应为“the ads”。