Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, uh, when I was a child, uh, I think, uh, I, I say uh, uh, pencil advance, uh, advancement, uh, but it's so expensive, so I can't buy, can't, can't buy it.
Giám khảo
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Thí sinh
Why would a child I think I looked a advanced advancement on the plant. It's about the book for a.
Giám khảo
Do you like advertisements?
Thí sinh
No, I don't like advertisements because I think it's so, uh, money. It's and uh, it's not uh, fun and uh, uh, good. For example, uh, in my, uh, in the road, some advancement is so, uh, ugly.
Giám khảo
What kind of advertising do you like?
Thí sinh
I don't like advertising, but uh, only the uh, print, uh, advice thing for me is good, uh, about uh, uh, the flower or the, uh, tree.
Giám khảo
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
Thí sinh
Peter yes, while I was 2 uh, see, uh, see the on the Internet or the umm uh, use the social media. I always to say the advanced TA advertisement uh.
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Part 1
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中充满了重复的语气词“uh”，影响了表达的流畅性和自然度。建议减少语气词的使用，直接回答问题，并且补充具体细节来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, I remember an advertisement for a special pencil that looked very advanced. However, it was quite expensive, so I couldn't afford to buy it.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，语句结构混乱，未能直接回应问题。建议先明确回答问题，然后用简洁的句子补充细节，确保表达连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and buses. They usually promote books or other products.
Do you like advertisements?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中语气词过多，表达不够连贯，且用词不准确。建议用更准确的词汇表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I don't like advertisements because they often seem annoying and waste money. For example, some billboards on the road look very ugly.
What kind of advertising do you like?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰，缺少连贯性。建议直接表达喜欢的广告类型，并用具体例子支持观点。
Ví dụ: I don't like most advertisements, but I enjoy printed ads about flowers or trees because they look beautiful and natural.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答语句不完整且含糊，缺乏逻辑。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并补充具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements on the Internet and social media when I use my phone or computer.
Ngữ pháp
× I can't buy, can't, can't buy it.
✓ I can't buy it.
句子中重复使用了“can't buy”，造成冗余，应删除多余部分，使句子简洁。
× Why would a child I think I looked a advanced advancement on the plant.
✓ I think I saw an advanced advertisement on the plane.
句子结构混乱，缺少主谓一致，且单词拼写错误。应调整语序并更正单词，使句子通顺。
× It's about the book for a.
✓ It's about a book.
介词“for”使用不当，且句子不完整。应去掉“for a”，使句子完整且符合语法。
× I think it's so, uh, money.
✓ I think it costs so much money.
“so money”表达不正确，应使用“costs so much money”来表达价格高。
× It's and uh, it's not uh, fun and uh, uh, good.
✓ It's not fun or good.
“and”连接的形容词表达不清晰，且重复使用“uh”。应简化为“not fun or good”。
× some advancement is so, uh, ugly.
✓ some advertisements are so ugly.
“advancement”用词不当，应使用复数“advertisements”，且谓语动词需与主语复数一致。
× I don't like advertising, but uh, only the uh, print, uh, advice thing for me is good, uh, about uh, uh, the flower or the, uh, tree.
✓ I don't like advertising, but only printed ads about flowers or trees are good for me.
“advice thing”用词错误，应为“ads”，且主谓一致需调整。
× I always to say the advanced TA advertisement uh.
✓ I always see advanced advertisements.
“to say”用法错误，应使用“see”表示看到广告，且“TA”无意义，应删除。
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