Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, avoid filler words like 'uh', and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about why the advertisement impressed you.

Ví dụ: Yes, there was an advertisement of a small, multicolored doll that impressed me as a child because it looked unique and attractive. I always wanted that doll after seeing the ad, which made it memorable for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be more coherent and grammatically correct. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your points clearly and provide specific examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and airplanes. People usually notice these ads during long-distance travel, especially on trains, where advertisements are more common.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Avoid repetition and explain your reasons clearly with linking words.

Ví dụ: No, I don't like advertisements because they often interrupt when I am watching movies or web series. Moreover, I feel that some ads provide misleading information about new products.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why. Use complete sentences and avoid contradictory statements. Provide specific examples and linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer video advertisements, especially those about chocolates and dresses, because they are interesting and appealing. I often see these ads on television and social media.

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements on my smartphone because I use it daily for at least two hours. I usually encounter ads on YouTube and various apps since I don't use a computer much.

× Yes, absolutely there are empty advertisement, but I would like to talk about an advertisement of a small doll which I always think that the doll I want is that doll because, uh, it is very unique as well as multi colored and the advertisement is very.

✓ Yes, absolutely there are many advertisements, but I would like to talk about an advertisement of a small doll which I always think is the doll I want because it is very unique as well as multicolored and the advertisement is very good.

The word 'advertisement' is countable and should be pluralized as 'advertisements' when referring to more than one. Also, 'empty advertisement' is unclear; likely the intended meaning is 'many advertisements'. 'Multi colored' should be one word 'multicolored'. The sentence structure was also improved for clarity.

× Uh, sometimes people always tries to see advertisement on uh, trains As for long distance travelling, so that's mean is train.

✓ Uh, sometimes people always try to see advertisements on trains for long distance travelling, so that means trains.

The verb 'try' should be in base form 'try' after 'people' which is plural, not 'tries'. 'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match the context. The phrase 'so that's mean is train' is incorrect and corrected to 'so that means trains' for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× Yes, there is no doubt that advertisements on trains are much more available as well as on the airplane.

✓ Yes, there is no doubt that advertisements on trains are much more available as well as on airplanes.

The word 'airplane' should be plural 'airplanes' to match the plural 'trains' and the general context of multiple modes of transport.

× No, I don't like advertisements because advertisements pop up when and individual is enjoying his or her movies, web series or any favorite seed programs.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements because advertisements pop up when an individual is enjoying his or her movies, web series or any favorite TV programs.

The article 'and' before 'individual' is incorrect; it should be 'an'. Also, 'seed programs' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'TV programs' is more appropriate. The plural 'programs' is correct here.

× I like videos advertisement but it is not my cup of tea because advertisements are only some kind of awareness but I don't remember that also.

✓ I like video advertisements but they are not my cup of tea because advertisements are only some kind of awareness but I don't remember them either.

'Videos advertisement' should be 'video advertisements' to correctly use the adjective form 'video' and plural noun 'advertisements'. 'It is' changed to 'they are' to agree with plural 'advertisements'. 'Also' changed to 'either' for negative context.

× Yes, I often see advertisement on my smartphone because I don't use computers, whereas I use my smartphone daily for at least two hours and I see advertisement on YouTube's and various apps.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements on my smartphone because I don't use computers, whereas I use my smartphone daily for at least two hours and I see advertisements on YouTube and various apps.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match the context of multiple ads. 'YouTube's' is incorrect possessive form; it should be 'YouTube' as a proper noun without possessive.