Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 구성하며, 질문에 직접적으로 답하고 구체적인 예시를 들어 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a TV commercial from my childhood that featured a family cooking together on weekends with cheerful background music. I used to imitate the scenes and asked my dad to cook with me.

Gợi ý: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 연결어 사용이 부족하고 문장이 다소 단조롭습니다. 연결어를 활용해 문장 간 논리적 흐름을 강화하고, 좀 더 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 좋겠습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see many advertisements on subways and taxis, such as posters and digital screens promoting mobile apps, food delivery, and skincare products. These ads are usually colorful and eye-catching, which helps me pass the time during my commute.

Gợi ý: 답변이 간결하지만, 좀 더 구체적인 이유와 예시를 들어 내용을 풍부하게 만들 필요가 있습니다. 또한, 연결어를 사용해 문장 간 자연스러운 흐름을 만들어야 합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I especially enjoy creative and fun advertisements nowadays. For example, ads for cell phones often tell short stories that highlight the product's features, which makes them entertaining to watch.

Gợi ý: 답변이 명확하고 구체적이지만, 문법적 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 자연스럽게 다듬고, 연결어를 사용해 문장 간 흐름을 개선하세요.

Ví dụ: I like advertisements that tell a story or show memorable videos within a short time. For instance, Samsung's corporate ads often depict family stories, and travel agency commercials showcase beautiful mountains and vast oceans.

Gợi ý: 답변이 불완전하고 중간에 멈추는 부분이 있어 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 불필요한 중복과 망설임을 줄이며 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I see advertisements every day on my phone and computer because my smartphone is essential for daily life. Whenever I turn it on, ads usually appear on apps or websites I use.

× Yes, I remember arriving commercial suite to travel background music and adapt cooking lemon for his family on the weekends.

✓ Yes, I remember a commercial about travel background music and cooking lemon for his family on the weekends.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure. 'Arriving commercial suite' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning by specifying 'a commercial about travel background music and cooking lemon for his family on the weekends.' This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× When I was a kid.

✓ When I was a kid,

The original sentence is a sentence fragment without a main verb or complete thought. Adding a comma connects it to the following sentence, making it grammatically correct.

× I imitated the commercials a lot and begged my dad to Make Love and for me.

✓ I imitated the commercials a lot and begged my dad to make love for me.

The phrase 'Make Love and for me' is unclear and incorrectly capitalized. The corrected sentence uses lowercase 'make love' and removes the unnecessary 'and' to make the sentence coherent.

× There are posters, screens and stickers with the advertisement on both subways and even taxis, including mobile apps, food delivery and skin care products.

✓ There are posters, screens, and stickers with advertisements on both subways and even taxis, including mobile apps, food delivery, and skin care products.

The phrase 'with the advertisement on both subways' is incorrect; it should be 'with advertisements on both subways.' Also, commas are added for clarity in the list. 'Advertisement' should be plural to match the context.

× Some transit advertisements are eye-catching enough to pass time.

✓ Some transit advertisements are eye-catching enough to help pass the time.

The phrase 'to pass time' is incomplete. The correct expression is 'to help pass the time,' which means to make waiting more enjoyable.

× Advertisements for cell phones and pads are so fun because they show some episodes related to the products.

✓ Advertisements for cell phones and tablets are so fun because they show some episodes related to the products.

The word 'pads' is unclear; 'tablets' is the correct term for electronic devices. This correction improves clarity.

× I like advertisements that are related story or show memorable videos in a short period of time.

✓ I like advertisements that have related stories or show memorable videos in a short period of time.

The phrase 'related story' is incorrect; it should be 'related stories' or 'have related stories.' The verb 'are related story' is ungrammatical. The correction uses 'have related stories' to fix this.

× For example, I like Samsung's corporate image ads that tell a family story or travel agency commercials that show cool mountains and wide open oceans.

✓ For example, I like Samsung's corporate image ads that tell a family story, or travel agency commercials that show cool mountains and wide-open oceans.

A comma is added before 'or' to separate the two examples clearly. Also, 'wide open' should be hyphenated as 'wide-open' when used as a compound adjective.

× I would say I said advertisements every day on my phone or computer because when I uh, a smartphone is an essential item for my daily life.

✓ I would say I see advertisements every day on my phone or computer because a smartphone is an essential item for my daily life.

The phrase 'I said advertisements' is incorrect; it should be 'I see advertisements.' Also, 'when I uh,' is incomplete and removed for clarity.

× So when I turn on the phone, uh, I can't.

✓ So when I turn on the phone, I can't avoid seeing advertisements.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'avoid seeing advertisements' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.