Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够完整，表达不流畅，且句子结构重复。建议简洁明了地描述广告内容和感受，避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, there was an advertisement that impressed me when I was a child. It showed a little boy washing his mother's shoes, which I found very touching because it highlighted the love and care between family members.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，缺乏具体细节。建议用连贯的句子描述广告的种类和位置，避免重复和模糊表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and other public transport. They usually include posters for books, shops, and various products, which are displayed inside the vehicles to attract passengers' attention.

Gợi ý: 回答含糊不清，语法和表达错误严重，难以理解。建议明确表达观点，使用简单句子说明不喜欢广告的原因。

Ví dụ: No, I don't like advertisements because they often try to persuade us to buy things we don't really need, and they appear too frequently in our daily lives.

Gợi ý: 表达不流畅，句子结构混乱，缺少具体细节。建议清晰说明喜欢的广告类型及原因，使用连贯句子。

Ví dụ: I like artistic advertisements because they often have romantic scenes and use creative visuals, which make them enjoyable to watch.

Gợi ý: 回答有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，具体说明网络广告的普遍性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone or computer. Online ads are everywhere because companies pay a lot of money to promote their products on the internet.

× I I have a very impressive advertisement.

✓ I have a very impressive advertisement.

句子中重复使用了“I”，属于句子结构错误，应删除多余的“I”。

× it was a little boy who washes his mother's shoes.

✓ it was a little boy who washed his mother's shoes.

句子描述过去的事情，动词应使用过去时态“washed”，而不是现在时“washes”。

× It gives us the.

✓ It gives us a feeling of warmth.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，导致表达不清，应补充完整的宾语。

× I think every transport I see many advertisement.

✓ I think every transport has many advertisements.

“advertisement”应使用复数形式“advertisements”，且句子缺少谓语动词，应补充“has”。

× Some something is just the the books and the photoshops in there to tell something.

✓ Some are just books and photoshops there to tell something.

句子结构混乱，重复使用“the”，且表达不清，应简化并调整结构使其通顺。

× I don't like advertisements because I think advertisement is the somebody who fall falls as to new something I we really don't know want to know it is include our LA daily life and.

✓ I don't like advertisements because I think advertisements are something that mislead us about things we really don't want to know, and they include our daily life.

句子中“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”，且动词“fall falls”错误，应改为“mislead”或类似表达，句子结构混乱需调整。

× I think I like the artist advertising because I think it's really romantic and I like the advertising.

✓ I think I like artist advertising because I think it's really romantic and I like the advertising.

“the artist advertising”中的“the”使用不当，应去掉。

× Have, uh, romantic scene and use some artists away.

✓ It has romantic scenes and uses some artists' ways.

“away”用法错误，应为“ways”或“styles”，且句子缺少主语和谓语，应补充完整。

× Yes, I often say advertisement when I on my phone or computer.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements when I am on my phone or computer.

“say”应为“see”，且缺少“am”作为系动词，且“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”。

× Advertisements on the Internet is everywhere.

✓ Advertisements on the Internet are everywhere.

主语“Advertisements”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× The shoppers pay many money to let people say advertisements everywhere on the Internet.

✓ The shoppers pay a lot of money to let people see advertisements everywhere on the Internet.

“say”应为“see”，且“many money”表达错误，应为“a lot of money”。