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Gợi ý: 回答中有些语法和表达不够自然，且最后一句话不完整，建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性。可以适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, of course. When I was a child, a charity advertisement impressed me deeply because it compared a family to a tree. It explained that just like a tree's roots support the whole tree, taking care of our elderly family members helps keep the family strong and united. This message stayed with me because it showed the importance of family support.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为具体，但部分表达不够准确，如“public transportations”应为“public transport”，且最后一句缺少主语。建议注意词汇准确性和句子完整性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and other public transport. For example, the corridors of train and subway stations are filled with bright LED advertising screens. Most of them promote new products or local restaurants, which can easily catch passengers' attention.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“from it”应为“from them”，且表达略显简单。建议丰富词汇，注意代词一致性，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Well, it depends. I really like some advertisements that have good design and effectively promote products. I can learn a lot of new information from them. However, some advertisements are ugly and annoying, so I don't like those.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，内容具体且连贯，但最后一句中“leaves a lasting impression to me”表达不够地道，建议改为“leaves a lasting impression on me”。

Ví dụ: Well, I prefer advertisements that have attractive designs and provide useful information because they help me learn new things. For example, some ads include memorable slogans or interesting facts, which make them more engaging and informative. This kind of advertising not only catches my attention but also leaves a lasting impression on me.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够自然，如“It's very annoying to me”可简化为“It's very annoying”，且最后一句语法不完整。建议注意句子结构和自然表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements when I open an app or browse the Internet. Ads can pop up from any corner of my screen, which is very annoying because I can't choose whether to see them or not. They distract me from what I am scrolling through.

× I often see a lot of advertising on trains and other public transportations.

✓ I often see a lot of advertising on trains and other public transport.

“transportation”在这里用作不可数名词，表示交通工具的总称，不需要复数形式。使用复数形式“transportations”是不正确的。

× For example, the corridors of train station and subway stations are filled with bright LED advertising screens.

✓ For example, the corridors of train stations and subway stations are filled with bright LED advertising screens.

“train station”前缺少复数形式，应与“subway stations”保持一致，表示多个车站。

× It can catch passengers attention.

✓ It can catch passengers' attention.

“passengers attention”缺少所有格形式，应为“passengers' attention”，表示乘客的注意力。

× I can catch a lot of new information from it.

✓ I can catch a lot of new information from them.

前文提到的是“advertisements”，复数形式，代词应使用复数“them”而非单数“it”。

× This kind of advertising not only catches my attention but also leaves a lasting impression to me.

✓ This kind of advertising not only catches my attention but also leaves a lasting impression on me.

固定搭配是“leave an impression on someone”，介词应为“on”而非“to”。

× It will distract me from what I am just scrolling.

✓ It will distract me from what I am just scrolling through.

动词“scroll”后面需要介词“through”来完成短语“scroll through”，表示浏览内容。