Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'toy commercial' 앞에 관사를 넣고, 시제 일치를 주의하세요. 또한, 문장을 간결하게 하면서도 구체적인 설명을 추가하는 것이 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a toy commercial from my childhood. It was always on TV and had a catchy melody that stuck in my head.

Gợi ý: 문법과 단어 사용에 오류가 있습니다. 'advertisement'는 복수형 'advertisements'로 수정하고, 'on screen or word'는 의미가 불분명하므로 명확하게 표현하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually see a wide range of advertisements when I'm on trains or buses. They appear on screens or posters inside the vehicles.

Gợi ý: 의미 전달이 명확하지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'summer informative'는 아마 'some are informative'를 의미하는 것 같습니다. 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 고치세요.

Ví dụ: I don't like most advertisements. Of course, some are informative, but many others are annoying.

Gợi ý: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 문법적으로도 맞지 않습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 좋아하는 광고 유형을 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Ví dụ: I like public service advertisements because they raise awareness about important social issues.

Gợi ý: 'pawn'과 'it come to'는 오타로 보이며 문장이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 정확한 단어를 사용하고 문장을 명확하게 표현하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone or computer. For example, banners usually appear on social media platforms.

× Yes, I remember toy commercial when I was younger.

✓ Yes, I remember a toy commercial when I was younger.

The noun 'commercial' is singular and requires an article 'a' before it. Without the article, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× It had a catchy melody that makes me get stuck in my head.

✓ It had a catchy melody that made me get stuck in my head.

The verb 'makes' does not agree with the past tense context set by 'had'. The verb should be in past tense 'made' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes, I usually see a wide range of advertising when I'm on trains or bus.

✓ Yes, I usually see a wide range of advertising when I'm on trains or buses.

The word 'bus' should be plural 'buses' to match the plural 'trains' and maintain parallel structure.

× There are lots of advertisement on screen or word.

✓ There are lots of advertisements on screen or word.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with 'lots of', which indicates a plural noun.

× Of course summer informative, but others are annoying.

✓ Of course some are informative, but others are annoying.

The word 'summer' is incorrect here; it should be 'some' to indicate an unspecified quantity. 'Summer' is a noun referring to a season, not an adjective describing advertisements.

× I like a shirt on winning pro advertising such as public advertisements for example, I like shirt and.

✓ I like short and winning professional advertisements, such as public service advertisements.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Shirt' should be 'short', 'pro' should be 'professional', and the sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correctness.

× Yeah, I often see advertisements when I use my pawn or it come to.

✓ Yeah, I often see advertisements when I use my phone or computer.

The words 'pawn' and 'it come to' are incorrect. They should be 'phone' and 'computer' respectively to make sense in context.

× For example, it usually appeared on social media as a banner.

✓ For example, it usually appears on social media as a banner.

The adverb 'usually' indicates habitual action, so the present tense 'appears' is appropriate rather than the past tense 'appeared'.