Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“attachments”应为“advertisements”，“impressive”应为“impressed”。建议直接回答问题，使用正确词汇，并简洁表达。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I don't remember any advertisements that impressed me as a child because I wasn't interested in commercials at that time.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“open and see”，“in inside the vehicle vehicles”。建议简洁明了地描述，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see many advertisements when I take buses or trains. They are displayed inside the vehicles and on the station walls.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“interrupt me”应为“interrupting me”，“say watch the advertisements is waste”表达不清。建议使用完整句子，表达清晰。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't like advertisements because they often interrupt what I'm doing and waste my time.

Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱，表达不清，如“perform to creative advertisements I need will be funding”。建议简洁表达喜欢的广告类型，并给出理由。

Ví dụ: Generally, I am not very interested in advertisements, but I like creative ones that are informative and useful for the future.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但可以增加连接词使表达更流畅，同时避免口语化词汇如“you know”。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. When I use my phone or computer, advertisements often pop up and disturb me, which I find really annoying.

× I can't clearly remember any attachments that made me impressive when I was a child.

✓ I can't clearly remember any advertisements that impressed me when I was a child.

这里使用了错误的过去分词形式“impressive”，应使用动词的过去式“impressed”来表达“使我印象深刻”。

× Actually, I'm I was not interested in commercial at that time.

✓ Actually, I was not interested in commercials at that time.

“commercial”应使用复数形式“commercials”，因为指的是广告的复数。

× I open and see a lot of advertisements when I take public transportation at buses or trains like and they are in inside the vehicle vehicles and on the station wall.

✓ I often see a lot of advertisements when I take public transportation like buses or trains; they are inside the vehicles and on the station walls.

“vehicle vehicles”重复，应去掉一个；“station wall”应为复数“station walls”，因为车站墙壁通常不止一面。

× I open and see a lot of advertisements when I take public transportation at buses or trains like and they are in inside the vehicle vehicles and on the station wall.

✓ I often see a lot of advertisements when I take public transportation like buses or trains; they are inside the vehicles and on the station walls.

“at buses or trains like”语序错误，应调整为“like buses or trains”；“in inside”重复，应去掉“in”。

× they are always interrupt me.

✓ they always interrupt me.

“interrupt”是动词，前面不需要“are”，应直接用一般现在时“interrupt”。

× What I'm doing, you know, say watch the advertisements is waste, waste my time.

✓ What I'm doing, you know, watching the advertisements is a waste of my time.

句子结构混乱，“say watch the advertisements”不合适，应改为“watching the advertisements”；“waste”应为名词“a waste of”。

× sometimes I perform to creative advertisements I need will be funding and useful in the future.

✓ sometimes I prefer creative advertisements that I think will be fun and useful in the future.

“perform to”用法错误，应为“prefer”；“funding”应为“fun”；句子结构不完整，需补充“that I think”。

× the advertisements always pop up and disturb me, so that is really annoying.

✓ the advertisements always pop up and disturb me, so that is really annoying.

该句无明显语法错误，符合语法规范。