Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然流畅，存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节，使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I don't remember any advertisement that impressed me as a child because I usually focused on TV shows instead. I found most advertisements boring and didn't pay much attention to them.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，内容不够具体。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，补充具体细节，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have seen many advertisements on trains and other transport. For example, when I traveled to Shenzhen, there were many ads inside the train showing different products, and some included phone numbers to contact.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够准确，语法和词汇使用有待提高。建议明确表达观点，使用恰当的词汇，并补充具体原因和例子。

Ví dụ: I like old advertisements because they clearly explain the products and their features. This helps me learn more about items before buying them.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，明确表达喜好，并举例说明。

Ví dụ: I like advertisements that are relaxed and interesting. For example, ads that clearly show the product and explain its features help me understand it better and make informed decisions.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达有误。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，具体描述广告出现的场景。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone. For example, when I watch videos or browse social media, ads usually pop up suddenly showing products and providing information about them.

× Well, to be honest, I don't think there's an advertisement that impressed me when I was a trial because I really don't focus on this advertisement.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't think there's an advertisement that impressed me when I was a child because I really didn't focus on advertisements.

句子中使用了'trial'，应为'child'，且时态应保持一致，'don't focus'应改为过去时'didn't focus'，句子结构更通顺。

× I prefer to watch the TV show and some funny things, and I think the advertisements were very boring.

✓ I prefer to watch TV shows and some funny things, and I think the advertisements were very boring.

'TV show'应为复数形式'tv shows'，因为表示一般爱好，复数更合适。

× Yes, I have seen a lot of advertisements on chains and other transport in my memory.

✓ Yes, I have seen a lot of advertisements on trains and other transport in my memory.

'chains'应为'trains'，这里是指火车，单词拼写错误。

× I know that when times I went travels to Shenzhen and there's many advertisements in the train, some it showed the products and I try to call the phone and.

✓ I know that when I traveled to Shenzhen, there were many advertisements in the train; some showed the products, and I tried to call the phone number.

句子结构混乱，时态不一致，'went travels'应为'I traveled'，'there's'应为'there were'，'some it showed'应为'some showed'，'try'应为过去时'tried'。

× I like old advertisement sometime because it's easy for us to learn that the products and know how the features they are.

✓ I like old advertisements sometimes because it's easy for us to learn about the products and know their features.

'advertisement'应为复数'advertisements'，'sometime'应为副词'sometimes'，'learn that the products'应为'learn about the products'，'know how the features they are'应为'know their features'。

× What's more, if we want to buy something that we can learn from the advertisements and more information from them.

✓ What's more, if we want to buy something, we can learn more information from the advertisements.

句子缺少主谓结构，'that'多余，应删除，句子更通顺。

× I like some chill and interesting advertisement.

✓ I like some chill and interesting advertisements.

'advertisement'应为复数'advertisements'，因为表示一般喜好。

× For example, the advertisement can show the products to and make me know how the product is and it can make me better understand the products and better make decisions.

✓ For example, the advertisement can show the products and help me understand how the product is, which helps me better understand the products and make better decisions.

句子结构不完整，'show the products to'缺少宾语，改为'show the products and help me understand'更通顺。

× This is what I really like, advancement.

✓ This is what I really like about advertisements.

'advancement'用词不当，句子不完整，改为更合适的表达。

× Well, I'm on. When I'm on my phone, I usually see the advertisement.

✓ Well, when I'm on my phone, I usually see advertisements.

'I'm on.'不完整且无意义，应删除，'advertisement'应为复数'advertisements'。

× For example, when I go through the videos and some social media, they usually suddenly jump the advertisement which showed the products what the product lie and tell us the information about.

✓ For example, when I watch videos and use social media, advertisements usually suddenly pop up, showing the products and telling us information about them.

句子结构混乱，'go through the videos and some social media'改为'watch videos and use social media'更自然，'jump the advertisement'改为'advertisements pop up'，'which showed the products what the product lie and tell us the information about'改为'showing the products and telling us information about them'。