Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“a new commercial”应为“a commercial”或“an advertisement”，以及“sell the milk”应为“bought the milk”。建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用，同时避免冗余，保持句子简洁。

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a commercial from my childhood that showed children growing taller and stronger after drinking milk. The slogan was very catchy and stayed in my mind for a long time, which even influenced me to buy that milk at the supermarket.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“I may”不合适，应去掉或改为“I do”。另外，“seats cover”应为“seat covers”。建议注意语法和词汇的准确性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Advertising is everywhere, even on trains and buses. It seems like they want to make sure people cannot escape ads no matter where they go. For example, even the seat covers now have advertisements on them.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但有语法和用词错误，如“popping up just few seconds”应为“popping up for just a few seconds”。建议注意冠词和介词的使用，同时可以用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I don't like most advertisements because they often feel like noise, especially when they interrupt videos or pop up for just a few seconds. However, I do appreciate creative and funny ads since they really catch my attention.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“tell story”应为“tell a story”，“a bit humor”应为“a bit of humor”，“get your get you”重复。建议注意语法和表达的准确性，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I like advertisements that tell a story or have a bit of humor in them. You know, the ones that make you smile or laugh a lot. If an ad can make you remember it because of its creativity or funny moments, that's a good ad in my opinion.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“open an app or watching a video”应统一时态，“they always popping up”应为“they always pop up”。建议注意动词形式和时态一致性。

Ví dụ: Yes, very often. Especially when I open an app or watch a video, advertisements always pop up every few seconds. I think it's quite annoying.

× It showed children grow taller and stronger after drinking the milk.

✓ It showed children growing taller and stronger after drinking the milk.

The verb 'grow' should be in the present participle form 'growing' to correctly follow the verb 'showed' describing an ongoing action in the commercial.

× The slogan stuck into my head even though I went into supermarket and sell the milk.

✓ The slogan stuck in my head even though I went into the supermarket and sold the milk.

The phrase 'stuck into' is incorrect; it should be 'stuck in'. Also, 'sell' should be in past tense 'sold' to match the past tense context. Additionally, 'supermarket' needs the definite article 'the'.

× The slogan stuck into my head even though I went into supermarket and sell the milk.

✓ The slogan stuck in my head even though I went into the supermarket and sold the milk.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'in' for the phrase 'stuck in my head'. Also, 'into supermarket' should be 'into the supermarket'.

× Yes, definitely I may.

✓ Yes, definitely I do.

The phrase 'I may' is incorrect in this context; the correct auxiliary verb is 'do' to affirm the statement.

× I mean even the seats cover have ads on now.

✓ I mean even the seat covers have ads on now.

The phrase 'seats cover' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'seat covers'.

× I mean even the seats cover have ads on now.

✓ I mean even the seat covers have ads on now.

The noun 'seats cover' should be pluralized correctly as 'seat covers' to match the plural verb 'have'.

× especially when they are interrupting your video or popping up just few seconds.

✓ especially when they are interrupting your video or popping up for just a few seconds.

The phrase 'just few seconds' is missing the article 'a' and the preposition 'for' to indicate duration properly.

× I'd like the ads that tell story or have a bit humor in them.

✓ I'd like the ads that tell a story or have a bit of humor in them.

The noun 'story' needs the article 'a', and 'bit humor' should be 'bit of humor' to be grammatically correct.

× If an ad can get your get you to remember it because of its creativity or funny moments, that's a way in my book.

✓ If an ad can get you to remember it because of its creativity or funny moments, that's a win in my book.

The phrase 'get your get you' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'get you'. Also, 'that's a way in my book' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'that's a win in my book'.

× especially when I open an app or watching a video, they always popping up every few seconds.

✓ especially when I open an app or watch a video, they are always popping up every few seconds.

The verb forms should be parallel: 'open' and 'watch' (both base form). Also, 'they always popping up' needs the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense.