Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains many fillers such as 'you know' and 'uh', which affects the natural flow. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy by directly stating your point. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a milk advertisement from my childhood that had a catchy song. Whenever I heard it, I felt like buying and drinking the milk because the tune was so memorable.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and completeness, especially at the end. Avoid fillers and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements on trains, buses, and even planes, sometimes placed on the backs of seats. However, I find them annoying because they make the space look cluttered and uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and incomplete thoughts. Try to organise your ideas logically, avoid fillers, and express your opinions clearly with supporting reasons.

Ví dụ: I like advertisements that have interesting characters and stories, especially those that make people laugh. However, I dislike ads that lack meaningful content and simply disturb viewers.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect in places. Avoid fillers and ensure your sentences are complete. Use linking words to explain your preferences clearly and provide specific examples.

Ví dụ: I prefer advertisements with interesting content, especially those featuring country songs that can lift people's moods. Such ads have a positive effect on viewers.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains many hesitations and some unclear phrases. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to express your feelings and hopes clearly. Also, avoid repeating filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often encounter annoying advertisements while watching videos on my phone or computer. I find them very distracting, so I hope online ads will be better regulated in the future.

× I was captured the attention about a milk advertisement with a catchy, you know, uh, you know, catchy songs.

✓ I was captured by a milk advertisement with catchy, you know, uh, catchy songs.

The phrase 'captured the attention about' is incorrect. The correct form is 'captured by' when referring to being attracted or held by something. Also, 'songs' should be plural without 'a' before 'catchy'.

× every time I heard about the uh, you know, the songs, I want to, I wanted to buy the music and buy the milk and drink the milk so.

✓ Every time I heard the songs, I wanted to buy the milk and drink it.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I want to' with past tense 'I heard'. It should be consistent in past tense 'I wanted to'. Also, 'buy the music' is unclear and likely incorrect; the focus is on buying milk. 'Drink the milk so' is awkward; 'drink it' is clearer.

× sometimes you can, uh, see the advertisement on the top of the chair.

✓ Sometimes you can see advertisements on the top of the chair.

The phrase 'on the top of the chair' is unusual; 'on top of the chair' is more natural. Also, 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'all kinds' context.

× sometimes it's really annoying because you know, it makes the room not tidy and uh, you feel not at.

✓ Sometimes it's really annoying because it makes the room untidy and you don't feel comfortable.

The phrase 'makes the room not tidy' is awkward; 'makes the room untidy' is correct. 'You feel not at' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'you don't feel comfortable' or similar.

× I preferred the advertising with the, you know, an interesting content under and I think with some country songs which can lift some people's mood under.

✓ I prefer advertising with interesting content and some country songs that can lift people's mood.

'I preferred' is past tense but the context suggests present preference, so 'I prefer' is correct. 'An interesting content' is incorrect; 'content' is uncountable and does not take 'an'. 'Under' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× I think her have a positive.

✓ I think they have a positive effect.

'Her' is incorrect pronoun here; 'they' or 'it' is appropriate depending on the subject. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'effect' clarifies the meaning.

× I always, uh, you know, encounter the annoying advertisements when I see some good videos.

✓ I always encounter annoying advertisements when I watch some good videos.

'See some good videos' is less natural than 'watch some good videos' when referring to videos. 'The annoying advertisements' can be simplified to 'annoying advertisements' for general statements.

× I really uh, hate the uh, sense of uh, you know, uh, distracting.

✓ I really hate the distracting nature of them.

'Sense of distracting' is incorrect; 'distracting' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify. 'Distracting nature' or 'distraction' is correct.

× So, uh, I hope in the future advertisements are regulated by online.

✓ So, I hope advertisements will be regulated online in the future.

The phrase 'regulated by online' is incorrect; 'regulated online' or 'regulated by online platforms' is correct. Also, adding 'will be' clarifies future tense.