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Gợi ý: 回答缺乏直接回应问题的主题句，内容较为重复且表达不够清晰。建议开头直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持观点，避免模糊和重复。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I was impressed by colorful cartoon advertisements on TV because they were very entertaining and memorable.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复且表达不够流畅，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体描述广告的类型或感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see many advertisements both inside and outside trains, such as posters and digital screens, which make me feel that advertisements are everywhere.

Gợi ý: 回答结构混乱，表达不清晰，且句子未完整。建议先明确表达喜欢与否，再用具体例子支持观点，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like advertisements because they often use catchy songs and attractive visuals that make products memorable.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达错误，内容重复且不够具体。建议用更准确的语言描述喜欢的广告类型，并用具体例子说明。

Ví dụ: I like advertisements with creative and colorful designs, such as billboards on the road that catch my attention while driving.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不流畅，语法错误较多，内容不够具体。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并解释原因，避免口语填充词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see many advertisements on my phone, especially on social media, because algorithms show ads based on my interests.

× I just thought that was very beautiful leaflets and those visuals.

✓ I just thought those were very beautiful leaflets and those visuals.

这里leaflets是复数，前面的that是单数指示代词，应该用those来指代复数名词。

× I don't even know that's advertisement.

✓ I don't even know that's an advertisement.

advertisement是可数名词，前面缺少冠词an。

× Yes, I always see those like poster in the railway station or you can see those.

✓ Yes, I always see those like posters in the railway station or you can see those.

poster是可数名词，复数形式应为posters。

× You can see those advertisements in inside the train or outside the train where you can feel like, Oh my God, the world is filled with advertisements.

✓ You can see those advertisements inside the train or outside the train where you can feel like, Oh my God, the world is filled with advertisements.

介词短语中in和inside重复使用，应该去掉in。

× Actually, I do like to advertisement because I think that's a good way of propaganda and I think those advertisements, especially with catchy songs like Jattu Holiday, maybe you know that this is really a villain recently and like those beautiful visuals like leaflet or a poster in the runner, but.

✓ Actually, I do like advertisements because I think that's a good way of propaganda and I think those advertisements, especially with catchy songs like Jattu Holiday, maybe you know that this is really a villain recently and like those beautiful visuals like leaflets or a poster in the runner, but.

advertisement应为复数advertisements，leaflet应为复数leaflets。

× I prefer those advertisements with interesting design, like those beautiful visuals, you know, like those leaflets or the poster in a run about.

✓ I prefer those advertisements with interesting designs, like those beautiful visuals, you know, like those leaflets or the posters in a run about.

design应为复数designs，poster应为复数posters。

× Yes, I always see advertisement on my phone, especially when I'm scroll through my social media and I always feel like out of those is about advertisement.

✓ Yes, I always see advertisements on my phone, especially when I'm scrolling through my social media and I always feel like most of those are about advertisements.

advertisement应为复数advertisements，scroll应为现在分词scrolling，表达正在进行的动作。

× especially when I'm scroll through my social media

✓ especially when I'm scrolling through my social media

动词后接现在分词形式表示正在进行的动作，scroll应改为scrolling。