Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure. Try to use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, make your answer more concise and clear by directly stating the advertisement and why it impressed you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a few advertisements on television when I was a child that caught my attention. For example, food commercials with colorful visuals were very appealing and made me want to try those products.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many filler words. Try to answer directly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, be specific about the types of advertising you see on transport and how effective they are.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements on trains and buses in my city. These billboards are very eye-catching and help companies promote their products effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too long and unclear with many filler words. Try to make your point clearly and use linking words to explain why you like advertisements. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like advertisements because they help me learn about new products quickly. Since I am busy, ads save me time by showing me what is available in the market.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using better linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'these two things' and try to explain why you find these advertisements interesting.

Ví dụ: I enjoy advertisements related to technology and clothing brands because they showcase the latest trends and innovations. Whenever I see such ads, I pay close attention to learn about new products.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to explain how advertisements appear on social media and their importance in marketing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see many advertisements on social media platforms like Instagram and Facebook. These ads are targeted based on algorithms and have become a popular way for brands to market their products nowadays.

× Definitely there were several advertisement which was coming on television as a child, which was really amusing for me and uh, got my attention to buy those things because of that visuals.

✓ Definitely there were several advertisements which were coming on television when I was a child, which were really amusing for me and got my attention to buy those things because of those visuals.

The word 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' because it refers to several items. Also, the verbs 'was' should be 'were' to agree with the plural subject. 'That visuals' should be 'those visuals' to match the plural noun.

× Often those advertisement was for, uh, things to eat and some.

✓ Often those advertisements were for, uh, things to eat and some.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with 'those'. The verb 'was' should be 'were' to agree with the plural subject.

× Definitely, that's our main thing for uh, any, uh, product for marketing.

✓ Definitely, that's our main thing for, uh, any, uh, products for marketing.

The noun 'product' should be plural 'products' because it refers to any product in general, implying multiple items.

× And most of the time it is the billboards on the area from where I live and it's, uh, it's, it's really appealing and get people's attention.

✓ And most of the time there are billboards in the area where I live and they are really appealing and get people's attention.

'Billboards' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'on the area' should be 'in the area'. 'It' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'billboards'.

× Yes, definitely because of advertisement, we got to know the product even a better way because of our daily busy schedule, we cannot uh search out a product uh which we want so by the advertisement uh, if you want something similar like that, so we actually go for uh that thing to buy by just.

✓ Yes, definitely because of advertisements, we get to know the products in a better way because of our daily busy schedule. We cannot search for a product which we want, so by the advertisements, if you want something similar, we actually go for that thing to buy.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' as it refers to ads in general. 'Got' should be 'get' to match present tense. 'Product' should be plural 'products' to match general reference. 'Search out' is incorrect; 'search for' is correct.

× Yes, definitely because of advertisement, we got to know the product even a better way because of our daily busy schedule, we cannot uh search out a product uh which we want so by the advertisement uh, if you want something similar like that, so we actually go for uh that thing to buy by just.

✓ Yes, definitely because of advertisements, we get to know the products in a better way because of our daily busy schedule. We cannot search for a product which we want, so by the advertisements, if you want something similar, we actually go for that thing to buy.

The phrase 'search out' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'search for'. Also, 'in a better way' is the correct expression rather than 'even a better way'.

× I like advertisement, which include technology and also about the clothing brands because these two things are really essential and I'd say I'm really interested in these two things.

✓ I like advertisements which include technology and also clothing brands because these two things are really essential and I'd say I'm really interested in them.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to refer to ads in general. 'Include' should be 'include' as it agrees with plural 'advertisements'. 'About the clothing brands' is better as 'clothing brands' without 'about'. 'These two things' can be replaced with 'them' for clarity.

× So whenever I see that kind of advertisement, I really just stop by and watch it out.

✓ So whenever I see that kind of advertisement, I really just stop and watch it.

The phrase 'stop by' means to visit briefly, which is incorrect here. Also, 'watch it out' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'watch it'.

× Yes, whenever I'm using a social media such as Instagram or Facebook, there are so many advertisement coming up because of that algorithm.

✓ Yes, whenever I'm using social media such as Instagram or Facebook, there are so many advertisements coming up because of that algorithm.

'A social media' is incorrect because 'social media' is uncountable or plural; the article 'a' should be removed. 'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with 'so many'.

× So they that that's the way of marketing for any brand and this is now getting a lot in these days.

✓ So that's the way of marketing for any brand and this is now getting a lot these days.

The phrase 'they that that's' is incorrect and redundant; it should be simplified to 'that's'. 'In these days' should be 'these days' without 'in'.