Part 1
Giám khảo
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Or when I was a child, the most advertisement I remained is the snack. You know, I really loved chocolate. So that is the one I really let me memory.
Giám khảo
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Thí sinh
Yes, I also see some advertisement like some idol, like some water and some snacks on the bus. Let people know them.
Giám khảo
Do you like advertisements?
Thí sinh
No, for me I think the advertisement is very waste my time. I don't like to watch them.
Giám khảo
What kind of advertising do you like?
Thí sinh
I just like the food advertise testing because, uh, I really love the snacks and some delicious food noodles. That is the one kind I really love to look.
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,句子结构混乱,建议加强语法基础,使用更自然的表达方式,并且回答应更简洁明了。
Ví dụ: When I was a child, the advertisement that impressed me the most was for snacks, especially chocolate, because I really loved eating them.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单,表达不够清晰,建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构,并且增加连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements on buses and trains, such as those promoting celebrities, beverages, and snacks, which help people learn about these products.
Do you like advertisements?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表达中存在语法错误,建议使用正确的句型表达观点,并且可以适当扩展理由,使回答更完整。
Ví dụ: No, I don't like advertisements because I think they waste my time and are often repetitive.
What kind of advertising do you like?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和词汇使用不准确,建议使用更自然的表达方式,并且避免口语填充词,使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: I like food advertisements the most because I enjoy snacks and delicious noodles, so these ads catch my attention.
× Or when I was a child, the most advertisement I remained is the snack.
✓ When I was a child, the advertisement I remember most is the snacks.
这里“advertisement”应使用复数形式“advertisements”,因为通常指多个广告;另外,“remained”用错,应为“remember”。建议使用复数形式和正确动词。
× Or when I was a child, the most advertisement I remained is the snack.
✓ When I was a child, the advertisement I remember most is the snack.
“remained”是过去式,意思是“留下”,此处应使用“remember”表示“记得”,且时态应与句子保持一致。
× Yes, I also see some advertisement like some idol, like some water and some snacks on the bus.
✓ Yes, I also see some advertisements like some idols, some water, and some snacks on the bus.
“advertisement”和“idol”应使用复数形式,因为指多个广告和偶像。
× Let people know them.
✓ Let people know about them.
动词“know”后面通常需要介词“about”来引出所知道的内容。
× No, for me I think the advertisement is very waste my time.
✓ No, for me, I think advertisements are a waste of my time.
“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”,且“waste”应用名词形式“a waste”,并且“my time”前需加介词“of”。
× No, for me I think the advertisement is very waste my time.
✓ No, for me, I think advertisements are a waste of my time.
同上,单复数错误,需用复数形式。
× No, for me I think the advertisement is very waste my time.
✓ No, for me, I think advertisements are a waste of my time.
“very waste”搭配不当,应使用“a waste”作为名词短语。
× I don't like to watch them.
✓ I don't like watching them.
动词“like”后面更常用动名词形式“watching”表示喜欢做某事。
× I just like the food advertise testing because, uh, I really love the snacks and some delicious food noodles.
✓ I just like food advertisements because, uh, I really love snacks and some delicious noodles.
“advertise testing”错误,应为“advertisements”;“food noodles”表达不自然,应为“noodles”。
× I just like the food advertise testing because, uh, I really love the snacks and some delicious food noodles.
✓ I just like food advertisements because, uh, I really love snacks and some delicious noodles.
“snacks”和“noodles”应使用复数形式。
× That is the one kind I really love to look.
✓ That is the kind I really love to watch.
“love to look”搭配不当,应使用“love to watch”表示喜欢观看。