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Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, make your answer more coherent by linking ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why the advertisement impressed you with specific details.

Ví dụ: Yes, there was a popular toy advertisement that impressed me when I was a child. It featured a catchy jingle that I used to sing along with whenever I heard it. The toy was a Barbie doll, and I really wanted to own one because of that commercial.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but has some unclear phrases and incomplete sentences. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and complete your thoughts. Also, be more specific about the types of advertisements you see and their purpose.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see many advertisements on public transport, such as buses and trains. These ads usually promote new movies, services, or products. They are strategically placed to catch people's attention because commuters use these transports regularly, so the ads are always visible.

Gợi ý: Your answer expresses your opinion clearly but has some grammar errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, clarify your last sentence to show a positive side of advertisements.

Ví dụ: No, I don't like advertisements because I find them intrusive and disruptive, especially when I watch my favorite TV shows or online videos. However, I do appreciate advertisements when I want to research products before buying them.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammar mistakes. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structures. Also, explain your ideas more clearly and provide specific reasons why you like emotional storytelling in advertisements.

Ví dụ: I like advertisements that use emotional storytelling because they create a strong connection with the audience. These ads often highlight important social issues, which makes me think positively about the message they convey.

× I remember it feature a catchy Jingle that's I would sing along whenever it brought up to me.

✓ I remember it featured a catchy jingle that I would sing along to whenever it was brought up to me.

The verb 'feature' should be in the past tense 'featured' to match the past context. Also, 'that's' is incorrect here and should be 'that'. The phrase 'sing along whenever it brought up to me' is awkward; it should be 'sing along to whenever it was brought up to me' to use the correct preposition and passive form.

× I remembers it was a Barbie dolls.

✓ I remember it was a Barbie doll.

The verb 'remembers' should be 'remember' to agree with the singular subject 'I'. 'Barbie dolls' is plural, but the sentence refers to a singular item, so it should be 'Barbie doll'.

× I was desperately wanted to own it and.

✓ I desperately wanted to own it.

The phrase 'was desperately wanted' is incorrect; 'wanted' is the past tense verb and does not need 'was'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete and should be removed.

× Yes, I could see a lot of advertising on public transport.

✓ Yes, I can see a lot of advertising on public transport.

The modal verb 'could' implies past ability, but the question is about a general present situation, so 'can' is more appropriate.

× There are new movie services or products and I could also see them on the buses or on the trains.

✓ There are new movie services or products, and I can also see them on buses or trains.

The phrase 'on the buses or on the trains' is correct but can be simplified by removing 'the' for general statements. Also, 'could' should be 'can' for present tense.

× They are strategically placed to raise, to draw people's attention as they will be trained constantly so that you will always see something new when you.

✓ They are strategically placed to draw people's attention as they are used constantly, so you will always see something new when you travel.

The phrase 'to raise, to draw' is redundant; only 'to draw' is needed. 'They will be trained constantly' is incorrect; it should be 'they are used constantly'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'when you' and needs completion, e.g., 'when you travel'.

× They disrupt all my quality times when I watching when I watch them.

✓ They disrupt all my quality time when I watch them.

The phrase 'quality times' should be 'quality time' (uncountable). The phrase 'when I watching when I watch them' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'when I watch them'.

× On the other hands, I would like to research the products that I want to buy.

✓ On the other hand, I would like to research the products that I want to buy.

The phrase 'On the other hands' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'On the other hand'.

× I would slide the advertisements that contain emotional storytelling because it will help establish emotional connections with audience and these are very important for the advertisements to highlight some social issues of value and that was really makes me think positively about.

✓ I would like the advertisements that contain emotional storytelling because they help establish emotional connections with the audience, and these are very important for advertisements to highlight some social issues of value, which really makes me think positively about them.

'I would slide' is incorrect; it should be 'I would like'. 'It will help' should be 'they help' to agree with plural 'advertisements'. 'Audience' needs the definite article 'the'. The sentence is run-on and incomplete; it needs proper conjunctions and completion for clarity.