Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达混乱，建议练习用简单句子直接表达观点，并补充具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, I was impressed by an advertisement for preserved plums. It showed how delicious and healthy the plums were, which made me want to try them.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不连贯，缺乏逻辑，建议先明确回答问题，再用连词连接具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements on the subway. They are placed there because companies want to reach many passengers who use public transport every day.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议先明确表达喜欢或不喜欢的观点，再说明原因。

Ví dụ: I like some advertisements because they help me learn about new products. If the advertisement is clear and interesting, I might consider buying the product.

Gợi ý: 回答不具体且语法错误较多，建议用完整句子描述喜欢的广告类型并举例说明。

Ví dụ: I like advertisements that tell a story, like classical Japanese ads. They are beautiful and creative, which makes them memorable.

× Yes, I most impressive advertisement age is a kind of preserved plums which is very South and other advertisement statement is really translate and we we can.

✓ Yes, my most impressive advertisement from my childhood is a kind of preserved plum which is very sour, and another advertisement statement is really translated and we can understand it.

句中“advertisement”应使用单数形式“advertisement”，因为指的是“我最印象深刻的广告”，而非多个广告。中文中单复数的区分不明显，英语中需注意单复数一致。

× Yes, I most impressive advertisement age is a kind of preserved plums which is very South and other advertisement statement is really translate and we we can.

✓ Yes, my most impressive advertisement from my childhood is a kind of preserved plum which is very sour, and another advertisement statement is really translated and we can understand it.

句中“South”应为形容词“sour”，表示“酸的”，原词拼写错误导致意思不明。

× Yes, I most impressive advertisement age is a kind of preserved plums which is very South and other advertisement statement is really translate and we we can.

✓ Yes, my most impressive advertisement from my childhood is a kind of preserved plum which is very sour, and another advertisement statement is really translated and we can understand it.

句中“we we can”重复，且表达不完整，应改为“we can understand it”，使句子完整且符合语法。

× Yes, I have always seen advertisements on the subway because they. They gave some money to separate still advertised their their products into people on the which means it.

✓ Yes, I have always seen advertisements on the subway because they give some money to separate companies to still advertise their products to people, which means it.

句中“gave”时态不符，应为现在时“give”；“advertised”应为动词原形“advertise”或现在分词“advertising”；“their their”重复，应去掉一个。

× Yes, I have always seen advertisements on the subway because they. They gave some money to separate still advertised their their products into people on the which means it.

✓ Yes, I have always seen advertisements on the subway because they give some money to separate companies to still advertise their products to people, which means it.

句中“gave”使用了过去时，但句意表达的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“give”。

× Yes, I have always seen advertisements on the subway because they. They gave some money to separate still advertised their their products into people on the which means it.

✓ Yes, I have always seen advertisements on the subway because they give some money to separate companies to still advertise their products to people, which means it.

句中“into people on the”搭配错误，应为“to people”，表示“向人们”。

× Because I think the attachment so we are not influenced me a lot about the standard of their products and I will buy something.

✓ Because I think the advertisements do not influence me much regarding the quality of their products, I will buy something.

句子结构混乱，“we are not influenced me”主语和宾语混用，应改为“do not influence me”；“attachment”应为“advertisements”；句子应简洁明了。

× Because I think the attachment so we are not influenced me a lot about the standard of their products and I will buy something.

✓ Because I think the advertisements do not influence me much regarding the quality of their products, I will buy something.

“we are not influenced me”中“we”和“me”指代混乱，应统一为“do not influence me”，保持主语和宾语一致。

× Films which is really beautiful, beautiful saying such as classical Japanese advertisement, which is properly.

✓ I like advertisements in films which are really beautiful, with beautiful sayings such as classical Japanese advertisements, which are proper.

“Films which is”主谓不一致，应为“films which are”；“beautiful, beautiful saying”重复且表达不清，应调整为“beautiful sayings”；“advertisement”应复数“advertisements”；“which is properly”语法错误，应为“which are proper”。

× Films which is really beautiful, beautiful saying such as classical Japanese advertisement, which is properly.

✓ I like advertisements in films which are really beautiful, with beautiful sayings such as classical Japanese advertisements, which are proper.

“Films which is”中“films”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，保持主谓一致。